Mysterious Savior. Thread #2part14page35dt 20/2/19 - Page 6

most importantly can you make madhu to flirt with ashton please.

Ashton

gr8 part..

Oops...girls.he is a wolf..😃

Originally posted by: janumkrk

after reading this ff i have few thinks running in my mind.

1. how to elope with ashton

DONT DO IT RK... WHAT I WILL DO😭

2. to ask my princess to make a separate update where there is only ashton and madhu.

THAT I WILL DO

3. make season 2 3 4 5 ... of this ff

OMG

4. am gonna kill you... ( from when i read last part am blushing often thinking about ashton and my mom giving me a doubtful look)

🤣

Originally posted by: magicalmirage

Oops...girls.he is a wolf..😃

so what... i dont mind, he is proud of it and me too..

what is your problem... he is a wolf i accept but my wolf.

if i can get rishab as a added offer y should i say no.

were + wolf i.e rishab + ashton its a super combination...

Originally posted by: janumkrk

most importantly can you make madhu to flirt with ashton please.

Originally posted by: aishu007

Ashton

Originally posted by: magicalmirage

Aishu...you too?

why not..?? I'm the first one to fall for him 😳

Originally posted by: aishu007

Ress

unres..

Before giving the review I'm gonna answer to the question in two ways...

THANKS

Firstly in guttery way

😆

1)whichpart you feel good in this update..??

Well.. All the Ahem-Ahem parts like Rk getting turned on, Ashton sniffing (it was kinda funny)& of course Rishbala make out session 😉😳

I KNEW THAT😊

2),which part is worst ..??

When suddenly they stopped making out to my utter disappointment..😭 I hoped he would mark her & do something more 😉

AAHAAN

3)what I have to improve except language and grammar?

Well.. Just think there is a guttery minded reader is here who is desperately waiting for Rishbala romance so you can often write some streamy romance of Rishbala😳😉 (Lol.. I know sometimes I talk like a pervert but only in the matter of Rishbala 😳)

DEAL

4)what happened with madhu ?

Maybe she didn't loss her memory (don't have a naughty answer for this)

PARTLY TRUE

Now the decent side.

1)whichpart you feel good in this update..??

Madhu's love confession to Rk..

HMM

2),which part is worst ..??

Well not the worse but I didn't like Rk's decision to erase Madhu's memory.

HE IS CONCERNED ABOUT HER

3)what I have to improve except language and grammar?

I love the way you write chechi.. Simple way of writing but make us readers so desperate to read with the twists & turns in the story.. ..

THANKS..I AM HONORED

4)what happened with madhu ?

Same answer may be she didn't forget anyone..

NICE GUESS

*sigh* Now review :)

This is a shocking surprise..

Naan pinakka..😭 You didn't say you were going to update when I msged you thank God this time I was able to grab my 1st position 😃

😕

Well I love my Ashton more.. If there was any way to separate the wolf from Rk I would have done it & run away with my Ashton giving Rishabh to Madhu..

😆

Hehe.. He is a sweetheart.. I love when Ashton take over Rk sometime.. My romantic wolf.. So dreamy..!!

Rk.. You better hear your wolf's words how dare you even think of erasing Madhu's memory.. Even if you plan to leave her we won't let you.. Rachana chechi won't let you.. Hena chechi..??

OFCOURSE

Oh my.. Madhu baby.. I loved your trick.. I know why you asked for Ashton coz he is the most romantic wolf & won't resist you .. Don't worry Madhu Ashton won't let Rishabh go away from you & he will pursue Rishabh until he agress with him.. Hr can't always switch him back..

YEAH

Why everyone was wondering looking at madhu at last ..?

FIND IT IN NEXT EPISODE

Waiting eagerly for the next part ..

Update soon..

UPDATING

Thanks for the pm chechi :)

YES ARE WELCOME