Karnandavas os-kahani mei twist-LAST part updtd pg 11 - Page 6

Originally posted by: -Jamy-

Let me tell this is a wonderful fiction you're writing. I've completed all parts in one stretch. What people seek throughout their life is the element of happiness. I can feel the sweet element of happiness in your simple, cute story. It is one of a kind that made me smile throughout reading. I really loved it very much...

How come there are aloo paratha in Dwaapara yuga?
Also how did Vrushaali say "wo humare mohalle mei ek pooja ka aayojan kiya hai".
Both aloo paratha and mohalla made me laugh a lot!😆

Keep writing...👍🏼

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Nikhita...finally..u upd. Brilliantly written..just wow..loved the plan and confession. mamashree..karna arjun..wow.
Mayb for fun they both continue arrow skills..and include yuddishtir too in it..or later plans.
Love bonding of six pandavas.

Originally posted by: hpatgiri

Wow... Karna-Vrushali Confession was sweet 😳.
Loved the filmy style teasing of the Pandavas towards their would-be-'Daring bhabishree'..😆

LOL

Shakuni tries another Prapanch and mess up Pandavas ❤️ life 🤢 but sadly it backfires 😭 and he ended up being a guinea pig to KaJu's brotherly spardha... 😆😆😆. I wonder how his favourite bachche (Dury) will come to his aid now...😆😆.

Yes would love to see some Madhav's naughtiness here too.

Do update soon...

Originally posted by: shavii

awesome funny part😆
bechare pandav sab ko tumne , made them get beating from elder brata 😆

vrishali was fun

sab ko mardiya😆😆😆

meine sirf idea diya u made it others😆

now it will be funny when shakuni mama get punished

it shd be like brothers giving ideas to karn and arjun to keep competition of bow and arrow of who being better😆😆 and winking to each others so that mamashri ko punish kar sake😆😆 one freezing and one firing😆😆 one making rain one making heavy sun.. shakuni mama ka band baj jayega...😆😆 beech beech mein nakul and sahdev checking hoep shakuni is fine and making them saying inspite of all attack mama shri is fine so both have to work hard on competition😆

and when mamashri tries to call mere bachhe bheem throw laddo inside mamashri mouth 😆 to make him shut but says mamashri have laddo and be healthy 😆😆 all brothers have fun...
something like that

oh god soo weird ideas 😆
bring madhav to judge the sparda😆😆 bring subhi also... 😉
continue soon

Awesome Dear Karna's confessing was really sweet 😳❤️!! and Vrishu attacking Pandavas was 🤣😲

Originally posted by: santhiyaa_J

Awesome Dear Karna's confessing was really sweet 😳❤️!! and Vrishu attacking Pandavas was 🤣😲

What a sweet and a hilarious update dear, sorry don't know your name.

Gosh! The scene of pandavas turning into goons, Sahadev getting hit and Vrushali throwing dust, hilarious. If she had been part of the war, Karna's army might have won. The part of KaJu winking at each other was exquisitely written. It showed brotherhood...As it doesn't exist in actual MB between KaJu, this is greating posting.

Originally posted by: kalyani_shiva

What a sweet and a hilarious update dear, sorry don't know your name.

Pandavas as goons for uniting Karna and Vrushali simply awesome 👍🏼.and I love this line

Aur rang mein bhang daalne ke liye.. Shakuni mama.

Ab mata Kunti strict sasu maa mat bana do 🤣

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Gosh! The scene of pandavas turning into goons, Sahadev getting hit and Vrushali throwing dust, hilarious. If she had been part of the war, Karna's army might have won. The part of KaJu winking at each other was exquisitely written. It showed brotherhood...As it doesn't exist in actual MB between KaJu, this is greating posting.