Rishbala||short story||Soulmates 2(completed|pg 31||dt 14/7)

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I'm back...
Hi friends...
Hope you all doing good..
Hm..i broke my word.. I said I am going for a break of few months..if say I need a break but when this idea strike on my mind it forced me to write.. I tried my hard to get away from this..but then only I come to know how much I am affectionate towards writing..i know I made several mistakes in writing but yet you lovelies supported me a lot which is an another reason for my asap return..hope you all support me like you used to do before...& this story's theme is an emotional love story..i always loved to write fairytale or humor type stories..this is just a try..but don't worry I won't make them suffer from any deadly disease or kill them at last.. & the important thing is this story is inspired from one of my favorite Malayalam movie which made me cry..& don't get confused by seeing this name.. This is not a sequel of my previous story soulmates..this is entirely different from that..

Mistakes are common in human life but if they fail to correct it.. What happen if ego grow upon love...time & circumstances tried to pull them apart..but there's a power...The almighty..no one knew what he is written for one..he is the director & all others are just characters of his script..what happend if 2 individuals try to get apart from each other when god didn't want them to..??
man proposes but god disposes...so here it starts...



Prologue


"madhubala... Right..?? "he asked leaning on to his seat..
"hmm.. "she said looking on to the table which is between them.. All things there is new to her..err..Them.. Why the hell she is here..??no need to tell its a mistake..big mistake which they r gonna regret for whole life but yet they r not ready to retreat..
"Rishab kundra.. Hun..?"magistrate bittu sharma asked looking rk who is seated just next to madhu..
"yes.. "
"so what's ur problem.. Y u want divorce after 3 years of married life.. ?"he asks giving them a serious look..
"v can't live together..so v need divorce.."she said directly looking bittu while rk keeps mum...
"every couple want this same thing from here..my question is y u want to get divorced..??life is very precious..dont take any shrill decision for small..small..problems.. "he tried to convince them as he used to do this same with all couple..
"not small..small..problems sir.. "she said in a bit loudly shuting bittuji's big mouth for a while..after a moment of silence he again starts..
"OK.. So what's your problems..??"
This time madhu too didn't opened her mouth...
"say.. Did he hurt u mentally or physically..??"
"no.. "
"then did he use drinks..??"
"yes.. "
"oh.. So it's the problem.. He booze every day & create mess in the house..right..? "
"no.. He won't booze daily.. Some days..becoz of stress of the work.. But he always kept a limit... "she said making bittuji even more confused..
"then..is he have an extra marital affair.. ??"bittuji spell out the comman problem between most of the couple..hearing this rk looked at him boggled..
"never... "she said giving him a glance it's better say glare..
"usally ppl coming here with these type of problems..but I think ur problems r strange.. "bittuji said looking the silent rk & bit violent madhu..
"I studied ur case..ur marriage was on 28 may 2014 right..?"this time bittuji asked it to rk who is sitting a watching all happening there like a viewer..
"yes... "he said..finally he opened his mouth..
"it's been 3 years...now what happened in ur life..is this ur decision Mrs. Madhubala..coz ur husband is not saying anything..??"bittuji looks madhu for a reply..
"it's my decision.."she said fidgeting with her fingers..
"only yours..or both of urs..??"bittuji asked madhu but rk gave the answer..
"it's her decision..but I don't wanna stop her from that..if she wanted to get rid of me.. I am ready to do it.."he said making bittuji eh..!!
"do you have children..??"he asked the important question to them...
"yes... A daughter..2 year old.. "she said...
"2 year...!!don't u think she need both her parent's love & care...??"bittu ji asked seriously for which they failed to give an answer..
"it's.. I can raise my child by my own.."being aware that she is saying lapse she said it..
"this much rift between u both.. & u both have no reasons for getting divorced..then y this.. R u taking this as a fashion..??"bittuji asked..
"v have able reasons for it.."she said..
"I want to know the reasons.. Otherwise u will not get divorce.."bittuji said little irritated..these both r making him hungry.. Yes when he feel tensed or intricate his hunger will increase...
"that.. He have no time for us.. Everytime Work.. Work..Work.. 24/7 he is engaged in his work.. He has no time for us.. He usually leave from home in early morning & come back at midnight.."she said & gasped..
"early also he is like this..?? "bittuji asked getting something what she said..
"no...since 6 months..before that also he had works.. But not like this.. But now it came which hadn't there for all these Years..i wanted to know what's his work at midnight..& when I ask about this he shout at me.. He don't have a thought that me & my daughter r alone in home..one night she was unwell & it's night.. He was not at home that time..i tried to call him but his phone was switched off.. Then I called my friend deepali.. She helped me that night.. It's the duty of a husband or a friend..?what v meant for him.. I don't want his Mrs post..i want my husband's love & care but he is giving his whole time to his profession.. Then y did he married me..?? "she shouted..
"OK.. What's ur job Mr. Rishab Kumar..? & what u have to tell about ur wife's complaints..??"bittuji asked rk who is ready to say something hearing madhu...
"sir.. I am working as a corporate film maker...& I used to direct small.. Small ad films too..my dream is to work with SHR advertising companies.. It's MD offered me a work...for that I need to make eligible quotes & a subject too..i am working for it from the past 6 months..but she not ready to understand my situation... She always want me near her & want to say suger filled words..when I come home after my work she will irritate me..always asking questions.. She even doubt me with my female colleagues.."he proved that he also know how to shout..
"so Mrs. Madhu... "before bittuji say something Madhu said..
"I never doubted u rk..U used to spend more time with them forgetting us.."she said turning to his side facing him..
"i said u many times about it.. Yet u want to quarrel with me.. "he said leaving his cold nature...
"OK.. OK.. Stop.. Stop.. Dont start an argument now.. I understood ur problems...as per law u want to stay together for 6 months.. "bittuji said to both rk & madhu..
"y sir.. V said na v can't live together anymore.. "madhu said..
"look.. First u try to understand.. Life is really a special thing even a single mistake can spoil a blissful life..so this ur time to think.. Think calmly & take a decision..so v can again see after 6 months.. "bittuji said.. Madhu stood from her seat & headed towards the door...rk too went behind her.. Once she stepped out of there immersed in thoughts her leg got twisted while walking out but before she could touch the floor she felt a strong arms around her waist..she looked at the person who is holding her.. It's none another than her husband rishab kundra... He helps her to stand properly..
"r u ok..??"he asked her which she only nodded as reply..she didn't open her mouth as may her voice betray her..the pain inside her may jump out..they never thought of getting separated..but their ego came over their love.. They know their love have the strength to overpower any misery but yet.. Something..something happens which is unknown to them...when they step out of the family court madhu saw her friend,neighbour cum lawyer of their case deepali bhaita standing in a side with their little daughter ridhu..but deepali never wished to see them apart.. Bcoz she know who r they.. What was their love story which may even made god of love jealous...some mistakes have the power to change the life upside down.. Which happens in their life...madhu went near dips a took her daughter from her arms.. She gently pats on Ridhu's back who is sleeping peacefully dreaming of a beautiful life with her papa & mama...rk moved towards the car & opened the door...he sat on the driver seat & closed the door waiting for Madhu to come.. With lost hopes she stepped towards the car & took place on the back seat.. He starts the car drove away.. They never knew what destiny keeps for them...



