Rishbala||short story||Soulmates 2(completed|pg 31||dt 14/7)

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

Nicrle start. Have seen the movie. Waiting to see how it continues. Thanks a lot for the pm. Update soon.

Thanks liah.. I didn't Made much changes in this story Except their past..

Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: pirl18
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How dare you to think about saprating rishbala...
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Dekho alg ni krna...brdasht ni krenge hm... 😃

S lways owsm starting...

Thank you dear.. Do you think so..?? No I will never separate rishbala.. They are meant to be together 😳

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Aishu congrats on the new story.
Awesome start, loved it.
When i read first two lines I thought their parents have fixed their meeting for their alliance but later on got to know they have come to the court for divorce.
Madhu is fed up coz he is not giving them time and RK's dream is to achieve something.
They have 6 months time to decide, lets see what happens.
Loved their daughter's name, and the banner is so so very beautiful, out of the world I must say.
Continue to soon, waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank you ananya.. Will update soon.. 😊

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: magicalmirage
Welcome back aishu.i am so happy for you.
Congrats for the new Story
But y you named it soulmate 2?
What the heck ..y they are doing this?
I can understand her feelings because my hubby was working like this when he was here .
But it's not a reason for divorce
As bittuji said they should think about Thier daughter
Dipali is a good friend.
Please continue soon
Thanks for pm
Sorry for being late to comment

Thanks chechi.. Bcoz they are truly soulmates..will update soon.. 😊

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Thank you for your love & support friends.. Here is the next part..Pls ignore mistakes..

Soulmates 2

Part-1

The car keeps moving on..they were silent.. Madhu silently pats on Ridhu's back & watch her smiling in sleep.. Her cute dimples are visible in her soft little cheeks while she smile.. This remembers her about him.. His same cute dimple smile which she loved a lot.. The person Is not far away from her.

Just few inches before her..but yet there is a huge gap between them..as the silence crept there rk felt it mocking him.. He don't like pin drop silence..so he switched on the radio let this silence go away from him giving him some peace..

Ring-Ring (a call came in the radio program loving hearts.. )

"hello... Good morning.. Who is this..??"rj asked in his crisp tone..

"hello I am Alisha.."the caller replayed..

"Alisha.. Sweet name.. So alisha which song you want to listen..??"

"I want kuch to Baaki hai song from film milenge milenge.. "alisha..

"oh that's so sweet.. Do you want to dedicate this song to anyone.. ??"rj..

"yes.. My bf Rahul...v r in the verge of broke up.. I don't want to loss him.. So I am dedicating this song to him..rahul I love you so much.. "alisha..

"oh.. So Alisha is dedicating this song to her dear Rahul.. Hope the problems between u both will solve soon...thank you for calling & now enjoy this beautiful song.. "rj..

"Kuch to baaki hai Kuch to baaki hai "

Something remain's

"Sab khatam ho ke bhi Tere mere darmiyan Kuch to baaki hai Kuch to baaki hai "

Though everything is over, Still there is something Between us

"Sab khatam ho ke bhi Tere mere darmiyan Kuch to baaki hai Kuch to baaki hai "

Madhu raised her face a bit & looks him.. It feels like the lyrics are for them.. Each lines are made for them.. So it disturbed her a lot actually not only her him too.. But he didn't show off it.. He pretend like he is only concentrating on road..

"Kahin to kasak aisi dil mein baaki hai Teri aadat chhootati nahin Umeed aisi hai jo tootati nahin "

Somewhere there remain's such a pain in the heart I can't get over your addiction There is such a hope which does not break

"Dekhe jahan nazar tu dikhe wahin Dhadkanon mein tu maujood hai kahin Koshish ki maine bhulane ki tujhko Par dil na maane yeh samjhaaye mujhko "

Wherever I look,I see you You are somewhere present in my heartbeats I tried to forget you But my heart is unpersuadable, It explains to me

"Sab khatam ho ke bhi Tere mere darmiyan Kuch to baaki hai Kuch to baaki hai "

His heart start beating like a drum.. He felt suffocated.. He want to look back.. But his ego didn't allowed him to do so..madhu stares at him for a while & again diverted her gaze off him..he wanna switch off the radio that moment itself but he didn't bcoz of Madhu's
Presence..this great egoist don't want to show his wife that a single song affected him..

