Karnandavas os-kahani mei twist-LAST part updtd pg 11 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg i was expecting u to feed aloo parata in hands of bheem to karn😆😆😆😆
btw alo parata dwapar yug par tha😲😲😲😲
chalo it was damn fun with ladoo they did pooja 😉 pandavs following...😆😆😆

finally draupadi in precap is she is sad😲

i was just laughing reading it... time for sleep hehee ma ki lala sab ke sab

i was expecting karn not sleeping and walking and brother going and teasing him more and more 😆😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JazzyM

Gosh! You had me smiling non stop with your scenes of ladoo and bhim hugging karn. Seriousness is prominent in MB but you are giving us, the readers, good fun to read with the twist. I too agree, the Pandavas sound more care free, the match making part is super...

thank you so much i always thought that pandavas's life is shown so serious always ,but atleast in star mahabharat it was shown that pandavas also had fun like teasing bheem n all😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shavii

omg i was expecting u to feed aloo parata in hands of bheem to karn😆
btw alo parata dwapar yug par tha😲
chalo it was damn fun with ladoo they did pooja 😉 pandavs following...😆😆😆

finally draupadi in precap is she is sad😲

i was just laughing reading it... time for sleep hehee ma ki lala sab ke sab

i was expecting karn not sleeping and walking and brother going and teasing him more and more 😆😆😆

continue soon

😆 i don't know whether aloo parathe were there in dwapar yug or not?
but come on bhrata bheem hai to experimental dish to banta hai na😉 i have heard that bheem invented shrikhand traditionally
hmm.. khilwa doongi ab karna ko wo bhi,thoda to uske baare mei socho,already vrushali kuch na kuch usse khane ke liye deti hai aur upar se bhrata bheem ka khana dena matlab wo kamse kam do din tak khana na kha paaye😆
ya sleeping was a good escape for our karna😉😆
thanks for commenting😊
Edited by nuckts - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting for ur next update 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shavii