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Sorry for a disastrous starting..
You may get confused by comparing my blabber & the update... Story didn't start yet dears.. This just a prologue.. Real story will start by next the part..
If you like this story then pls the like button & support me to continue this story with your precious viewpoints...This Story have only few parts..may 5/6 but Can't say it correctly so I Made this an SS instead of Fs or 5s..
I am waiting..





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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely start waiting for next interesting
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Congrates dear for the new story..
Nice name Ridhu(Rishabh-Madhu) 😉 & your pic of DVD 😊
I love it..
Edited by MyDriYa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice. Prologue.
RK and Madhu have drifted apart.
Eager to read more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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welcome back..
glad to have to back ash..


quite a nice ttragic start.
in start i thought they both came in resturant to see each other for marriage or something...

but they are married & are heading for divorce..

ok... they have tiff problm & all..
but what abt ridhu...
didnt they thought abt her..

on madhu.. ok.. i agree to each point she said...
when rk cant give her time... and he is not available in their needy times..
then SHE CAN VERY WELL think to get divorce & grow up her daughter alone..
CAUSE that man isnt showing up when he is needed in their life..
and she definatly dont want mrs. tag !!

abt Rk..
man .. ok.. he has job to handle..
but for whom u r doing job.. for ur family..
at the end of the day a man has to come back to his family..

for me.. no work is bigger than a family !!

now, why he gets irritate with madhu's questiin.. thats the thing..


will wait for his justificatiin too..

tnx for pm ash !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrates for new one Aishu..
Nice start..
Madhu wants divorce from RK..
Bittuji is judge..Haha..nice..
because of her stupid reason to divorce,bittuji hungry...
Rishbala try to understand eachother situation..
O/W like that problem will occur..
Waiting ..
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome back my dear aishu😊.Congrats for the new story dear🥳.Different concept dear.Rk and madhu loves each other very much but they want divorce.Rishbala having a cute littel baby ridhu...waiting for the next update dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb start
Loved name ridhu
And loved the pic most
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good start.
I feel like I saw this film but didn't remember it.
Waiting for their love story and how their future is going to be!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story,
Nice edit,
Interesting and Different prologue,
Rishbala are married and they have a daughter,
Madhu wants divorce from Rk the reason is he is not spending his time with them,
the judge gave 6months time to rethink their decision,
loved baby name Ridhu,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

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