Rishbala Ts-The Moment Of Truth**Completed**Last part (B)pg 11 dt 30/5

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Hi friends..here is a two short on Rishbala..first i thought not to write this but this is my favorite topic so i am writing this..i know this is not a new topic but yet i felt to write..kindly read & drop your reviews & this is the last story from part...

The Moment Of Truth


Part-1


He opened the window & the cold breeze stroked his body..he kept looking outside..its dark out side as its night but yet he can see the beautiful scenery outside in the moonlight..its really beautiful to stand there like that & its his favorite spot..he loved to stand there forgetting everything..he inhaled the fresh air..its really late night so he went back to his royal bed without closing the window..he lie down still keep looking at window...soon he hears the sound of an anklet & a slight smile crossed his lips..
"she came.."he mumbled..soon a girl stepped inside through the window..its a big castle & many guards also there & his room is on the top floor yet she is coming...seeing her he raised from the bed..she came in front of him & extended her right hand..he too extended his hand to touch her beautiful soft hand but suddenly an unknown force pulls them apart..

"aahh.."he woke up from his dream with a scream..
"what happend rk..?"sikky who lies beside him switched on the table lamp & asked...he starts panting so sikky took the jug from the table & poured some water in the glass & gave it to him..he gulped it..
"what happend..??"sikky asked again..
"ah..it..it was a dream.."he told while keeping back the glass on table..
"u made me scared.."sikky uttered..
"did u saw any worse dream..?"sikky asked by patting on shoulder..
"dont know but its.."rk said looking around...
"what was that..??"sikky..
"its a girl & a boy..their hand got separated before they could.."he stopped hearing a chuckle..
"whats it..?"rk asked sikky..
"mr.perfect start seeing dreams about girls.."to winked..rk feels a bit anger..
"its not any sal***ous dream like u used to see.."rk..seeing his gesture sikky understood he is angry..
"okk sorry..leave it..its just a dream na..y should v wrangle just becoz of a dream..come lets sleep.."sikky turn off the light & they lie back..
"rk.."sikky..
"hmm.."he hummed..
"hm..so any scope for a story.."sikky..rk turned to his side..
"what u mean..?"he asked..
"now u r not writing na..y..u should start writing again.."sikky..
"hm..but i am fed up by writing fictional stories..ppl may get bored.."rk..
"means..u r gonna write a real life story..??"sikky..
"hm..i am thinking of it..but wanna find it..my mind tell it will become my masterpiece..but from where i would get a story like that.."rk..
"u r blessed one rk.."sikky..
"really..?i dont have a permanent job,residence &.."he stopped for a moment"dont have a family too.."
"but u r a great writer rk.."sikky...yes rishab kundra 27 yr bachelor is a novelist..he got many awards for his writing skill..he loss his parents in an accident when he was 18..his hometown is ujjain at madhyapradesh but after the death of his parents he came to mumbai & staying with his childhood friend sikkandar bhaita aka sikky..writing is his passion..as a novelist he maintained to keep his decency..in a short span of time he got many fans & became one of the famous novelists in the city...girls will die for his charm..cute dimple smile & greek god figure but he always kept a distance from them so his friends started to call him mr.perfect..but somehow he stopped writing 6 months back..sikky always pressurize him for writing again but he was disturbed.."my mind is blank.."he always say this to sikky..sometimes he feel like the thoughts disturbing him was not just his illusions but something happened real but what..?he want its answer..his mind is wandering for it..sometime without any reasons his eyes get filled..when sikky ask about it he was unable to give the answer..now its really bothering him..what r the thoughts..y he is continually getting this thoughts..& his main question was who is that girl..the voice of her anklet will echo in his ears each time...but he didn't found that girl yet...sometime he feels its just his illusions but another time he feels like some one is calling him & waiting for him..his own thoughts start eating his brain..


After a week..


"sikky i am gonna write again.."like a sudden thunder lightning his word came..
"what..really..??"sikky looked him with various expression in his face..
"yes.."rk said..
"its a pleasant surprise...u r gonna write about whose life...?"sikky..
"ahh..?"rk looks him confused..
"u said that day na..u want to write a story inspired from a real life..?"sikky asked...
"that i dont know sikky..but my..my dreams.."rk looks sikky..
"dreams..so u r gonna pen ur dark dreams...??"sikky..
"shut up..my dreams r not just dreams it have so many meanings.."rk...
"okk baba..i gave up..u do anything..anyway i am glad that u again start to write.."sikky..rk smiled..


