kaju OS : the vows of divinity (part 12 :pg 11) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome reading again this update loved it pls update soon
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@patrarekha thankuu..sooo much for being with me from the start.. ... 😊 😊 😊
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Edited by sri_160799 - 11 years ago
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This so cute. Love their bonding and wish so petting like that actually happened..
Please can you pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This very good os..I really like to how you discribe Karna and Arjun relationship..without knowing that they are sibling but deep in their heart they care each other..^^
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----------------part 6-----------------

the five of us entered the sabha were the dice game was going to be played.. arjun bheem nakul and sahdev were angry with their brother they had tried to convince him using all means and methods but they had failed they dint want their eldest brother playing dice with dhuryodhan ... duryodhan would've planned something for sure ... kakashri vidur while delivering the message itself suspected some ill act ... this further worried arjun..his eyes sought out the familiar figure of angaraaj and found him standing with duryodhan he looked at his eyes trying to find out if dhuryodhan had planned something...but angaraaj was careful to ignore eye contact with him ... arjun moaned they had planned something otherwise karn would've easily met his eyes...arjun are you alright bheem asked ..arjun forced a smile on his face and nodded.. bheem smiled and believed him..like always... Arjun sighed his hands were shaking he had never been so nervous in his life .. even when he had to fight with drupad .. when he was but a child...there was nothing other than excitement in him..not fear...he hadn't been nervous when the faithful eyes of madhav encouraged him to try pierce the target in panchali's swayamnvar..not so worried when he had to run away with subhadra invoking duryodhan and balarams wrath onto himself..he just wanted to go to some corner and hide...he looked at angaraaj again pleading him with his eyes to stop whatever was going to happen .. he looked at him slowly guilty molten gold like eyes met rich sapphire .. he turned away again..arjun swore mentally...nothing bad would happen bhishma drona kripa all were there..most of all angaraaj was there .. the protective man he had been during their trip..he wouldn't let anything happen to them ..right ?? then why was he sooo...scared ???

"Saavdhan pandu putr badha rahe hain" the dwarpaal announced we all swung around and the paandavas entered the rajya sabha in all their glory...yudhishtir was all smiles and greeting everyone innocently...karn almost felt sorry for him..almost..bheem arjun nakul and sahdev dint look to happy ..who am I kidding ??? they were looking furious..duryodhan looked at him and said look at them all the five of them like deer caught In the lions den..today finally I can make the pandavas bow down to me...and you he smiled at me arjun will be yours..your very own personal slave..karn trembled and looked at arjun his skin was abnormally pale and his hands where shaking ... he could practically hear his brain trying to figure out what was going to happen here..karn mentally laughed at that though his worried eyes brought him back to reality though his eyes were scanning the sabha trying to find someone...karn realized just a second too late that it was him .. dhananjay looked at him..he couldn't meet his eyes not now..dhuryodhan my best friend all his future is based on him not making eye contact with arjun right now..he turned away..they walked inside with the whole sabha's attention on them they were about to take their seats..karn had never felt soo guilty in his life not when the had constructed the house of lak..never... he was watching arjun's progress carefully only arjun worried him..dhuryodhan turned to look at him and said yudhishtir is easy..he's way too innocent , bheem can't get physical in the sabha so im not worried about him either..nakul and sahdev listen to their elder brothers im only worried about arjun he muttered to him..karn nodded absently .. he looked back at arjun and their eyes meet...arjun's eyes widened when he met his..he knows..karn thought he dint know how arjunmanaged to find out .. only 2 words were floating through his mind now..he knows..he knows


the actual game is only in the next update...sorry guys

Edited by sri_160799 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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another lovely update... please continue soon... this is getting interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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----------------------part 7---------------------

im suffering from anti-computer crisis guys...so another short update..only karn pov...

The game had started and it was obvious to everyone that yudhishtir was losing...stop playing yudhishtir karn moaned mentally stop playing..all my wealth...all my gold...everything I own..karn gave a terrified look to arjun who was by now almost hyperventilating ... I stake ...you have nothing left to stake samraat shakuni said with a laugh...samraat ?? dhuryodhan asked ...he has no wealth no kingdom...no house even how can he be samraat...dhuryodhan's hundred brothers laughed .. karn felt like hiding and some corner and pretend this was all a very very bad dream...I STAKE SAHDEV !!! there was dead silence in the room...sahdev sakuni smirked very well ..what is your stake dhuryodhan...I cant stake any of my brothers dhuryodhan said firmly...whatever the pandavas lost in todays game will be returned dusshasan said...dhuryodhan agreed...karn's hands were shaking...they played sahdev lost...the brothers laughed in sweet revenge..karn knew what was coming..on ho!! Not him please not him..he was begging every god he knew..stop this madness..he prayed...but the game went on..now what is his highness going to stake shakuni asked .. karn felt like strangling him...NAKUL yudhishtir said softly his voice shaking ... No one even questioned him this time .. all the pandav brothers had accepted their fate...There your highness I have won nakul too...now what will his higness stake ?? you staked the sons of madri without a second thought but maybe the sons of kunti are too dear to you to stake he said...yudhishtir trembled his hands shaking he said in a chocked up voice ARJUN...I STAKE ARJUN...karn couldn't stop the soft strangled moan from escaping his lips...he covered his face with his palms..he couldn't bear to see this unbelievable game go on any longer...he needed 12 karn noted shakuni need 12 more moves to doom arjun for life...there samraat, arjun is our slave too..shakuni said with a happy laugh..bheem looked furious and took a protective stance in front of arjun but arjun gently pushed him away...im devraaj indra's son and a small dice game cant make me a slave he whispered softly to bheem...and before bheem could say anything arjun walked past him and stood with nakul and sahdev amidst the other slaves...dhuryodhan walked toward karn...he gave me a victorious smile...my friend im gifting you a slave today..Arjun he said with a smirk...I forced a smile on my face and nodded weakly...was this actually happening?? I looked over dhuryyodhan's shoulder at arjun who was already staring at me...as our eyes made contact I was reminded of one day in the mountains...

It was cold...cold climate equals to grumpy arjun though he loved the rain ...he hated it wen snow got stuck in his hair..it gave him a headache he claimed to karn... karn would just laugh and nod as usual...it further annoyed arjun that he could never feel cold .. arjun used to sit beside him wrapped up in 5-10 blankets while he used to happily be relaxed..they were trying to cook today...and arjun was snappier than usual...worse when arjun wasn't in a good mood the food will be even worse than usual..both were pathetic cooks..all arjun could make..that tasted how it actually should was coffee...arjun could live drinking that alone..but coffee wasn't enough for sustenance..so they both began too cook... they were trying to make some ordinary rotis...it had ended up with flour covering their entire bodies..and no food for the night ...he dint know why he remembered that now but he would rather imaginane those delicate moments than what was happening now...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I truly love all the emotions you portray so beautifully. We all know thus epic saga so well but this brings yo life people aspect and their feelings
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was a quick update😃...always love reading Karna's POV.. I am really enjoying this KaJu bond here... please do continue...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@js1234 @riti4u thanku soo much guys..it means a lot that u have been following and reading me story..kudos to u dears 😛

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