"Mil jaate hain kahin ru ba ru jo hum Aankhein teri meri ho jaayein nam "

If somewhere we come face to face Our eyes get wet

"Gum sum khaamoshiyan bolne lagein Hasratein dil ko tatolne lagein Jo saath humne guzari thi raatein Kehti hain woh saari chaahat ki baatein"

Quiet silences start speaking Desires start fumbling the heart The nights we had passed together Tell all the talks of love

"Sab khatam ho ke bhi Tere mere darmiyan Kuch to baaki hai Kuch to baaki hai.."

Oh.. Finally it ended leaving them from the presure..he suddenly switched off the radio not letting an another song eat his brain..
& finally they reached their apartment..he opened the door & stepped outside madhu too...he moved towards the door.. He dipped his hands in his denim's pocket & took door's key..he unlocked the door & get inside without looking back..she enters inside & locked the door from inside.. She headed towards her room & made ridhu lie on the bed.. Since few weeks they are living in separate rooms under same roof.. Ridhu is with deepali at morning time..madhu is working in a bank so she is busy morning till evening & rk is everytime busy.. Deepali's son Aryan is just an old elder than Ridhu...& when dips have any important work her father kuku bhaita will look after the children..after seeing Ridhu peacefully sleeping on the bed she went to wardrobe & took her dress & went to washroom for changing..she came back after changing only to see empty bed..
"Ridhu.. "she nervously called & looks around.. She went outside the room & checked the whole house except for rk's room.. As a last hope she stepped towards his room reluctantly..she opened the door of the room & a soft gasp escape from her mouth in relief..without her knowledge a smile too appeared in her face seeing little Ridhu on her father's lap smiling & talking to him amusingly.. He is caressing her hairs while nodding his head to her talks..for informing him about her presence she knocked at the door nicely.. He lifts up his head & looks her..
"madhu..come.. "he called & she walked towards them..
"that.. Ridhu was sleeping when I went to change when I came back she was not there.. So.. "she fumbled..
"oh..ridhu u came here without saying to ur ma..??"rk asked ridhu..
"no.. Ma was not there when I woke up.."ridhu said in her cute baby voice..
"sorry I didn't knew she came here without telling u.. "he said looking her..
"it's ok..come ridhu.. "she said moving towards her & held her hand..
"no.. I want to be with Papa for sometime.."ridhu said...
"first come & have something.. "madhu said avoiding a gaze with rk..
"no.. Papa.. Will feed me today.. Hea na papa.. "she said with a cute smile..
"I will feed her madhu.. "he said looking her.. She nodded & left from there..

After sometime

Madhu opened the shelf for cleaning it while cleaning she saw a diary from inside drawer.. It's her diary.. She used to pen all her beautiful moments in her life in that..she took in her hand & closed the shelf.. She looks back & saw their pic kept in the small table near the bed..
How happy they were before marriage..then what happend in between.. how their smile fades after marriage.. Everything was going in a smooth way..Then what happend suddenly..she sat on the bed & opened the diary..

"I am feeling everything like a dream.. Today is ridhu's 1st birthday..how fast time runs.. Yet I feel I met him just a day before...everything happens so fast between us.. We met just few moths before our marriage but we felt like v met aeons before.. Our love was pure..i lost many things for my love but he made me forgot about that lost..his love is enough for me to smile.. I never regret for marrying him..i am all happy with him.. This is the family which I wished to live in.."

She closed her eyes reading it.. Her thoughts changed just with in an year..y this happy family is a hell for her now..?? She asked about this to herself many times but didn't get a satisfiable answer..she closed the diary & kept it on table..she leaned on to the headboard & closed her eyes cherishing her old beautiful memories..

