Mysterious Savior. Thread #2part14page35dt 20/2/19 - Page 7

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb update dear

Loved it

THANKS

Originally posted by: bhumi1492

Oh so madhu didn't loss her memory

Originally posted by: janumkrk

you know what princess you are making me greedy for updates of this ff...

Hay...MERI JAAN

can you make it weekly 2 updates. pls

THATS A LITTLE DIFFICULT


and talk between aston rishab and madhu its omg types i loved it.


THANKS

i dont like my rk sending her away but atlast u gave the twist.
HE WONT

after drinking that green potion also madhu have her memory it is because of that bite rk gave.

LETS SEE

or someone changed the potion... alina or ??????

HMM...

anyways am happy she remember him.

madhu i give u a idea, u get seductive potion from alina so that aston will take control of rk for few hours.. after that u know what i mean

AAHAAN




WHY U WANT TO KNOW ANYWAYS ASHTON KNOWS WHAT TO DO WITH HIS MATE IN ABSENCE OF RK'S CONTROL.

😳

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Originally posted by: maithu_

First of all

Thanks for the PM dear!

YOU ARE WELCOME DEAR

Loved this part as the battle between heart and mind and wish was so visible and lovely!

THANKS

Wished Aston took power over RK and told don't drink the juice but anyways it didn't work on her LOL

😊

Happy that Madhu is fully as herself and no one else!

Coming to your questions!

You are writing superbly!

THANKS

As you said yourself grammar and spelling mistakes only! Rereading will help to reduce it!

I WILL TRY

Just put through words what you desire and the art is in it only ;-)

😳

Waiting for the next part dear!

UPDATING SOON

Originally posted by: Srivalli.t

Awesome update!!

Loved it.

THANKS

Thanx for the pm:)

YOU ARE WELCOME

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Mind-blowing update...
loved it...

THSNKS

I think green juice didn't work...

YEP

looking forward to know...
can't wait...

UPDATING SOON

Originally posted by: annukumari007

Awesome update dear.. 👏
Loved it so much..

THANKS

Waiting for the next update..

UPDATING SOON

Please continue soon..:)

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Wow Superb update dear...

THANKS

Rk wanted madhu to be safe and wanted to protected his pack also...

YES

But he took a wrong decision by tried to send his madhu away from him and ashton...

TRUE

Finally madhu confessed her love to rk and their romance was so hot😳 Rk looses his control and he tried to mark her☺️...

😳

I am sure madhu's memory is not erased and i think she has some powers like rk...

LETS SEE

I love rk and ashton's convo

THANKS

always...Eagerly waiting for the next part dear...

UPDATING SOON

Really excited to watch rk's reaction...Please update soon dear...

YEAH

1)which part you feel good in this update?

I love madhu's confession and rishbala's roamnce😳

😊

2)which part is worst?

I liked this whole part...I hate abhay's part only but he luckily he didn't came in this update...

😊

3)what I have to improve except language and grammar?

I like ur way of writing but check the update once before posting it(to check typing errors)

Ofcourse

4)what happened with madhu ?

I am sure, madhu didn't lost her memory and i think she got powers...

Nice guess

Originally posted by: Riddhimaa...

Thanks for the pm