Arjun: The Final Journey (OS) - Page 2

I consider myself fairly cynical but that touched my soul. You should do this professionally.

Originally posted by: -abhi-pundir-

U made me cry😭 sooo beautiful 👏 simply touch my heart 😊

Thanks abhi. I would take that as a compliment :)

Originally posted by: frappie

<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">I am Paarth paanchali admirer bheegi.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">I kind of sympathize for Draupadi and love respect adore or I would say I am proud of paarth.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">They are an epic couple of mahabharath.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">I have always wanted to read really nice romantic and adorable things about them but unfortunately that never happened.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Never the less I am happy with every little bit written about them...</font>

I think a lot of us are PP fans here. Their silent love story actually makes them more intriguing. Ved vyas was one clever writer. He has alluded to 5 different ways a husband and wife can have a relationship with draupadi and the pandavs as examples.

With yudi: it was a relationship of a king and queen. Both very pious, dharma and giving. Their kingdom needed a couple who believed in serving and they fulfilled their roles as the First Lady and king very well.

With bheem: it was a playful and expressive relationship. He was her goto person in any crisis and bheem seldom failed her.

With Arjun: it was that silent deep but unconditional love that didn't need expression. Sirf ehsaas hi kaafi tha.

With the twins : it was more on a friendly or a motherly relationship- she was like a guide for them at every step and they respected her pov.

Again, hats off to Ved vyas for giving us 5 aspects of a man and woman relationship.

Originally posted by: Rushika

It has touched my soul Bheegi. ..my eyes are welled up with tears..it's simple but very affective...I was restless from quite some time but this OS brought peace to my heart 😊

U r commendable👏Please do write few more OSs as such 😊

Thanks Rushika. That's very sweet of you. I will definitely write but need the right inspiration. :)

Beautifully expressed bheegi. Made me emotional. Great story. ⭐️

It was magical!!! This story had the perfect mixture of pain n love n that's what makes it so beautiful. It doesn't seem like an OS to me, it's crafted like a poem...I m nt able to look fr words to appreciate this...just tooo good!!!

I wasn't going to cry ... but the ending got me .. very badly 😭

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks Rushika. That's very sweet of you. I will definitely write but need the right inspiration. :)

I might write one with Malini-Brihnmala in agytavas...let me see

ur welcome bheegi n Malini-Brihannala sounds fun but would love an OS when Malini blasts at Brihannala after Bheem rescues her from Keechak 😊

Rush that is more like Brihannala blasting at Malini for thinking Brihannala had an easy enjoyable life.

u made me cry dear!!!! 😭
the confession of parth is sooo painfull!!!!!

awesome Os dear!!! truly amazing!!! 👏