Past (3 years before)

Madhu's pov

Today me & my bestie Trishna went to townhall..New Year exhibition is going on there..& art show too..my favourite..we reached there around evening 5..trish is not at all interested in paintings & all.. Shopping is her craze..we were looking all paitings drawn by many artists..but my eyes Stucked on a beautiful painting..
"amazing..!!"I couldn't take my eyes off that.. Whoever had drew this he is the real artist.. The perfect one.. I wanted to see him..then I saw a name in bottom of that painting.. "Rk.. "it may be his short name..interesting..
"Trish.. I want to meet him.."I said to Trish who is looking here & there..
"whom..??"she asks looking me..
"Rk.. He drew this.. "I said excited..
"madhu.. What r u saying..??"Trish asks me looking confused..
"I said I want to meet Mr.Rk.."saying this I turn to spot a guide & calls him..
"yes mam.. How can I help u..??"he said politely..
"I like to see Mr.Rk.."I said..
"u meant Rishab kundra sir.. He is known as Rk.."he said looking me..
"I don't know his name & all...I Am saying about the person who drew this.."I said him..
"yes..I Am saying about the same person.. "he said making me happy..
"oh.. Is he here..?? "I asks excited..
"a while before he was here..but don't know he went back or not.. "he said making me disappoint..
"I am hungry.. Come let's go to food court & have something.. "Trish said.. I looks her irritated..I didn't get a change to meet that gifted person.. When I starts moving with her suddenly the guide calls me..
"mam.. He is here.. "I looks back amused.. Leaving Trish there I went to the direction where he pointed.. Trish ran behind me by calling by name.. I didn't give ear to her as I am fully concentrated in meeting him.. Finally I reached there.. I saw a man surrounded by a few people.. I couldn't see his face bcoz of the ppl enveloped him.. But I want to see him.. I moved towards the small crowd & poked my head inside the small circle created by them..now he have his back at me.. How unlucky I am..but no problem he will turn na.. Trish irritated me by poking me from back but I didn't give attention to her.. For knowing what I am looking with these much interest she too join me to see him..finally he turned back giving us an ample view of his greek god face...i noticed Trish's mouth formed an 'o' shape..
"madhu.. He is more interesting than his painting.. How fool I am to think having food with out seeing this handsome hung.. "she said in a dreamy voice which made me angry..
"sir.. "I called a bit louder to make him hear my voice.. As I thought he looks.. He only saw our head as v were poking inside.. He smiled seeing me & gestured me to come..i straightenend & went near him.

"do u wanna say something.. "he said in his manly voice which made me reach another world..yes.. It's true.. I am attracted towards arts & all.. But for the first time I am feeling pull towards an artist..

Like old ppl say.. When v meet our soulmate v feel a pull towards them.. Same feeling I felt seeing him.

Seeing I look him dreamly he waved his hand before me..

"yes.. "he spoke..

"aa.. That me.."I already forgotten for what I gone there..

"it's..ha.. Ur paiting its awesome.. Then.. "seeing me pampering he said..

"thank you.. Anything else.. ??"

I am helpless I don't know what to say..but finally I got some idea..

"sir.. Can I get ur autograph pls.. "I said & he smiled at me may he thought how silly I am.. He asked me for a paper but damn me.. I didn't have it with me..but my little head didn't failed to catch an idea at time...

"sir give it on my hand.. "I said & opens my palm forwarding it to him.. He asked for my name..