waiting for ur next update 😆

i'll update that soon dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can u please post it in English too I can't understand Hindi 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4:
while returning pandavas are walking quite behind karna
and are whispering
bhee-dekha maine kaha tha na parathe ghar ke hi lagte hai
nak-arre paratho ko chodo bhrata bheem,wasie bhabhi kitni sundar hai na
sahd-ha nakul bilkul tabhi to humare jyeshth ko zyada samay nahi laga unse prem hone mei
arj-ha kintu jyeshth ab bhi hichkicha rahe hai
bhee-to wo to hoga hi apne hridaya ki baat batana koi saral baat hai,bahut saahas chahiye hota hai
naku-fir uss maamle mei bhabhishree hidimba ki to koi spardha nahi kar sakta😉
sahdev,and arjun laugh with nakul😆
bhee-kya kaha!(angrily)😡
naku-arre bhrata bheem mai to unki taareef kar raha tha
bhee-fir thik hai
after karna arrives at HP
draupadi-pranipaat jyeshth bhrata
karna-pranipaat draup..pancha.. huh mai to kiss naam se pukaru
drau-jo aapka man kare
karna-thik hai baalpan se meri ek iccha thi ki meri ek choti behen ho jisse mai pyaar se choti bulau kya tumhe yeh naam chalega?
drau-ji awashya,waise bhratashree kya aapne aryaputro ko kahi dekha hai?
kar-nahi to kyu kya hua?
dra-pata nahi wo..and she spots them aree. aryaputro kya baat hai arya aap sab bhi jyeshth bhrata ke saath soorya prathna ke liye gaye the?
karna-kya tum sab kab se mere saath ho?
pandavas-wo..(oh no!)
naku-wo hum aapke saath thodi hi the bhrata wo hum kaha the yeh bhrata arjun aapko bataenge
arju-hai?mai! wo ha jyesth bhrata hum aisehi shikaar karne gaye the
kar-sach mei arjun
bhee-are jyeshth arjun kyu jooth bolega?
kar-to fir arjun ka dhanush kaha hai aur aap sabke shastra kaha hai?😉
sahd-wo hum sab le jaana bhul gaye😕
all 3 look at him like(are you serious is this gonna convince him?)
dra-kya sachme aarya?
bhee-panchali shikar karne ke liye mujhe kissi shastra ki awashkata nahi hai ,sab shikar maine kia tha yeh teeno to aisehi khade the
to handle the situation 3 of them say yes
later at early morning:
bheem hears some noise
he goes and to his fear the noise was from kitchen
bhee-yeh kaun hai jo mahal ke rasoi ,meri rasoi ki shaamat laana chahta hai?
kar-mai hu anuj bheem
bhee-arre jyeshth bhrata aap?yah kya hua? kuch chahiye aapko mai doo?
kar-nahi wo cheeni nahi mil rahi hai wohi khoj raha tha
bhee-kintu iss samay aap kya pakka rahe hai?
kar-wo suji ka halwa
bheem gets an idea that this might be for his would be bhabhishree
bh-hmm.. aapko banana aata hai? kintu suji to sabzi hai uska kis prakar halwa ban sakta hai jyeshth?
kar-radha ma ko maine wo aksar banaate hue dekha hai,wo kehti hai ki jab gajar ka mausam na ho tab suji ka halwa banaya ja sakta hai
bhee-accha fir mujhe bhi sikhaiye
kar-muje usko banana to aata hai kintu kitni cheez kitni matra mei leni hai yeh nahi aata(proportion of ingredients,he knows the technique)
bhee-wo mai aapko bata dunga bhratashree
and they make that with karna's technique and bheem's knowledge of proportion
and that dish is served for breakfast as a dessert
arj-yeh kya bhrata bheem aaj nashte mei mitha?
bhe-aaj yeh mitha jyeshth ne banaya hai
yudhi-waah jyeshth bhrata yeh bahut swadishth hai
after breakfast bheem goes towards arj,naku,sahd
bhee-muje lagta hai jyeshth ne yeh bhabhishree ke liye banaya hai
arju-kya sachme fir to aaj bhi hum jyeshth ke peeche awashya jaaenge
nak-ha bilkul unka yeh chupke chupke waala prem prakarana dekhne mei bahut anand milta hai
sahdev-to aaj hum fir jaaenge
draupadi-kiski kaha jaane ki tayari ho rahi hai?😲
now all 4 are caught
precap:
drau-arya putro aapne mujse itni badi baat chupai jyeshth ke baare mei ahahaaah(she cries like when arjun wins her in swayamvar n they got the the cottage that baby type cry)😭
bhee-panchali shant ho jao hum chahte hai ki jyeshth ka vivah jald se jald ho isilie yeh sab kar rahe the
drau-mere paas ek upay hai⭐️
4-kya?😕


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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg omg it was soo funny🤣
hidimba ki baat aya and they make fun and when he was told she was praised he keeps quite 😆😆 funny scene

when bheem rescues his brother from panchali wow👏👏👏 he is best brother...

suji ka halwaa😲😲😲😲
hehee they made it together it was damn funny
i was laughing imagining it

nice nice ab bhabhis shree ko patane keliye ek bahu nahi actually ek devrani helping to bring jethani 😆

continue soon
Edited by shavii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its a cute OS😳.. good job :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shavii


omg omg it was soo funny🤣
hidimba ki baat aya and they make fun and when he was told she was praised he keeps quite 😆😆 funny scene

when bheem rescues his brother from panchali wow👏👏👏 he is best brother...

suji ka halwaa😲
hehee they made it together it was damn funny
i was laughing imagining it

nice nice ab bhabhis shree ko patane keliye ek bahu nahi actually ek devrani helping to bring jethani 😆

continue soon

thank you
ya i know devrani to bring jethani in the house😉😆
ab to baat romance se progress hokar family love pe pauch chuki hai😆

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