Arjun-Draupadi SS: Result of Patience(last part on Page 12)

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: luv_sakshi
I appreciate the effort you've made to write this!👏👏👏...The writing is neat and understandable..well Done!😃

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Originally posted by: pango
awesome update
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continue soon

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Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues
Great first part. Man she is gonna be pissed when she finds out that he brought a wife with him. Waiting to read your interpretation of the epic scene.

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Thanks a lot for your lovely comments. Here i am doing some changes from the original scene as it is a fiction. Hope you don't mind.

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Hey Beautiful people!!! I am back with the update. I have made some changes according to my imagination, if it hurts anyone's feelings i am sorry. I will post it after 2 hrs at the most as my internet is slow and i need to do few final touches

Edited by Yagyaseni - 11 years ago

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Part 2: Iss janm ka yeh karan

Subhadra with a choodamani? Kintu subhadra toh govind ki sahodari hain. Tatparya govind aur arya ne mere saath prapanch kiya. Srishti ke atyadhik viswasneeya vyakti kya mere saath visvaaw ghat kar sakte hain? Parantu yahan prashn mere viswaas ka hi nahi kadachit hamare tapasya ka bhi ulangan kua hai. ( but subhadra is govind's sister. It means that both the friends cheated me. But can the most trustworthy persons of the world betray me? And also here the question is not just my trust but also our austerity which has been broken now) 😡
Suddenly she heard yudhistir saying do the aarti and maid passing a thali. Then she thought she was not just wife of pandavas but also the empress.keeping that in mind she cannot over react and set a bad example to her subjects. 😡
So she silently started doing aarti and was staring at arjun. Arjun immediately understood that the gaze at him is that of his pranpriye wife and replied through returning his gaze to her. Throughout the aarti he maintained the eyelock and so did panchali. After completing the aarti she fid tilak without breaking the eyelock. It was when she did tilak srjun and panchali realised where they are and what is the situation😳😳. After that she hugged subhadra and took her with her to the palace without speaking to arjun. Arjun in mind thought " my dear panchali didn't change a bit over time" and he was the only one who wasn't suprised by hear reaction. Infact he was happy that she didn't change her attracting personality which was his weakness, always.Thinking about their first meeting and marriage he retired to his chambers leaving everyone surprised once again. 😊

BACK TO DRAUPADI'S CHAMBERS,

Subhadra," Jiji, yatra ka sampurn samay arya apki soundarya aur vyaktitv ka varnan kar rahe the toh maine soch ki koi vyakti sarvgun sampann kaise ko sakta hai. Parantu jab meine ne aap se beith kiya tho mujhe laga ki woh sarvada uchit cah rahe hain. kyonki aap soundarya aur vyaktitv mein sarva sresth hain."(Sis, arjun was speaking about you throughout the journey and i was thinking that how can anyone ke good at everything. But when I met you i realised he was speaking the truth. You are really the best in both virtues and beauty) 😳. For a minute she forgot that she was supposed to be angry with him and smiled and then suddenly reminded herself to be angry at him. Subhadra saw through this and excused herself and left from there.

TBC

Precap: Arjun And Draupadi Together!!( Romance is in the air!!)😳😳

Sorry if it didn't reach upto your expectations!! Please comment and like guys!!😉

Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago

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Will update tomorrow night guys!!!!

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Originally posted by: mothiaai
gud update
update faast plz

thank you for your comments, will update tommorow

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I have written it completely in English, hope you don't mind

Part 3:

Night

Draupadi was sitting alone in her chamber forgetting that today was prathma(tithi, first day of the fortnight), which was beginning of the year with Arjun as husband(practical). arjun knew this and informed subhadra about this and left for draupadi's chambers. He didn't need permission to go in so he went straight away inside and sight there surprised him. Draupadi was sitting in darkness, silently. Arjun thought" she has the heat, glow and purity of yagya. No wonder she is called Yagyaseni. She looks so beautiful in the moonlight even without any jewellery." He calls out to her,"panchali", his voice showed the love, attention, respect and concern he had for her. Draupadi was startled hearing arjun's voice at that part of night, her face showed it all to her all understanding husband.

"Pranpriye, are you forgetting that today is prathma, start of the year with me as your husband, or you remember it and ignoring the fact because you are upset with me?"

"Arya, i don't remember it and if i do, i surprised that you are here, leaving your priya subhadra alone"

"Panchali, try to understand, Subhi wanted to marry me but bhrata balram wanted her to marry Duryodhan. Madhav too wanted me to marry her, how could i decline him. And also i have no shame in front of my love to accept that i too loved Subhi. But at the same time hoped that you understood your Arjun."

" arya, you know i wanted to make you father but which could not happen still I accepted it because i understand you. But today not only my trust but our austerity was broken which is a valid reason to be angry i guess" she replied with a voice which showed her feelings which could only be of hurt but not of anger.

Arjun had no answer for this so he left it to Madhav to pacify Krishnaa in this matter. He asked, " priye, you are angry with me right, vent it off and don't hide it atleast from me, as before being a husband i want to be a friend with whom you can share anything."her heart felt lighter hearing his words full of love.

" arya, how can i show my anger to you? I mean how can i punish you?", arjun was amazed by her innocence and respect towards him even while being angry.

"You being silent and away from me itself is the biggest punishment, panchali"

She wanted to hug him but something stopped her, which she didn't know as she didn't wanted to know as it was anger.

He sensed it and immediately took her into a tight embrace, before she could move away from there. Panchali found herself melting in his embrace but didn't oppose it as it was the safest, calmest and lovliest place in the world for her.

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Guys, do you want the next update which will have the passionate night of them? Please comment as i want an answer for this question.

Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago

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luv_sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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@ Yagyaseni:

Two Awesome Updates!👏..Loved reading both of them..😃..the Parth-Panchali scene has come off really well..😉..And i Love the way Parth calls Panchali "Pranpriye"..😳😳..wish they showed something similar on the show too! And ur description of Panchali's beauty in the moonlight was so Apt!👏👏👏..i can imagine Queen Draupadi glowing!😊

Do continue with ur next update soon!😳😊