"madhubala.. "I said & he smiled at me which made his cute dimples more visible..he wrote "rk.. "In my palm & my name beneath his.. He got a call then & left from there after bidding bye to everyone especially after giving me a flying kiss..trish made a sad face as she didn't got a chance to mingle with him...but I am happy.. Don't know y feel a lil possessive about him..yes.. V only met today & I don't know much about him..after leaving from there v Both went to a film hall but my mind was not there.. I dont know when movie starts & ends.. After dropping me in my hope Trish made her way to her own apartment..i rang the calling bell twice & my Ma padmini opened the door & Gave me a glare for becoming late.. I get inside silently & stepped towards my room..ma calls me for dinner but in was not hungry..I was out of mind.. I went to my bed & lie down..i didn't slept properly that night..in morning I calls trish..

"hey madhu...y u called.. It's really early for u to wake up.. "she said & I looked at the timepiece on the table near to my bed..yes...its only 5.30..usually I woke in 7 or 7.30am..its really early today..i guess trish is too sleepy as I can hear her yawning through phone..

"Trish.. I was thinking.. "I said...

"about whom.. ??"she asks me..

"about that person..Rk.. "I said..

"u r really mad..for this u call me at this midnight..??"trish said in an angry tone..

"midnight.. ?"I asked confused..

"yes.. This is midnight for me.. If u r not in a mood to sleep then don't.. pls don't disturb my sleep at least.. "she said & cuts the call..

After 3 weeks

I tried a lot to find about him & his residence but everything goes in vain but in b/w these days I saw him in many places & I talked to him 2/3 times but after that whenever I saw him he just tried to avoid me either by saying he is busy or silently walks off from there..today i went to trish's home as she was not well from the last 3 days..after few hours I bids bye to her & left from her home.. But on the way to my home I met with an accident..actually it was my mistake I laxnessly crossed the road & a car hits me.. In fact it just touched my body only but I fell on the road & ppl gathered around me.. I was not much hurt & tried to stand from there but stops when I saw the person came outside from the car.. It's none another than my Prince Charming.. Yeah.. He is my Prince Charming.. Seeing him I pretend pain & starts crying pressing my hands & legs..
"I am really sorry.. "he said & bend on near me..
"r u hurt..??"he asks me..
"it's paining... My hands.. No.. Legs.. I meant hands..legs All r paining badly..."I said & tried to bring tears in my eyes..
"what r u waiting for..take her to hospital.. "one among the ppl said & he scooped up me in his arms..one person opened the back door of the car & he placed me on the back seat & he went back to driver seat..he starts the car & on the way to hospital I said..
"pls.. Don't take me to hospital.. Coz.. "he didn't allowed me to complete..
"who told u I am taking u to hospital.. "his words made me confused.. Then where he is taking me..??
"then.. ?"I asks him but i didn't get any answer from him..

"I know u r not hurt..it was all ur drama.. Right..?? "he asked me shocking me..omg he knew I was acting now what he is going to do..i panicks & looks out through the glass window & finds the car is moving to a secluded area.. What he is gonna do.. ?I am really scared now..my heart starts hammering against my chest..

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So how is this friends..??

Sorry I can't promise regular updates as I am a bit busy.. But surely will complete this story & some of my friends said to continue the stories that I left discontinued.. I don't know I can complete every one or not but I will surely try to complete some of them when I get an idea..now I am fully concentrated in this one..

If you like this part pls hit the like button & drop your reviews friends..

Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago

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dharsii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Superb update Aishu..
Loved it ..
Rishbala don't show their feelings to eachother. because of ego..
Madhu fall for him at first sight..
Is he liked her?That'swhy he avoided..
Where is he taking her?
Waiting to known ...
Update soon..

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Superb update aishu. So now the past is being revealed. Isnt this based on the movie james n alice? Hope rk n madhu reduce the difference between them soon. So madhu was acting infront of rk. Reminded me of moz n cat lol. But rk knows she's acting. Do update soon. Thanks for the pm

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Superb update

So rk is a painter

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

great update ash..
ok.. so the insight into the real things..
got few a hint..
ahaan.. rk is the painter..
and he will paint their story of love.. lolz..
d'oh madhu.. u are acting.
but whats the use of it when he knows abt it..
hope they soon will resolve their difference..

tnx fr pm