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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Medha.S

Rush that is more like Brihannala blasting at Malini for thinking Brihannala had an easy enjoyable life.

but u said she was furious at him n he just neglected her...so when did he blast at her? 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a beautiful OS Bheegi! It brought tears in my eyes and touched my soul! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Rushika

but u said she was furious at him n he just neglected her...so when did he blast at her? 😕


Because she was furious at him for neglecting her and her reasoning for thinking so being she adds that Brihannala is passing her days so nicely enjoying her time, not caring about Draupadi's pain.

Like he is Brihannala, and it is supposed to be a casual convo. between the dancer and the hairstyler but it is not. I guess you can call it passive-aggressiveness, he kind of bites back at her.
To the people who think of them as malini and brihannala having a teasing casual conversation.
But as we know that it is hubby-wifey, you can see it as a passive-aggresive arguement between them.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very well written i have always wondered if arjuna always knew that Draupadi had a soft corner for him
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Archanapajit

👏👏👏bheegii awesome writing...I could picturise each and every moment you described..

[Quote]The day I labeled my beloved as a charitable gift- an alm, a daan-I knew I had committed the biggest sin in my life
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loved your language...keep going..


Thanks Archana. As a woman, none of us liked it when he addressed Draupadi as a 'dawn' Wonder if it was acceptable in dwaparyug. I always wonder how Draupadi would have reacted to that statement.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: amritat

Awesome OS!!...👏

I am crying...I wish Panchali could hear this...I wish Parth could say all this to her...
Yes, indeed Parth's biggest mistake was not his pride, but the objectification of his wife...A woman who loved himr the most, n got humiliated the most, in return for keeping the unity between the Pandavas intact...

For us kaliyugis that's definitely an insult. I always wonder how Draupadi reacted to that statement in dwaparyug
I would like to say this today, Bheegi.
Irrespective of what others say, I really believe that Draupadi loved Arjun only.
It is my belief, n I am not claiming anything. I was not there, at 3000 B.C. So, I cannot claim anything or say anything for sure. However, this is how I feel, n this is what I believe with all my heart.
I don't say this in the other threads, coz then people will start debating n arguing.
But being a woman, all I can say is, it is NOT possible for ANY WOMAN, to love FIVE men, let alone, equally.

No doubt. I think even Ved Vyas gave subtle hints. 1. Her reaction his marriage with subhadra 2. Her reaction when Arjun leaves them all for Shiv tapasya- how sad she was and badly she missed him 3. Of course Yudi's statement on their last journey


I know that many people say that, love is infinite, n all. But I believe, that the love between 2 lovers is different from the other forms of love, n this different love cannot be infinite, n shared with multiple people.
She certainly admired, cared n respected all her husbands. She was dutiful to all her husbands. But the thing that we call "love", she had that only for Arjun. It is my belief.

I think Ved Vyas, through Draupadi showed us how a wife plays different roles in her husband's life. With yudi- it was more like a ardhangni (shared responsibility for the household), with Bheem (she was a princess he pampered and pleased), with Arjun (it was the passionate lover) and with twins it was a mother like relationship. In the day and age, one woman has to fulfill all these roles with one man😆
She loved her 4 other husbands. But she was "in love" with Arjun only.
And there is a difference between the two.
Anyway, sorry, if I hurt anyone...But this is what I feel.
N Bheegi, this OS is heart-wrenching.
Please write more on Parth-Panchali.
You are good with words, n are capable of writing great stories.
Please do write more on the forbidden love story of Parth-Panchali.

Thanks for your wonderful comments...I'll try my best to do justice to this iconic pair
Ved Vyas did not say much about the depth in their relationship, but these OSs will certainly fill the void.

That's why people still love to write various versions of this epic and one never gets tired of reading them

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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: thearcher

I consider myself fairly cynical but that touched my soul. You should do this professionally.


Thanks the archer...I'm humbled😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Cotswolds

Beautifully expressed bheegi. Made me emotional. Great story. ⭐️


Thanks cotswolds. The credit goes to these iconic characters- they still evoke that response from us 5000 years later
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Paro95

It was magical!!! This story had the perfect mixture of pain n love n that's what makes it so beautiful. It doesn't seem like an OS to me, it's crafted like a poem...I m nt able to look fr words to appreciate this...just tooo good!!!


Thanks a lot Paro...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Medha.S

I wasn't going to cry ... but the ending got me .. very badly 😭

Bittersweet ending .. or not?


Thanks Medha...I'm happy she got exclusive rights to him in heaven😆
I've tweaked this ending based on POI where Chitra Banerjee made Karna and Draupadi unite after death😕 I prefer Arjun and Draupadi's milan😃

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