Rishbala Ts-The Moment Of Truth**Completed**Last part (B)pg 11 dt 30/5 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Intriguing story update it soon.

Congrats on the new story.
Thanks for the PM

Thank you ananya😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapnaf52

congrats for new story aishu. ..
interesting and superb start
it's some novel type yar ..
and the story are awesome. .
I didn't think madhu is simple girl ..
early waiting for next part
thanks for pm

Thank you sapna..will update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friends..here is the next part..i am making this a three shot instead of 2 shot..so next part is the last part..pls ignore mistakes..dedicating this part to rachana chechi,pryiakka,sapna & insaneniyu..


The Moment Of Truth


Part-2

he again sat back on his chair & thought.."if its not her..then who..??"rk..

"its me Mr.Rishab kundra.."he hears & turns..but finds no one..

"i am not there..i am here.."the voice again came & turns to that side..this time he saw it but.."whats it..??"he mumbled under his breath..its a man wearing ancient dressess his face is shining like sun..becoz of that lustre he couldn't even look at his face..

"who r u..??"rk asked looking..

"me..??dont u know who is me.."came replay from that man..

"i cant see ur face.."rk said..the man turns to other side now he have his back to rk..

"y u want to..??"he asked..

"how u came here..??"came next question from rk's side..

"they r back..be careful.."the man said..

"who..what r u saying...b/w WHO ARE YOU..?? & whose story is that..y u wrote it..who is she...??"rk asked lossing his patience..

"listen to ur heart..u will get answer to ur all question.."saying this he disspeared with a shine which made rk blink his eyes...

"what..??what i saw now..?that man..who is he..?GHOST..!!"so many questions jumped out from his mind..

"Rk..."sikky voice pierced inside his ears..he opened his eyes & saw sikky is sitting hear him..he looks around & found himself on the floor..he gasped..

"what happend..?yesterday u slept here...??"sikky asked..rk raised from the floor & sat down..

"aahh.."he pressed his forehead..

"what happend rk..??"sikky stood up & gave him hand to stand..rk holds sikky's hand & stood up..

"sikky..i..i wasn't sleeping..i..i saw a man..no..a ghost.."rk said..

"a ghost..??"sikky said & after a moment of silence he start to laugh..

"y r u laughing.."rk asked with a frown..

"this must be ur dream...ghost.."he again laughed..

"no sikky..or do one thing call madhu & ask her..i went to her room.."rk said..

"what..y..y dude..for what..??"sikky made a tone..rk glared at him & told "stop ur overimagination..i went to ask her something.."rk said..

"what..??"sikky keep looking at him..

"first u call her.."rk said..sikky nodded & tried to go but stops when he saw madhu on the doorstep..

"madhu.."rk went near her..

"madhu tell him i came to see u morning na.."rk asked but she keeps looking at him astonished as he call her MADHU instead of MADHUBALA..!!

"say na.."rk said..

"rk..what r u saying..?when u came to see me..after yesterday night i am seeing u now.."she said like nothinf happend..

"what..??"he looked her stunned.."what is she telling..??y she is lying..??"his mind asked him..so spit out that questions to her..

"y r u lying..??"

"no..i am saying the truth..u didn't came to see me morning.."she said..

"look i am not a oaf..stop lying & say the truth..i came to see u & asked about a story na.."rk asked..

"story..which story..?"madhu asked like she is hearing it for the first time..

"madhu stop acting..say the truth.."he hold her by her shoulders & shook her..madhu looks him bewildered by seeing his anger filled face..

"rk stop it..leave her.."sikky shouted..rk realized that his hands on her shoulders & took it off..

"what happend to u..did ur mental balance loss..??y u r behaving like a

psycho..??"sikky asked in a strong tone..

"sikky..believe me i am saying the truth.."suddenly his sight fall on the paper which kept othe desk under paperweight..

"i will prove it now.."rk said & moved towards the desk & drags the paper from there & shows it to sikky..

"look..i didn't write this..then who..tell..i went to her for asking this..she is lying.."rk said..sikky looks at the paper & looks back..

"now u believe.."rk asked..sikky looked him with pity.."what happend to my friend..?"he thought..

"y r u looking me like this.."rk asked seeing his reaction..

"rk whats this..??"he asked in a low calm tone..

"what..??"rk asked confused..

"this paper is blank.."she said..rk turns the paper & looked at it astonished..

"no..this wont happen..i..saw it sikky..one man wrote..moment of truth..it was its title..& it was about a prince..& u know it was similar to my dreams.."rk said..

