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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Ha ha ha! He threw the dagger and it hit Shakuni! You have made Dhritraashtra a knife weilding machine!🤣 I mean in every chapter of yours he throws it and it hits someone or something! Total funny! Loved it! And the last few days, I missed this yaar! Really missed it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Kalpana

Visit my KMMK thread above - it's now completed Arjun-Subhadra's wedding
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
@ Vrish - Reading it right now! Already reviewed two parts!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
My first contribution here.
Mahabharat from "if's" pov.
After visiting, "if", certain views are changing about MB.
All the characters seem different. Duryodhan the saint, was provoked by Pandavas including Draupadi for his deeds. He was such a nice, humble person. Pandavas wanted a share to rule. He was brain washed by his elders. Only his mama Shakuni supported him. He was only supporting his blind father who was actually a sharp shooter (shooting knives). He did sacrifice a lot by giving some land to his Pandava bros. He gave that land on a pre-condition, after you all are settled down, we'll meet over a game of dice & will decide again who should keep your land. If I win, will give you some more land to develope & loose again in a game of dice. If you win, then you'll give me half of your land. He was so generous because he wanted his bros to be happy in life. People often misunderstand Duryodhan who was born to be a great ruller. Why why why the MB text paints him in a different way? Any answers?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
^^ Read the 1st post of this thread. It explains everything.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lol..Hilarious.šŸ‘ That means if,

A = Shakuni, Dharma = Duryodhana.

then taking Duro bhaiya as Saint, point comes: A plus Dharma = ADharma.

Therefore, It was all and all our Mamaji's fault, kasam Duryodhana's Saint-ness🤪 ke Ourr Duro bhaiyya was bakkasur.. Sorrie-y I meant bekasoor innocent thei in all those Disastrous Mishaps!? 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

I've decided to have a change over the whole Dice story since Yudhisthira's idiocy on the situation and Shakuni's foolery had made a pretty sour deed to make it look Disgusting on the whole Courtroom situation. Pardon me, If the content end up being a too without logic. lol.




Duryodhana wasn't pleased at all with the Fact that, even after all this too Pandavas had a shelter to live, a Kingdom to rule. Be it his Envy or the Devil that sat upon his Brain to lead his Evil deeds, It all was like, even having a Grand Kingdom to rule he wanted to see Pandavas weak-kneed at any Cost. The result was pretty predictable, He Along with his Brain ( Judging by his Actions..) which He didn't had in true sense, called for the the shrewd and cunning Mama Shakuni.

And, Wow! Mamamia! Uncle arrived as soon as His so dear bhanja called for him... Ehh! After years, Oh well, he was loyal dude to his dear bhanjas, so How couldn't he Arrive?


Both Bhanje and Mama finished whole stock of coffee beans on their thoughts, a sleepless night indeed. Alas! The planning would have been done during afternoon snacks, but Everyone isn't a Tenali Raman or a Birbal to have their Intelligence on teeth. Nevertheless Shakuni found a way to trap the Pandavas. He was a Kasparov in Dice, of course more than skills he prefered to Cheat. Hence holding his Confidence on Dice, he along with Bhanja Duro decided to have the Lead one among Pandavas to Challenge for a Dice, having the Fact in his mind that a King can't refuse a Challenge by another King. That's it! What's more to net a plan. That's how they've decided that, Yudhisthria would be the Scapegoat![P]

[P]They've used pretty naive Vidura to send the Challenge, so that the Dharma Deva Yudhisthria gives a nod easily by reviewing Vidura's past criminal records, you Bet.. A saint guy he was. But, after giving the Newsletter of up coming Dice Olympic, Vidura alerted them immediately saying He smells a rat on this proposal, also the Gambling isn't a Wise thing to do. But, rule is a rule, no matter who in which birth have made them. Yudhisthira accepted the proposal. (I need a hand to facepalm, but both of them are Busy writing this esssay!)




Very punctual Yudhisthira was, before the Titan clock can hit the Bell, he was all present there. Audiences were some Kings from the Neighbourhood to see, though Yudhisthira expected a crowd since the letter referred it as Olympic.(Oh a word Shakuni made to Have the whole Gambling thing presented in a prestigious manner to lure.)



After a short tweet lengthy not so warm conversations, the Game of Dice begun. First Turn, Yudhi's prized possession according to him, the Golden chain of high crate, he stacked. A grenade blast! Shakuni's cheaty tricks made him to lose that.
Next turn, they Mama-Bhanja duo urged him again with his belongings, and... Urgh! He lost that too. During Yudhi's lost hatricks per hatricks, he lost his Chariot, Charioteer, Servants and so on to say, include his Own possed Dress! (Waaait!Don't even think that, It was some Yudhi's vastra-haran, Dress was just a saying.)



