Karnandavas os-kahani mei twist-LAST part updtd pg 11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: riti4u

its a cute OS😳.. good job :)

too cute...it would be lovely to see these type of scenes na? 😆

Nuckts, its such a beautiful story, very hilarious, light hearted!!

Originally posted by: narangi314

too cute...it would be lovely to see these type of scenes na? 😆

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Nuckts, its such a beautiful story, very hilarious, light hearted!!

Loved the way all are brothers and in a team, to see masti/

Was literally laughing thru all parts, thoroughly enjoyed/

Loved way pandavas accepted him and KaJu part too, very well u wrote sticking to each character...

great to see u write parts so fast, cont soon.

Really sweet. Loved the part when Karn, asks where is your weapons and the Pandavas squirm, trying to give an answer...happy times. Karn, calling Draupadi as Choti...that was an awesome touch becuase it shows he has forgiven her for the wedding slight. Continue soon.

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Really sweet. Loved the part when Karn, asks where is your weapons and the Pandavas squirm, trying to give an answer...happy times. Karn, calling Draupadi as Choti...that was an awesome touch because it shows he has forgiven her for the wedding slight. Continue soon.

I agree, me too, thats true, imagination helps there/

So funny, suji ka halwa and Bheem pulling leg of his jyesth bhrata kehke ki suji toh sabzi hain... I am still laughing 🤣

I couldn't help but ask..
When will u update?