"exactly..it was just ur dream..nothing happend like that.."sikky tried to make him understand..rk looks at madhu & again went near her..

"madhu say na..pls..tell him i am saying the truth.."he looks her with hope.."say something..."

"i want to go home.."she said with trembling voice..

"what..??"rk asked not getting what she really meant by that..

"i want to go my home..."she said again..

"y r u saying like this..if u want to go back there again..then y the hell u tried to end ur life..answer me.."he shouted at her..well whatever it is he have no right to ask it..but he asked..no..his inner mind asked without his permission..sikky notices tears in corner of her eyes..she is scared..scared by his attitude..y he is behaving like this..wild like an animal may more than an animal..

"rk whats this..if she want go let her go..v have no right to stop her.."sikky said..

"how is it possible sikky ONCE SHE GONE FAR AWAY FROM ME..I WONT LET IT HAPPEN AGAIN.."he didn't said it..rk didn't...that words came out from his mind..he didn't know what he had said..his mind said whatever that they heard..

"what u said now rk..?"sikky asked astonished..he stood there dumbstruck..

"i am asking u..what u said now.."he again asked..

"get out.. "he shouted at madhu which made her flinch back in fear..

"i said get out..get out from here..from this apartment..i wont allow u to be here for even a second..now itself u want to go..out.."rk shouted..madhu ran from there palming het mouth with tears continually flowing from her eyes..

"rk.."sikky touched on his right sholder..

"out..i want to be alone..leave me alone.."he scremed..sikky went outside the room & colsed the door realizing his mood is not good..soon after sikky left he fell on his knees & cried badly..

"no..it was not my dream..it happend real..that story..madhu..that man everything was real..but then how i failed to prove all that..what the f**k happening around me.."rk said..

"YOU DONE WRONG RISHAB.."the voice of that man again came..he lifts up his head & looks around but finds no one..

"where r u..?i know u r here..what i had done to u..?y r u troubling me..?u made me behave like a psycho..y u r doing this to me..??y r u following me like a shadow..?"rk asked..instead of answer a command came "call her back..do want to loss her again..call her back..i said na they r back..they will try to snatch her from u again..go rishab..get her back.."saying this the voice stopped..

"my foot.."he said & start to mess up that room..& hits his head on the wall..hearing a sound sikky came to the room & saw this..

"rk..what r u doing...??"he pulls him & shook him by his shoulders..blood oozes from his forehead..

"u r hurt.."sikky said..

"real hurt is here sikky.."he said by poking on his left chest..sikky hugs him & pats on his back..he hugs him back..

"sikky where is madhu.."he said breaking the hug..

"she had gone rk.."sikky said looking at him..

"where..??"rk asked..

"to her home..where else.."sikky said..

"no..i want to find her out..her life is in danger..i want to save her.."rk said & tried to go but sikky stops him & asked.."whats this rk..?u r not going to her..u r coming with me.."sikky said..

"to where...?"rk asked..

"to dr.manav verma's clinic.."sikky..

"psychiatrist..!!"rk asked.."sikky..do u think i am mad..??"

"no rk..its not like that..u r disturbed..

u need counselling...so.."sikky said & waited for his reaction..

"i am ready..do what ever u want..give shock treatment or lock me inside cell.."rk said..

"rk y r u talking like..v r going there for counselling it dosen't mean that u r mad..normal ppl also come there for counselling na.."sikky said to console his friend who is totally lost..

after sometimes they reached dr.manav verma's clinic..

"sir..dr. is calling u both.."a nurse came out of his cabin & said..sikky & rk stood up from their seat & enrers inside..

"hah..sikky..what a pleasant surprise ..."dr. said..

"rishab kundra...hah.."dr. asked looking at rk..he nodded.

"take your seat.."he said & they sat down on the chair opposite to him..

"how u know him uncle..??"sikky asked..

"he is famous here na..actually i am ur fan..i really appreciate ur works.."dr. said..

"thank u.."he said slight smile..

"whats the motive behind this sudden visit..not personal matter right..?so u came to clinic na.."dr.

"uncle..its..rishab have some problems.."sikky said..dr. looks him seriously..

"whats ur problem.."he asked directly..

"do anything doctor or kill me..i dont wanna live this life...dont know what to say..i am confused..something is disturbing is disturbing me..its eating me alive..i dont want to do..pls help me.."rk said & tears welled up in eyes..

"ok..relax..sikky can u pls wait outside for sometime..?"dr. asked..

