Arjun-Draupadi SS: Result of Patience(last part on Page 12) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

Good one dear...
u reminded me of the star pkus promo. .. especially those last lines...
pls continue...


Thanks a lot, Di. Will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oooh!😃 The Prologue is so Tempting!...can we please have have the detailed update soon?😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks a lot. I am sorry about that dear. Next time I will write it in English too. šŸ˜‰


Thanks so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_sakshi

Oooh!😃 The Prologue is so Tempting!...can we please have have the detailed update soon?😳


Thanks a lot for such lovely comments.Here comes the update dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1:
English translation in bold

Draupadi was getting ready in a red saree and white jewellery." White was arya's favourite colour hope it remains " . Suddenly it striked in her mind that Arjun will remain with her for 3 years as it was decided recently by Yudhistir and arjun didn't know about it 😳 She started thinkinghow the valourous warrior, Gandhiv Dhaari arjun will be at love and romance and what his reaction would be when will come to know about the three year thing. Priyamvada, her childhood friend enters and teases says, " Samragyi, rajkumar arjun yahan upstit nahi hai to aap maan mein raas leela rachna rach rahi hain aur jab woh saamne toh sharma jati hain. Aap kripiya apne vichaar dharon ko door kar unka swagat ka aayogan kar punah unka hriday jeetiye anyatha unke priya patni ulupi ya chitrangadha ho jayenge" ( when arjun is not here you mentally romance with him but when he is there you become shy. Now keep aside your thoughts and prepare everything for his welcoming for you have to win his heart again to be his favourite wife as there are ulupi and chitrangadha) šŸ˜‰
Draupadi blushes a bit listening to it but then anger takes over and she says " main aryaputra arjun ki priya thi, priya hoon aur priya rahoongi. Parantu iss parivartan ko maan dete hooye main unhe atyaadhik prasanna karoongi apne prem se aur soundarya se." (I was arjun's favourite and will continue to be. But respecting this change i will see to it that he will be completely allured by my beauty and love) 😳
Priyamvada starts laughing realising the inner meaning as the answer to her dialogue and draupadi joins in. They start making plans to impress him unware of the reality and time when the announcer announces the arrival of Arjun. Leaving everything aside and priyamvada shicked by her spontaneous reactiob she runs to the main gate to be the first person to meet him. She reaches there and gives a big welcoming smile to him when reality strikes her. "Arya arjun ke kanth pe var mala aur maathe pe tilak" (a var mala and tilak for my husband) in a low voice she questioned unknown of the fact that her beautiful hazel eyes expressed everything to her dear husband, " arya?" Then she saw subhadra appear from behind him.😭
To be continued...
Please comment and like!!sorry for such a boring update will try to give better ones in future.
Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: richarius


Thanks a lot. I am sorry about that dear. Next time I will write it in English too. šŸ˜‰



Thanks so much
My pleasure dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely people in there, 400+ views aur itne kam comments ko dekhke mera self-confidence low hogaya. Please aap comment kijiye kyonki isse viswaas badhta hain aur achche likhana chahiye ye bhavana utpan hota hain. isiliye please comment guys.
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Yagya
Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I appreciate the effort you've made to write this!šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘...The writing is neat and understandable..well Done!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great first part. Man she is gonna be pissed when she finds out that he brought a wife with him. Waiting to read your interpretation of the epic scene.


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