kaju OS : the vows of divinity (part 12 :pg 11)

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in mahabharat my fav characters are arjun and karn and i love their bromance as shown in starbharat...this is just for fun... so yeah ...yeah i edited the name i was jobless and wanted a grander name for my kaju

i sooo dont deserve this arjun muttered..what you think im having fun here?? karn snapped ...that is a matter of perspective arjun muttered ...karn rolled his eyes...

they both had gotten into a fight AGAIN in the hastinapur rajya sabha..the king had found only one punishment fit for them and that was too send them away for a camp for 10 days to the himalayas...arjun had been furious but his amused brothers had packed for him and sent him..karn fared a similar fate with duryodhan .. so now both of them were trecking up the mountains together..

.its cold karn muttered .. would his highness like a heater arjun asked sarcastically ...arjun ?? yes ?? do me a fovour and shut up !! i dont do favours to the likes of you..im gonna strangle you karn said dangerously..oh im terrified...arjun replied rolling his eyes AAARRRHHH!!!! karn screamed how do ur brothers put up with you ?? the same way duryodhan puts up with YOU arjun cried out...okay calm down !! we were supposssed to reach the peak right .. well take two separate ways arjun said .. that is the only good idea u have ever come up with in your life.. im honoured arjun muttered..they were just about to split ways when arjun leg slipped he cried out as he fell over the edge...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg that's amazing actually u r amazing carry on plz
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awesome...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
continue fast
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Originally posted by: Patrarekha

omg that's amazing actually u r amazing carry on plz


awww.. :) thanks dear.. :D :D
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Originally posted by: sayee

awesome...👏
continue fast

thanks dear this is my 1st attempt really thanks :D :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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-----part 2-----

karn felt his heartbeat stop as he felt rather than saw arjun falling... NO!!NO!!NO!! was going around on his head but his feet were rooted to the spot...bright blue eyes flashed in his memory as he sprung into action..he dint know why he felt this undexplainable emotion to protect his arch enemy to bring him back and hold him tight and say he'd never let go..but he just did...HE JUMPED

he caught arjun just before he fell his divine armour taking care of the rest ...arjun was unconscious .. karn dint know he was crying until he saw a drop fall on arjuns face and he stirred.. he got up and rubbed his eyes .. karn couldnt help but smile at the childish action ..what happened he asked him ... karn for the first time in his life was speechless...why?? was going around on his head .. why did he feel this unexplained connection with arjun ?? why dint he just let him die so that his life.. his best friend duryodhans life would've gotten so much simpler..Why couldnt he just let him die and earn the title of the worlds best archer ?? why hadnt he cried out in happiness once arjun had fell and rushed to tell the good news to duryodhan ?? a small voice that sonded so like rajmata kuntis anwered him maybe ur not that bad maybe u like arjun better dan duryodhan because he is a follower of dharm..he ignored that voice but something told him he wouldnt be able to do that for long especially having gudakesh with him..but at the moment the only emotion karn could feel was relief and undiluted happiness to see those blue eyes looking at him again..

u fell off the cliff karn muttered .. i did ?? arjun asked incredulously .. yeah karn muttered he suddenly found his boots very fascinating..and u..u saved me arjun asked softly..karn could only nod..there was an awkward silence...when arjun finally looked up and said the word karn would never have expected him to say..."thanks"




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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww its really sweet but karna saving arjun? mmm i have mixed reaction to this but elder bro saving younger is very sweet to imagine
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its really good ! continue plz
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update soon and add page no of updated part
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really wonderful idea .. loved it.. please do continue😊

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