An Encounter with Karna (OS)Last Part on Pg23 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
I read part now now! 😲 Am lazy these days! forgive me Riti for that! 😆
Well I was expecting what's gonna happen... all throughout as I was reading and when I read the last part.. I was imagining the entire scene.. If Karna actually stood before you what would I do! Here I went to my own fantasy world! 😉 Then again reading your last part I had big wide smile on my face... 😃 😃 😃 kinda like that smiley! Will keep commenting as I read every part!

Part 2!!!
Its such a feel good way of writing style!
am Enjoying so so much!!!
Crisp and intense! ⭐️
When you and Karna were conversing... I smiled as he smiled and also felt the pain he felt when his face saddened! What you wrote is so true.. even though he died, he always comes back alive...he is our hero who never dies! Eternal Hero! A great human being!
Though its just your imaginary piece of writing am jealous of you for having met Karna! 😆

part 3
I know even when sun sets, suryaputra will have radiance of the sun that you will still feel the light!
part 3 was so short with just your blabbering! 😆
What i loved most bout this part is Karna's patience in silently listening to you! ⭐️
Edited by ..dreamygatz.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woaaw Riti di...fabulous post...luv it to da power of infinity... "Sometimes our life pushes us on the edge ..and to just survive we take on whats right in front of us... Sometimes we dont know the outcome..we just know that this is the only way out...Right or wrong whatever it is...'' Exactly that happen with karna...sumtyms life is so cruel with us that we r unable to determine whats right or whats wrong...the thing which appears right to us...we think that is our destiny when no options left...aftrall he was a human being ''A friend who didnt question my caste ..who didnt question my birth.. who didnt ridicule my abilities... He just stood there like a solid wall.. for first time in my life...there was someone who was speaking for me... and not indulged in throwing insults..'' N thats was his destiny... '' But then there was noone around to tell me that i was wrong.. " Neither his own mata too.. "I did mistakes.. in my rage...in my revenge..in my hatred for pandavas..I crossed a line one day..when I called a woman..." He stopped .. his eyes reflected his guilt...'' I too wish that perhaps he wld nvr cross dat lyn...then perhaps situation wld be somehow different... "My enemies were my own blood... my own kin...It was much easier hating them when I had not known this truth'' Life has always played with him n thats so cruelly... ''when you know time has already gone for you to come to other side...which actually belonged to you'' Very well said...yes tym has already gone to come to his brothers side n thats too cuz of kunti mata who nvr thought to speak da truth to da world throughout her lyf... Your writing is Mindblowing as i said earlier too...U wrote karn's feelings n emotions vry beautifully...Hats off to u di...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

I read part now now! 😲 Am lazy these days! forgive me Riti for that! 😆

Well I was expecting what's gonna happen... all throughout as I was reading and when I read the last part.. I was imagining the entire scene.. If Karna actually stood before you what would I do! Here I went to my own fantasy world! 😉 Then again reading your last part I had big wide smile on my face... 😃 😃 😃 kinda like that smiley! Will keep commenting as I read every part!

Part 2!!!
Its such a feel good way of writing style!
am Enjoying so so much!!!
Crisp and intense! ⭐️
When you and Karna were conversing... I smiled as he smiled and also felt the pain he felt when his face saddened! What you wrote is so true.. even though he died, he always comes back alive...he is our hero who never dies! Eternal Hero! A great human being!
Though its just your imaginary piece of writing am jealous of you for having met Karna! 😆

part 3
I know even when sun sets, suryaputra will have radiance of the sun that you will still feel the light!
part 3 was so short with just your blabbering! 😆
What i loved most bout this part is Karna's patience in silently listening to you! ⭐️

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Thank you Gaytri for being always so encouraging. It is writer's delight to read detailed comments on his/her work. I am glad that you liked it.. Yeah it is exactly how i would feel when this man will just pop up in front of me...and thats how i have described him...
You read 3 parts... Yeah 3rd was my blabbering... but dont worry ..4th and 5th are full of his words... his inner feelings at least the way I have felt it...😃
Looking forward to see your comments for next 2 parts as well...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Simantini_M

Woaaw Riti di...fabulous post...luv it to da power of infinity... "Sometimes our life pushes us on the edge ..and to just survive we take on whats right in front of us... Sometimes we dont know the outcome..we just know that this is the only way out...Right or wrong whatever it is...'' Exactly that happen with karna...sumtyms life is so cruel with us that we r unable to determine whats right or whats wrong...the thing which appears right to us...we think that is our destiny when no options left...aftrall he was a human being ''A friend who didnt question my caste ..who didnt question my birth.. who didnt ridicule my abilities... He just stood there like a solid wall.. for first time in my life...there was someone who was speaking for me... and not indulged in throwing insults..'' N thats was his destiny... '' But then there was noone around to tell me that i was wrong.. " Neither his own mata too.. "I did mistakes.. in my rage...in my revenge..in my hatred for pandavas..I crossed a line one day..when I called a woman..." He stopped .. his eyes reflected his guilt...'' I too wish that perhaps he wld nvr cross dat lyn...then perhaps situation wld be somehow different... "My enemies were my own blood... my own kin...It was much easier hating them when I had not known this truth'' Life has always played with him n thats so cruelly... ''when you know time has already gone for you to come to other side...which actually belonged to you'' Very well said...yes tym has already gone to come to his brothers side n thats too cuz of kunti mata who nvr thought to speak da truth to da world throughout her lyf... Your writing is Mindblowing as i said earlier too...U wrote karn's feelings n emotions vry beautifully...Hats off to u di...

Thank you so much simu.. As I was telling earlier, its a delight for writer when there is such a detailed comment ..I am so touched..🤗..
This is just an attempt to bring out his feelings.. which probably are not understood much.. I dont know why I feel connected to him...but its strange that I do..In Mahabharat he is the only character whose stories I love to write...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
yes exactly di...those who dnt understand his character n always blame him...should read ur post ...such touching n well written...n its mah pleasure to read such of ur awesome stuffs...pls update soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Simantini_M

yes exactly di...those who dnt understand his character n always blame him...should read ur post ...such touching n well written...n its mah pleasure to read such of ur awesome stuffs...pls update soon ...

thanks again...sweetz...will surely update soon with the climax😉😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riti4u


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thanks again...sweetz...will surely update soon with the climax😉😳

okie...ritidi i couldnt send da b'day wish yestrday due to too much studies...bt today i wl surely pm u..
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^sure you can send it today
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Posted: 11 years ago
as usual wonderful update👏

lovely para 👍🏼
There was a man in front of me who chose to brave that situation in life with such dignity and grace..and He didnt fail anyone ..neither his friend..nor his brother..but yes perhaps he was not fair on himself then...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: panchaali

as usual wonderful update👏


lovely para 👍🏼
There was a man in front of me who chose to brave that situation in life with such dignity and grace..and He didnt fail anyone ..neither his friend..nor his brother..but yes perhaps he was not fair on himself then...

Thank you panchu ...glad you liked it😊

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