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Hey Guys 🤗
Here is my new story Kashish.

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"Rishabh, She is Fine right now. We had sedated her. She is sleeping right now." She said walking out of her Patient's room. Rishabh nodded his head hearing, she looked him for a second and Placed her hand on his shoulder.

"Ahaana, Let me have a word with her." Rishabh said getting up. Ahaana looked him and shook his head in irritation.

"I told you many times. You can't Rishabh! You are not allowed to meet her." Ahaana said sighing loudly.

"I have to meet her, Ahaana. It is of my Concern. She is carring my Child! Someone might wanted to hurt me through her. Ahaana, Anything could be possible! What if she is intentionally trying to hurt herself!" Rishabh said as he pushed the door and walked inside to find the woman in 20's sleeping calmly. He frowned seeing her peacefully sleeping.

"Rishabh, You are not allowed to interact with your surrogate." Ahaana said closing her eyes furiously.

"Bend your Rules for me, Ahaana. I don't care!" Rishabh said irritatly.

Madhubala mourned in pain, clasping her head, she opened her eyes to find herself in the hospital.

"Is it still paining?" Rishabh asked getting up from the sofa. Madhubala looked him and gently nodded her head.

"Tell me exactly what happened!" Rishabh said in angry tone. Madhubala looked him still confused with whatever happening around her.

"Say. Something!" Rishabh pinched his tone more high. There are thousands of problems in his life and top of it, his surrogate is making his life more complicated. Madhubala lowered her head as her eyes filled with tears realizing that she has done something wrong. Rishabh looked confused at the women sobbing silently.

"Rishabh! Let her breathe! She is already in pain and top of that you are scaring her." Ahaana said as she walked inside the room and turned to madhubala. "Madhubala, He is Rishabh Kundra. You are carrying his child. He wanted to have a word with you." Ahaana said gently. Madhubala looked at Rishabh and nodded her head.

"Madhubala, listen carefully! I know this child is meant nothing to you but for me, this baby is my life. My whole world. I am warning you better behave like a 2 months pregnent women and if anything. I said if anything happened to my child, I will make sure you don't have to wait for your death to enjoy the pleasure of living the hell." Rishabh said angrily. Ahaana looked at her friend with wide eyes.

Madhubala looked him for a second and brust into silent tears, getting scared. Rishbala looked at her thinking whatever he said was that breaking for her.

"Rishabh!" Ahaana glared him as she passed the tissue to madhubala, trying to calm her.

"I am... sorry." Madhubala said softly still hiccuping. Rishabh's hard face turned soft seeing her. "I was very... Careful.. But yesterday... I.. Was sweeping the floor and... Then I floor... Was wet and... I slipped.." Madhubala said trying to explain him while still sobbing.

Rishabh frowned hearing the word Sweeping!
"Wait. You were sweeping the floor! What the f**k?" She looked at her in complete shock. Madhubala looked him confused and nodded.

"What made you do sweeping?" Rishabh asked furiously coming closer to her.

"I... I... I..."

"Say something!" Rishabh screamed in anger. Ahaana pushed rishabh little away realizing that he might can hurt her patient.

"Madhubala! What makes you do such tiring work in such a condition. Don't he pay you much?" Ahaana asked gently.

"Paid?" Madhubala asked shocked. Rishabh and Ahaana looked at madhubala confused seeing her shocked expressions.

"What is happening here?" Rishabh asked throwing his hands on air.

"Madhubala, You are carrying his child that's why he is paying you expenses every month. Don't you get that money?" Ahaana asked in serious tone.

"I never knew I was getting paid." Madhubala said.

"What!!"

"Nirmala aunty told me that her son, Sikki is indebt of Rishabhji. If I'll carry his carry his child then he will not harm Sikki." Madhubala said innocently.

"Nirmala aunty?" Ahaana asked while rishabh sat on couch all tired.

"She gave me Shelter. I was helping her and that's why I became a surrogate mother."

"Tell me the number of your agency. "

"Huh?"

"Damn!! This women knows nothing! I will call bittuji and find it out who the hell is this sikki." RK said getting up and walking out of the room.

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"f**k! Why always me." Rishabh groaned tiredly sitting on the bench.
"I will sue that Surrogate agency!" he said as he saw Ahaana coming.

"So, that guy working in Surrogate agency Nikhil, had a friend Sikki. Sikki and his family gave Madhubala shelter. You needed a women For Egg donation and surrogacy, you contacted this agency and when Nikhil couldn't find healthy surrogate and he told Sikki about this. Sikki and his mother decided to fool madhubala and used her as surrogate, realizing that she is too innocent. Without her knowing that she was even getting paid." Ahaana said shaking her head in disbelief. "I never thought this type of innocent people still exist in this world."

"She is too innocent." Rishabh comments looking at Madhubala with frown who was sleeping after all this hullabaloo.

"You leave now. I will take care of her." Ahaana said.

"What about her? Look how stupid she is! She will stay in my outhouse." Rishabh said deciding on. Ahaana tried to explain him and said madhubala can stay in her place but he refused and said. "I am so sorry, Ahaana. But I don't trust anyone. Please stay away from this matter." Rishabh said determined with his decision.

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"You can stay here." Rishabh said opening the door for Her. Madhubala walked inside, still afraid of him. According to her he is quite scary. "This is your room. It consist of everything you needed and If you want something call Patil or Neha. Better don't do anything on yourself." Rishabh said with his hands inside in his pocket, well dressed in a business suit. Madhubala uttered nothing just nodded her head. Rishabh looked her for a minute and left the place as his phone buzzed gaining his attention.