Yudhi had nothing to loss at event, since all of his recent belongings got lost in Derby race. Shakuni and Duryo shifted their desires from material to Yudhi's personal life. Oh the Earth may Shatter! He was so high on the Gamble that He lost his Kingdom, His brothers, Himself and His wife! Duryo now decided to make Draupadi, the wife of pandavas as Their servant, a step that He felt would be more humiliating for the Pandu gang. He sent a Daasi to call for her, but Draupadi's one attached to legal question made him to lose his Temper, that in end he ordered his brother-cum-sidekick Dushasan to have her in the court by her Hair. He literally did, made her present through her hair. An unrelated order came from Duryodhan to Do the Vastra haran of Draupadi, the Silent courtroom was in a Shock yet couldn't utter a word against him.



Dushansan approached towards Draupadi to strip... But before that Draupadi blowed a Punch on his Face much like a Filmy hero, but Hey she was better than Them and Broken Dushasan's wisdom-tooth. Okay! I got the Point.. I forgot to tell you that She was the Mary Kom of that era, I wonder how didn't Pandava's knew about this merit before. Anyway, I'm already afraid with this fierce avatar, hence won't narrate more about her Gussa! Hence rest of the Action sequence, you've to imagine all along. (by the way, the Punch one is been inspired from a real event.) and, Guess what! Now who is Going to accompany her in this Kill Bill, her 4 husbands, yup! Remove the name of Yudhi, he's already unconscious since Draupadi's sudden enraged avatar blasted TNT on his head, he is Already Behosh in all this.



as I can't cover the happenings on little courtroom battle, in a longer Description (Samjha karoh, I'm lazy yaar.) hence I'd give a short commentary on the Event:

*. Bhima broked Shakuni's other leg, while throwing Dushasan on the other side of the wall hoping for a Sixer, but that end up being a four after hitting Shakuni's leg, crossed the boundary.

*. Vidura took Dhrita on his room before the Smack from Draupadi took place on Dushasan, hence he couldn't heard the Sound of Dushanas scream! Also hence He wasn't present during the Climax mashups.

*. Nakul and his other Brother, being a rookie couldn't do much todh-phodh on the event, but by mistake End up hitting his Unconscious brother Yudhisthira, hence Its quite sure, He'd be in Coma for a long time like K serials. (Don't blame me, He deserved after his Gamble-ing act.)

*. The King, who were present during dice game, as audiences, fleed away seeing Draupadi's Rani Laxmi Bai avaatar, hence they too weren't present at the event. (They need to, I don't want to write a climax of another Pher Hera Pheri movie, they were too respective to do that, imagine.)

*. And.. And.. Oh I forgot, Arjuna made the Duryodhana Ghayal with his Arrow and Bow... Any many more.. Etc, etc, etc.



okay, Now after a Huge mash, blast and All... They've decided to pay Duryodhan's deed a pay, by doing Dhoti-Haran... And, Bhima included Dushasan, also suggested the name of Shakuni too.😈 But, Shakuni started giving his Age value, and It shouldn't done to him and all blah blah blah. Rest is on Readers imaginations since I couldn't think more. By the way, Draupadi's character been inspired from G3's Dabbo.






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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Tool, great work!!!

Actually, this serial is competing w/ me again - I have Karna as Pandu's son in KMMK, and in the serial, they're showing Karna showering Pandu w/ flowers. If he did that, why would he oppose Yudhisthir & Arjun?

I think I'll do something on Karna's special love for Pandu - twist the serial even more 😈 Obviously, KMMK ain't enough šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
OMG Tool! You had me stitches from the start to the end! Enjoyed the work totally! This is way better than the real MB! (Especially turning the vastra haran scene on its head)! Loved it! Please keep writing more!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Vrish.

Tool, great work!!!

Actually, this serial is competing w/ me again - I have Karna as Pandu's son in KMMK, and in the serial, they're showing Karna showering Pandu w/ flowers. If he did that, why would he oppose Yudhisthir & Arjun?

I think I'll do something on Karna's special love for Pandu - twist the serial even more 😈 Obviously, KMMK ain't enough šŸ˜†

Oh teri! Aur twist karoge toh hum main MB ko hi bhool jaayenge! šŸ˜†
Just kidding! Go ahead and give your best! I am eager to read it!

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