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Urmila.. you know i dont come online at all ! But I I came today so yes, read your chaoter. I still have to read the other chapter, will read and comment.
This one, "the first pain" was amazing. This is the first time I am seeing the point of view of Yudhishthir.! And learning something new is so amaxzing.. discovering his mind set in a much deeper way seems wonderful.
I liked the part where Yudhishthir actually says that what the Upanishads say dont strike us, and is not enough to console us..!! And that voice.. was another master part of your writing. :)
And Yudhishthir's conversation with Pritha... it was beautiful to read, just those words. :) Continue soon!

Originally posted by: Yashomati

Wow Didi, what an update, i was just finding a relaxing sunday to read your beautiful Diary On Yudi...I just don't like that ppl often sympathize with karna, who was wrong and not so bechaara, but ppl criticize dharmaraaj Yudhishthir like anything😭 But you brought out really good points in yudi's diary. I always look up to him as a great king, a loving bro and hubby😊

Thank you very much dear sister 😊 glad that you liked it 😊 I completely agree with your views regarding Karna but don't want to discuss about him in this peaceful thread of Dharmaraj 😊 I will try at my best to change people's view regarding Yudhishthir's character 😊 hope Krishna will help me in doing such a noble work 😊 keep reading! Jai Shri Krishna!

You made me cry, Devika!! So beautifully written!!! And every emotion was so well described that I could feel it playing in my mind!!! Awesome,dear!!! I loved the Dharm ke aansh Pitashri Vidur's love to Aryaputra Yudhishtir!!! I so loved it!! And even Pitamah's part was overwhelming for me!!

Hey Urmi,

Another brilliant update!!
Loved Tagore's lines...so apt for this chapter
You have captured the love of Bheesma for his grandsons so well and the blind king's hesitation...very nicely shown
And Yudi's words at the end...that is exactly what he would have said in that situation I think!!

oh my god,this was so emotional, and finally he is here...I mean the place where he belongs..it was extremely well written,I really liked the part between Yudhishthir- Vidur,I always cherished their bonding and I am so glad you showed it .Will wait for your updates :))