Few days later, Madhubala feeling quite coped up with nothing to do decided to take a walk on the garden. She was so bored, she had no one to talk with. Rishabh rarely comes to outhouse to check on her. Ahaana comes once in a week for her check ups. She is a nice girl and Madhubala and ahaana, are now good friends. It still amaze madhubala how Ahaana treat her, for madhubala she is nothing more than a surrogate who will leave this place as soon as this baby will be born. According to Ahaana, she still can't believe the fact that Madhubala can be so innocent. Madhubala still feel bad for Sikki and his family, she tried asking rishabh to bail out Sikki but He refused and gave her a look, asking her to Shutup. But there is one more thing that is madhubala curious about, about the mother of the child she is carrying. She didn't met her yet. Through she had heard that a child's real parents are not allowed to meet the women who carry their child. Madhu shook her head realizing that rishabh is a quite over-protective father who might wanted to make sure that his child is safe and that's why he met her and let her stay in his outhouse.

Madhubala jerked out hearing a loud horn, turning she looked at a women coming out of the car dressed in a knee-length dress.
"Who are you?" She asked looking her from top to bottom in disgust.

"I... "

"What the... What are you doing here!" Madhubala was about to say when she heard a loud crisp voice from behind. She turned and find rishabh behind her, frowning at the girl. "And you, madhubala. Leave!" Rishabh said pointing toward the outhouse.

"I was just passing by so just thought to piss you! Anyway, Who is she? Your mistress?" Trishna asked with a smirk on her face. Madhubala frowned hearing the word 'Mistress'

"Shutup! You good for nothing women!" Rishabh said looking at her murderously. Trishna laughed hearing him. "And I clearly told you to leave, Madhubala." Rishabh said looking at madhubala.

"Why the hell are you asking to leave? Well, well so that you can join her on your bed?" Trishna asked folding her hands, chuckling loudly. Madhubala looked at Trishna in disgust. How can someone be so... She don't have words to describe this kinds of peoples. Other side, rishabh grabbed her neck furiously hearing her. Trishna chocked pushing rishabh away as she tried to breath. "You will pay for this Rishabh kundra! Don't forget Rishabh, I haven't given you divorce yet! So better behave with me!" Trishna said warning him, rishabh tried saying something but Trishna stopped him and said. "Heard the IVF was successful, don't forget Rishabh! The baby born out of that surrogacy will be on my name! I will have a equal right on that baby. Do you want me snatch that baby away from you?" Trishna asked in threatning tone, smricking hard.

"Never ever thought of doing that." Rishabh said furiously. Trishna chuckled twisting her curls hearing rishabh's tone.

"f**k off! Kundra. I am already late. My f**king buddy must be waiting for me. bye. Have a worst day. " Trishna said waving happily as she turned toward her car.

Rishabh stood still as he tired to digest what Trishna said. Will she snatch his baby? No! She won't! Won't. This baby is meant everything for him! He turned and found Madhubala still standing at her place looking at him sympathetically. Rishabh frowned seeing her look and glared her.

"I told you to leave. Isn't it?" He asked coming closer to her. Madhubala looked down, she shouldn't have listened to their conversation. It was personal but she felt bad for rishabh. His wife is bad. Irresponsible women!

"You must be tried. It has been hours since you are here. It is getting a little cold here. Go back to your room." Rishabh said rubbing his nose in irritation. It was quite embarrassing now for him to speak to her. Madhubala nodded and left leaving rishabh there who looking at the sky.

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"She is gaining wait now." Ahaana said looking at Madhubala's file.

"Good." Rishabh just replied with no expressions on his face.

"This is your second pregnancy. Right madhubala?" Ahaana asked looking at Madhubala. Madhubala looked her and sadly nodded as she caressed her flat stomach. Ahaana looked confused seeing her sad expressions but said she nothing.

"I'll just come in a minute." Rishabh said walking out of the room.

"Hey! You look sad. Do you want to share something? Tell me is there anything bothering you. I am your friend, not hesitate. " Ahaana said passing a bowl filled with grapes. Madhubala looked her as tears filled her eyes as she remembered what happened in her life before meeting them.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Intriguing start. Update soon
Welcome back to the forum
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Welcome back,
Congrats for the new story,
Awesome update,
continue soon

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Poorva kasi aahes? Khup divas jhale?
Congratulations on the new story.
Intriguing start
Loved it.
Madhu the surrogate mother of Rishab's child. Trishna is his useless wife.
Nirmala and Sikky using Madhu for their benefits, how disgusting they both are.
Madhu is pregnant for the 2nd time, was she surrogate for the first time too.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting start dear
Want to know madhu's past
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Fantastic start
Although I don't like surrogate stories but your story is interesting

please continue soon and pm me with the updates
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful concept with a great start..
Madhu was too innocent..
How easily she believed those people..
RK is over protective for his child..
Trishna was such a kamini..
why haven't they divorced yet???
He could easily file divorce against her for adultery..
second child?? did something bad happen to madhu in past??
Ahana seems a nice woman..
Waiting for RK-madhu romance to start..
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Awesome start poorva..
Welcome back..
Thanks for pm !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful very nice story dear
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb story dear and the concept is different too...Madhu was rk's surrogate and she was carrying his baby. Madhu is too innocent to believe anyone and she was afraid for rk. Trishna is a bad women so rk wants to divorce her. This is madhu's second pregnancy and what happened in her past life?. Waiting for rishbala to fell in love with each other. Eagerly waiting for the next part dear. Please include me also in ur pm list dear...

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