"ok..uncle.."he stood up & leaves..

after sometime

dr. again called sikky inside his cabin..

"what happend uncle..where is rk..everything is fine na.."sikky asked..

"sikky..u sit.."dr. said.. he sat down..he is in swoon..

"but uncle.."sikky asked confused..

"i hypnotized him.."dr. said.."i wanted to know whats his real problem..whats happening inside him..but.."

"what happend uncle..?he is ok na.."sikky..

"yes..but i have some doubts.."dr. said & sikky looks him intriguing..

"as a doctor I can say he have multiple personality disorder.."he said which made sikky gasp..

"what..what r u saying..??"sikky asked..

"sikky u want hear this calmly..while hypnotizing i saw another rishab..he was telling he is a prince..he was lived a lonely life..& about a window..a girl & about their separation..etc..etc.."dr. said..

"yes..he used to see the same in his dreams.."sikky informed.."uncle it means.."

"a new rishab is inside him without his knowledge.."dr. said..

"dont v have any solution for this..??"sikky asked with wet eyes..

"but its not the matter..really he is no affected with multiple personality disorder.."dr. said making sikky more confused..

"uncle what r saying say it clearly.."sikky..

"u know a girl named madhubala..??"dr. asked him..

"yes..but how u.."sikky..

"but how this happen..he said they were killed 350 yrs ago.."dr. said..

"what..uncle..350 ago..who dead..??"sikky asked all in one go..

"wait..i cant believe rishab is just saying something fictional..becoz while telling this he start sweating..his voice trembled..& u know i have a bit believe in paranormal things thats exactly happend there..& dont know u believe it when i say that.."dr.

"whats it..??"sikky asked anxiously..

"that..dont to but some I felt someone's presence who is telling me he is true..i was startled.."dr. said & gasped..

"what..??"sikky's eyes popped up hearing it.."then..he is ok na.."

"hey relax..let me complete..he is perfectly fine..as a doctor i can say is affected with multiple personality disorder..but if v use our sense v can easily understand that its not his problem.."dr. said leaning onto his seat..

"so u r saying..he is possessed by a spirit..??"sikky asked..

"never..he is alright..but the fact is that he not alright mentally.."dr. said..

"uncle i have a doubt.."sikky said..

"what..??"dr. asked..

"u too gone made..??"sikky asked in return he chuckled..

"sikky i think u r confused..1 min..i will explain what he said..

**Past(350 years ago)**

The big hall was all lavish..silence crept there untill all hears the roaring sound of king mohan kundra..

"WHERE IS RISHAB..??"his question made all members present there shiver..

"ur majesty..prince.."minister harshavardha start to fidget for giving an answer..

"i know where is he..u know what he is doing there..call him..."mohan ordered..villein went to call prince rishab..hearing a footstep rishab suddenly closed the window & looks who came to interrupt his small sweet time..the villein came in front of him & bowed..

"prince..majesty is calling u.."he said..

"did father came to know that i opened this window now.."he gulped & his mind starts to fidget..he leaves with tht villein & after few minutes they reached in front of king mohan kundra..

"Rishab what u had done.."he asked by griting his teeth..he lowerd his head not having much courage to face his father's murderous glare..

"u r my only son..so i give u much freedom but dont try to misuse it.."mohan said..

"FREEDOM..!!this is called FREEDOM..??dont he know the meaning of FREEDOM..??"his mind kicked him to say that all but he controlled himself not say a word against his father..

"answer me rishab..u know na u r only allowed to open that window at night..then y u opened it now..what u thought i will not come to know about this..i am gonna close that window for ever by using my powers.."mohan said..

"no father..dont..pls..i will not repeat this again..pls..i beg u..dont do that.."he fold his hands & fell on his knees by crying...

"ok..i am giving u one more chance but if u ever repeat this..u know me na.."mohan asked warningly..

"no father..i swear..i only open that window at night time.."he said..

"hm..now go back to ur chamber..but dont forget my words.."mohan said..he nodded & left...

Night(an unknown cage)

a man is sitting near fire & chatting come mantras & putting ashes on it..another man watching him impatiently..

"do something balraj..u know na crowning ceremony is on next month..after that v cant do anything.."he told to the monsterous figure who is chatting mantras..

"calm down kuku bhaita.."he said & stood up with a plate full of ashes..

"what r u gonna do now...seems like v r going to loss..i cant loss that powers..if rishab become the king he will get power which i dremed & then v cant ever defend them.."kuku said with concern..

