Rishbala Ts-The Moment Of Truth**Completed**Last part (B)pg 11 dt 30/5

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

hahahagahaaa...
rk under house arrest..
for what..
to protect his V card..
lolz..
no offence but i a giggle escape my lips as i read that part..
hehehee...
past is messing up with preswnt..
now waiting to know it all..
awesome update..
tnx fr pm :)

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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Rese.😳

Unres

Superb update dear Aishu..👏

Superbly written and I loved it..⭐️

Rk having prob n something disturbing him

Madhu ..Sikky n he himself too didn't understand why he is doing so ?

Plus the man who is coming again and again to talk to him ..😲

Now Dr.told Sikky what Rk said and we get to know the past ..

Very interesting

Waiting for next ..and the answers to all ques.😉

Thanks for pm dear.😃

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Thanks for the PM!

Sorry for commenting this late.

Read both parts, it's superb!

Part 1:

The dream looked so real!

A writer's story is something I always look forward to.

Rain, capturing eyes,... everything sets the mood for the writer, I mean RK.

Intriguing is the word to describe that part.

Part 2:

Again I thought it was real(the dream.)

Madhu a statue! Fells like seing a film.

Loved the starting of the back story of RishBala.

Waiting to read more and to know what happened.

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harini

@harini06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Awesome update,
nicely written,
thanks for the pm

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Rumi

@RijaMalik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Awesome update ..

Thnku for pm..

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sujitha

@Sujitharajan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Awesome update dear😊Rk is a prince and madhu come to his chamber to seduce him and its interesting what will happen next?.

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu
Superb update
So rk was housearrestted to keep him away from girls
Hope rk save madhu whatever danger he is talking about

Thank you dear😊

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Aishu awesome update, loved it.
Went in trance while reading the update.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank you ananya..i am glad you loved it😊

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg
lovely update

Thank you dear😊😊

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: kaustavi
It's superb...

Is this Rk's reincarnation...
And Madhu is too reincarnated??? But why Madhu didn't remember the conversation she had with Rk or Rk didn't really talked with Madhu?

Madhubala in past was a creation of Balraj just to take his virginity so as to destroy royal family??
That's why Rk's life was like that...caged...to protect them, Mohan kundra did that?

Present Madhu...poor girl, in Rk's disturbance and confusion, he scolded her and she went to her home. ..Rk didn't stop her ...hope she isn't in trouble...

Great update
Thanks for pm

Thank you kaus..will update soon..hope you will get answer for your questions fro that..