Karnandavas os-kahani mei twist-LAST part updtd pg 11

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Nikhita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: riti4u
its a cute OS😳.. good job :)

thank you so much dear😊

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whatthewhat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

too cute...it would be lovely to see these type of scenes na? 😆

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Madhura

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Nuckts, its such a beautiful story, very hilarious, light hearted!!

Loved the way all are brothers and in a team, to see masti/

Was literally laughing thru all parts, thoroughly enjoyed/

Loved way pandavas accepted him and KaJu part too, very well u wrote sticking to each character...

great to see u write parts so fast, cont soon.

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Nikhita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: narangi314
too cute...it would be lovely to see these type of scenes na? 😆

i know i always imagined these scenes can you believe that?😆

thank you 😊

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Nikhita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Madhura..
Nuckts, its such a beautiful story, very hilarious, light hearted!!
Loved the way all are brothers and in a team, to see masti/
Was literally laughing thru all parts, thoroughly enjoyed/
Loved way pandavas accepted him and KaJu part too, very well u wrote sticking to each character...
great to see u write parts so fast, cont soon.

thank you so much dear

i am glad you liked it

i really wanted pandavas n karna to be together but fate😭

so what imagination is key to the impossible na😉😆

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JazzyM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Really sweet. Loved the part when Karn, asks where is your weapons and the Pandavas squirm, trying to give an answer...happy times. Karn, calling Draupadi as Choti...that was an awesome touch becuase it shows he has forgiven her for the wedding slight. Continue soon.

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Nikhita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Really sweet. Loved the part when Karn, asks where is your weapons and the Pandavas squirm, trying to give an answer...happy times. Karn, calling Draupadi as Choti...that was an awesome touch because it shows he has forgiven her for the wedding slight. Continue soon.

thank you so much for commenting i am trying to show karna's character as someone who has pain felt during swayamvar but doesn't hold any anger for her now,its a huge change n this change is brought by vrushali😊