Arjun-Draupadi SS: Result of Patience(last part on Page 12)

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey beautiful people here!!!!

This is my first work on IF. This Short Story is based on the past day world of Arjun and drauapdi(original). The Backdrop is that Arjun is returning back from his 12 year long exile along with Subhadra. This story will portray the emotions of draupadi and Arjun, how she reacts and How arjun pacifies her, etc( I can't reveal the whole plot here!!!!) as I feel they would have shown in reality. I apologize for any mistakes and I would like to clear that I respect both of them and i hope this story will not hurt any body's feelings. Should I continue guys???!!!!!!

Love,

Yagya

(15 likes to chahiye, mazak kar rahi hoon, will update very soon)

this is going to be a romantic one, hope you don't mind!!!😳😛

Index:

Prologue- scroll down

Part 1-rahega atal mera mann-page 2

Part 2-Iss Janm Ka yeh Karan-Page 4

Part 3-page 4

Part 4-Page 5

Part 4(B)-Page 12

Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago

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RosChel.Lobster

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Posted: 11 years ago

Go ahead girl..this sounds quite interesting 😃

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luv_sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Looking forward to reading it! So please do post soon!😳

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Here is the

Prologue:

Samragyi Draupadi was spending last 12 years as her love Rajkumar Arjun was spending. Eating minimal food, sleeping on the ground and not wearing jewelry shows her love towards Arjun to everyone around but the pain which she was undergoing by this separation only her heart and love(arjun)can understand😭😭. Daasi comes running and tells the beauty in sorrow that" Samragyi prasanna ho, Rajkumar arjun dwarka se prastaan kar chuuke hain aur woh Indraprastha shighr lautenge. Samrat Yudhistir ka sandesh hain ki taayaari swagat ki karen rajkumar arjun ki aur.(Maharani, Prince Arjun departed from Dwaraka and will arrive soon. Emperor Yudhistir wants you prepare for the arrival him and"Draupadi cut in between " Govind ki. avashya "( Govind. Sure) and gave the only haar she had with her right now. Bheem who was passing by, saw the whole situation and was walking towards Draupadi when Nakul said" rukiya Bhratha. Panchali ko ham nahi samjhapaenge , keval bhrata arjun hi iss asambhav karya ko sambhav karene me sakasham hai".( We cannot make Panchali understand. Only Arjun is capable of Accomplishing this impossible task)

"Kintu Nakul, Panchali toh atyant krodhit ho jayegi aur peedit bhi"😕( But nakul, she will be very angry and sad hearing this)

"Parantu yeh uchit samay nahi hai bhrata ki Bhrata arjun ka satya Panchali ke samne prastoot ho" 😒( Bro, this is not the right time to reveal the truth)

"Uchit hai, parantu hame bahot kaam karne hai abhi , prastaan kare?'( correct, but for now , we have a lot of work so we will think of it later)

On the other side, Panchali was beautifying her although she was flawless to present herself in front of her Arjun, thinking of him😳 without knowing what the time has in plan for her, Arjun and...

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I know it was not good but please give me suggestion to improve and please comment and like as they matter a lot to me. If you want me to PM you please send a buddy request!

Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago

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Uma90

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww another os on ArDi!!!! I am always present wherever there is anything related to them 😆😳

Lovely prologue!!! Plz continue... I am very much interested to read more!!👍🏼😳 Pm once ur next update is up..😊

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Uma90
Aww another os on ArDi!!!! I am always present wherever there is anything related to them 😆😳
Lovely prologue!!! Plz continue... I am very much interested to read more!!👍🏼😳 Pm once ur next update is up..😊

Thanks a lot for such lovely comments. Very encouraging for me. i will update soon!!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Guys, please suggest this SS to your friends.:D I will update as soon as possible. Please leave your lovely comments dears.

thank you

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richarius

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Posted: 11 years ago

It's an amazing idea and I'll be waiting to read ur story. Pls update in English as I can't read and understand Hindi pls. It's request

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: richarius
It's an amazing idea and I'll be waiting to read ur story. Pls update in English as I can't read and understand Hindi pls. It's request

Thanks a lot. I am sorry about that dear. Next time I will write it in English too. 😉