"dont worry kuku..u know na y he is keeping his son secretly especially far from the reach of girls.."balraj asked & smirked..

"yes..i know.."kuku said..

"if he loss his virginity before taking upon the throne that means..the collapse of royal family.."he said & laughs evilly..

"but how..no one can even see him & i heard that his chamber is on top floor & many guards also there..then which girl would dare to there.."kuku asked..

"she..she will go there.."balraj said..

"who..??"kuku asked..

"MADHUBALA..."balraj said & moved towards the corner..kuku saw some thing there..balraj removed the cover which covered the statue of a lady..

"this statue is going to seduce him & take away his virginity..?"kuku asked in a mocking tone in return balraj glared at him & throw the ashes on that statue..& for his wonder next moment an extremely beautiful lady wearing an yellow traditional saree & jwellery present before them..

"balraj u r awesome.."kuku told looking her top to bottom..

"then what you thought about me..?"balraj asked with a smirk..

"but how she will enter inside the castle..??he is on the top floor &.."before could say balraj cuts him off & said.."I knew it all..kuku first remember one thing she is not an ordinary girl she is the creation of balraj chowdary..so don't worry..be ready to hear the news of royal family's collapse.."he said & laughs..

" u know na whats your job.."he is asked the beautiful girl who is standing before the & as replay she nodded her head..

"ok then go.."he said & she leaves..

"but I a afraid.."kuku's voice made balraj turn his head & look him..

"for what..??"came his question..

"If anything happen wrong..?"kuku said..

"what wrong..what you meant..??"he asked..

"anyway..she is a girl na..what happened if she really fall for him& turn against us..??"kuku asked..

"no..nothing will happened like that..or if she try ro turn against us..it will be her end..you know na I created her so I have the power to destroy her too..she know it so don't worry.."balraj said..

In castle

As usual rishab was looking out through the window & enjoying his own little sweet time..its really late so he went back to bed without closing the door..he lie down on the bed & keep looking outside... suddenly hears the voice of a pair of anklets..he raised from the bed hearing it..

"WHO IS THAT..??THE VOICE IS NOT FROM INSIDE THE CASTLE..THEN FROM WHERE..??'thousand questions raised on his mid at the same time..he keep looking out through the window by sitting on his bed..

"WHAT..??"his eyes popped up seeing a girl stepping inside through the window..he pinched himself to conform that he I not dreaming..

"YOU ARE NOT DREAMING PRINCE.."she said softly making him glance..

"A LADY..AT THIS TIME..IN MY CHAMBER..BUT HOW..??"he thought..she smiles at him while he was looking at her mesmerized.."WHAT SHE MADE UP OF..?WHERE DID SHE COME FROM..??IS SHE REALLY A HUMAN OR GODDESS OF BEAUTY..REALLY SHE IS THE EXTREME OF BEAUTY..NO WORDS TO EXPLAIN HER ELEGANCE.."his mind said to him which he too agreed..

"BUT..BUT WHAT HAPPENED IF FATHER COME TO KNOW ABOUT THIS..??"for a moment he came back to reality..

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Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Superb update
So rk was housearrestted to keep him away from girls
Hope rk save madhu whatever danger he is talking about
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Aishu awesome update, loved it.
Went in trance while reading the update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
It's superb...

Is this Rk's reincarnation...
And Madhu is too reincarnated??? But why Madhu didn't remember the conversation she had with Rk or Rk didn't really talked with Madhu?

Madhubala in past was a creation of Balraj just to take his virginity so as to destroy royal family??
That's why Rk's life was like that...caged...to protect them, Mohan kundra did that?

Present Madhu...poor girl, in Rk's disturbance and confusion, he scolded her and she went to her home. ..Rk didn't stop her ...hope she isn't in trouble...

Great update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Thanks for dedicating me..Amazing update Aishu..
superb twist and turns..
His past is disturbing with his present..
Like sikky,I am also confused at first..
Where did madhu go?
Rk was house arrested by his father..
Kuku and balraj are too cruel..
I thought, Madhu turned against balraj,that'swhy they killed her..
Waiting for known about past..
Update soon..
Thanks for pm..
Edited by dharsii - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Nice update aishu.rk is having multiple personality or he is reincarnated.mohan wanted to Keep him away from girls for protecting thier family.balraj created Madhu and now Madhu is on the mission to seduce and took his virginity.
Please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
I guess its a story of rebirth
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update aishu 😳
your story bring me somewhere else while reading it 😃
LOVED every descriptions of your lines for Rishbala..
Edited by MyDriYa - 8 years ago

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