An Encounter with Karna (OS)Last Part on Pg23 - Page 15

Originally posted by: viji2111

It was so touching.

Amazing job Ritika. Waiting for the next part.😊

Originally posted by: riti4u

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Thank you Gaytri for being always so encouraging. It is writer's delight to read detailed comments on his/her work. I am glad that you liked it.. Yeah it is exactly how i would feel when this man will just pop up in front of me...and thats how i have described him...

You read 3 parts... Yeah 3rd was my blabbering... but dont worry ..4th and 5th are full of his words... his inner feelings at least the way I have felt it...😃

Looking forward to see your comments for next 2 parts as well...😳

Originally posted by: riti4u

Thank you panchu ...glad you liked it😊

^^ Aww.. I hope you didnt mind my personal opinion on dury...See your Arya didnt agree...😳

Originally posted by: riti4u

^^ Aww.. I hope you didnt mind my personal opinion on dury...See your Arya didnt agree...😳

Originally posted by: panchaali

no I did not mind, coz some version says this..😊

but I don't think he thought Durya completely Adhrmi

that's why quoted the last the part where he appreciated my one true Devar Ji 😃

Originally posted by: riti4u

lolz.. panchu..in last part i was talking about karna... I think you meant first part where he praised dury for standing up for him...

Yes I was talking about that part, the portion, which I quoted 😊

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

No No Why Will You End This !! Please Continue...Its Quite Interesting !!!

The Update Was Brilliant As Usual, You Described Karna Very Well !!