Night


usually he write stories at night time & sikky wont go to disturb..he like to sit alone & write..he took his pad & pen...he touched the paper with his pen but he couldn't even write a word..his mind was blank..he closed his eyes..but the visions that disturb him daily didn't helped him today..he opened his eyes & throws the pen & pad away..he went out the room frustrated...he took it with a great hope but..but its only for disturbing not for helping him..he angrily went out..sikky followed him seeing hre opening the door of his car..
"dude where r u going..??"sikky asked..
"for a drive..i am disturbed..i want a bit relief.."he told & drove away..sikky looks at the sky..no stars...dark sky..it seems rainy..
rk drives his car in a limited speed..he stops the car when he finds a girl surrounded by a group of men..she have her back to him..seeing their gesture he can easily conclude..they r trying to misbehave with her..he flashed the head light..& the men flew away sensing someone's presence..he stepped out of the car & went towards the girl who wears a yellow salwar with golden gilts..he came in front of her..her eyes still closed in fear..he couldn't take his eyes off her beautiful cum innocent face..he felt a strong connection with her..ahh..but..with a stranger...??how it possible..these thoughts ran through his mind..leaving all his thoughts he decided to call her first..
"hm..hello.."she opened her eyes hearing a manly voice..oh gosh dont know what magic she had done to him..her mesmerizing eyes took him to another world..."girl stop looking me like this.."he said in his inner mind..but his heart dont wanna take his eyes of those magical eyes..
"if u dont mind..i will drop u..where u want to go..?"rk said..she looks him..
"sure..??"she asked softly..
"yeah..this is late night na & its not safe for u to be here alone so..."he struggled his max to make it in a good sense as he dont know what she think about him..but without telling a word she stepped towards the car & opened the door..he turns & saw she had already occupied the passenger seat..he smiles & went towards the car..he opened the door & sat on the driver seat..he leaned towards her & she look him wide eyed..uff..her eyes..its calling him but he looks away by tightly holding his control..
"ha..seat belt.."he spoke..
"oh.."she gasped & fixed her seat belt..he drove the car..
"hm..where u want to go.."rk asked her while driving..but instead of answering his question she asked him a question..
"y u stopped writing..?"
"oh..so u read my books..?"he turned his face to see her but she didn't look him...not getting any replay from her he told..
"i was disturbed..but now i am planning for a come back.."
with a jerk the car stops suddenly..
"damn.."rk's voice came..he stepped outside..he went in front of the car & opened the bonnet..she looks through the glass & finally stepped out..
"what happend...??"she asked..
"dont know.."rk..she felt a moisture presence on her cheek..she touched on her cheek & felt a drop of water there..she raised her head & looks at the sky..the rain start showering..
"uff.."he gasped...she closed her eyes & giggled..he looks her confused.."i am stucked in this situation & she is enjoying it...?strange...!!!"
in the rain her thin fabric sticked on to her body by making all her curves visible..rk looks her wide eyed..
"what she is doing..??"he thought & removed his jacket..
"take this.."she opened her eyes hearing his voice & saw him standing before her with his jacket in hand..then only she look herself & then looks him awkwardly..she silently took it from his hand & wears it..
"can u pls push the car from back..?"rk optionally asked her..without saying a word she went back side of the car ready to push..
he opened the door & sat back on his seat..she pushed the car with her all strength..& the car starts moving slowly..he starts the car again..
"ok.."hearing his voice she came back & sat on her seat..
after few minutes..
"u didn't told yet where u want to go..?"rk..
"i dont know..?"she said in a low tone..
"what..?"she looks her totally confused..
"i was decided to commit suicide..."she told..he looks her bewildered..
"what..but.."rk..
"but i didn't have that much courage.."she said..he notice tears in her eyes so he didn't asked any further question..
after sometime the car stopped in front of a house which is unknown to her..
"come.."he said..& she followed his word..standing on the doorstep rk rang the calling bell twice & sikky opened the door after few mins..
"Rk.."sikky hugged him"i was worried about.."his attention changed to the stranger girl who is with him..
"this..??"sikky..
"hmm..sikky..this is..ms.."he looks her as he dont know her name..
"madhu..madhubala.."she spoke..
"ha..madhubala..she will stay here.."rk..
"but.."reluctantly looks him..
"u will stay here today.."she felt it like an order while he just said it..she nodded..
"come.."he called & madhu followed him..they went outside..
"actually whats going on here...??"sikky thought & closed the door..

"u will stay in this room.."rk said showing the guest room..
"hm.."madhu nodded..
"i have doubt.."he said looking st her..she looks him..
"dont u know to reject..??"rk.."u didn't said no to me yet..simply nodding & hearing everything.."rk..she simply smiled..
"okk..u take rest..ha 1 thing this not my home so kindly dont try to commit suicide here..okk.."rk..she smiled..
he went back to his room & took the pen & pad which lying on the ground..he sat on his easy chair & took a long breath..he feels some one's presence & turns his head..
"you..!!"he asked amazed..
"i didn't felt sleepy..so i thought..hm..b/w what r u doing..?"madhu asked..
"cant u see..?"rk..
"oh..so u were writing..sorry if i disturbed u.."she tried to leave but.."hey stop.."rk's voice came & she stopped on her tracks..
"hm..whats the problem in ur life..y u want to end ur life..??"rk..
"do u have any plan to pen my life..?"came madhu's quetion..he looks her awestruck.."did she have any mind reading power..how she got my thought.."he thought..
"okk..i just asked only..hm..it was..i am fed up with my life i cant even sleep peacefully..& mainly my family fixed my marriage..."madhu..
"so u said no..?"he asked her inquisitively..
"nope..he was my childhood friend so i had no problem.."madhu..
"then..??"rk..
"say the truth u wanna write my life na.."she asked..
"hm..actually i want to write a story inspired from a real life..i thought ur story may be quite interesting..."rk.."but how u got it..?"
"hm..okk..just leave it..my story is not that much interesting..bye..good night.."she leaves from there..he keep looking at her..the same voice of that anklets..he can hear it in her each steps.."y didn't i heard it before..may i didn't note it.."he just leaves it & came back to his world..


