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Arijit

@Arijit007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

well, you introducedsubhadraa too, that's great.

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Vrish

@Vr15h

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

I'm avoiding cousin marriages, which is why I gave Subhadra a different father than Vasudev. As a result of this, Arjun no longer has any blood relationship w/ Subhadra, and so their marriage will be healthier.

Edited by .Vrish. - 11 years ago

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Surya Sundarraj Sriram

@Surya_krsnbhakt

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Okay your updates are great as usual! And yay! Subhadra is now Yashoda and Nanda's daughter?! So she is more closely related to Radha than to Krishna! (SO to speak). But Vrishaketu, that means Subhadra is no longer Krishna's sis! Foster sis yes, but no real sis!

Anyhoo, so Drupada is defeated already! Wow! You're Mahabharata is faster than the TV's!😆

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Just read the first part! Loved your writing style!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

I read till Chapter 11 and I totally loved it! Your imagination rocks! The way you put up the twists are unbelievable! I totally loved your work! I even read the serial version till 11th page and let me tell you I prefer your version to the serial especially the dialogues! Especially the dialogues said by Ambika, Ambalika to Satyavati when she comes to remove their jewellery was too good. And Amba's dialogues to Satyavati was simply awesome! Was laughing non stop! You really are a good writer! And then varaali put up her work and that was also good! Loving this AT!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

I just read the remaining part and I am still laughing! I loved the your interpretation of serial! Bheeshma v/s Shakuni in game of dice? ???? LOL! NOw that is something I want to see! As one of your reviewers said, "Hey Bhagwaan!" Your interpretation is too weird! But hey, better than what they are showing in the serial. Now I am eagerly waiting for next part of KMMK and your interpretation to today's episode! Loved your work!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

i read from part 12-14 and they are hilarious...ur imagination is awesome...👏👏👏👏

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Read the part fifteen! Loved it! Especially Yudisthir's part was really interesting! Really excited to know how this KMMK will pan out! Thanks for providing us with this awesome piece of work!