Morning


Rk opened his eyes & saw he is still on the chair..last night he thought to write something but dont know when he slipped to sleep & as usual the same dreams..he saw his pen & pad kept on the desk..
"when i put it there..?its with me na..??"he thought & went to take it from there.."what..??"his eyes pop up.."who done this..?"his voice filled with a bit anger..he tried to torn the paper but something stopped..he wanna read whats written in it & who had written this..he controlled his anger & went back to his easy chair..he read it leaning on to the chair..


"The Moment Of Truth"

He want to go there..want to enjoy the cold breeze,want to feel the sunlight,rain& another pulchritude of the nature..but it was all forbidden for him..he had everything but nothing..he was like a bird imprisoned in a golden cage..he was the price of that country..so his father was cared about..but their care was a curse for him...he was not allowed to go out of the castle..he spends long 27 yr inside the castle..he can go anywhere inside but not outside..he never touched the ground yet..ppl of his country also didn't saw him yet..the king announced that he will only come out after the crowning ceremony..he only mingled with few ppl..girls r not allowed to meet him even maids..the only 2 women have permission to enter in his chamber was his mother & sister..

"what a strange life.."he commented while reading..

he was not at all happy with that life but he didn't knew that how to say no..

"like madhubala.."he again stopped reading for a while & then continued..
his only relief at there was the window..he can see the whole area by looking through.. but only he was permitted to open that window at night only..

"what..window..night.."he finds his dreams r similar to this story..

days & months passed..but one day..she came..

"who..who came.."he want to read more but damn..the person who wrote it didn't write it further..
"who came...?"rk thought"who wrote this..sikky..no..he wont write like this..then who..if it was that madhubala..??"rk.."yes..its she.."he headed towards her room & knocked..after minutes she opened the door..seeing his gesture he can understand she is yet sleepy..
"what happend..y u came in this early morning...??"madhu..
"its 8.45.."he stated...
"oh..sorry..i was tired.."madhu..
"ha..u didn't slept yesterday na.."rk..
"ahh..?"madhu..
"i meant u were writing this na.."rk said showing her the paper..
"what writing..its not my job its urs na.."madhu..
"dont try to lie..if its not u then who..sikky..?i know he wont write like this.."rk said..
"i am telling the truth..i didn't.."madhu..
"okk..what was in it..?"madhu asked..
"nothing.."he went from there..she thought for a while & closed the door again..
he again sat back on his chair & thought.."if its not her..then who..??"rk..
"its me Mr.Rishab kundra.."he hears & turns..but finds no one..
"i am not there..i am here.."the voice again came & turns to that side..this time he saw it BUT...


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So how is it friends..??
Did you like..??
if you like this story then pls hit like & drop your reviews friends..
i am waiting to know your reaction..





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wow lovely story ghost story hai kya
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New story 😊. Congratulations for new story
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Wow!! So deep story!!

Who is that man in last para??

Who is that man in the story ...his story seems great...he suffered a lot but couldn't come out of his situation...

This man seems to be so strong...he captured Rk's mind for 6 months because of which he couldn't write stories...

But why did that person write his story and come in the same day when Madhubala came...
I don't think Madhu is a simple girl too...she is doubtful

So many confusions ...but so intriguing...
hope you solve all these in next update

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Posted: 8 years ago
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ok.. thats a quite intriguing story ..
and u gotta update it soon.. ok.. !!

its like reading some novel type..
the characters are so complex..
and something holds it deep..

loves the start ash..
plz cont. soon..
them only i can say abt it..

cause its all thoughful for me..
right now.. hehehehee..

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Interesting concept
Who wrote it? Is rk dreaming about his past life?
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Congrates for new one Aishu.
Awesome start Aishu..
Really loved it...
I thought,Rk has some past,that related to madhu..
He didn't write have concept to write..
Who has written that one?
Eagerly waiting for known about that..
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like the start of the story
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Congrats on your new story.i think it will be your masterpiece.really intriguing.
Who has written this story
And who was talking with him.
Waiting eagerly for next update.
Please continue soon.
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Congrats for new story,
Awesome update,
loved it,
writing is Rk's passion,
continue soon,
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