RM FF ||Love - A Right Mistake|| Parts 18 Page 55 (15/10) - Page 5

Originally posted by: madhurish

Res!!

First! feeling so happy to grab first spot yet again... 🥳

Wow! two chapters in a row! Cool!

Will read the updates & comment later tonight dear!

Okay! First part was all about Rk's epic proposal...🤣

Well, I read really quick knowing it was just the same part u have written as prologue with few added lines... Like madhu saying "she was fine before you arrived" Lol! She must be really pissed at Rk for literally drooling over trishna...Lol! 🤣

Just now checked the prologue... & the character sketch of Rk & Madhu...

Okay, with the prologue i can guess a bit... Like Madhu messing with her marriage resulting in earning insults to her parents & they get mad at her & throw her out or she herself get out for some space... On the other side... Trishna will reject Rk which will hurt his ego & he will angrily walk out... And both Rk & Madhu will end up in white villa.. Where they will discover lots along with their love... Lol! I seriously want Trisha to reject Rk right on his face only if he had rejected Madhu in front of everyone & hurt her... Lol!

Lol! Radha's reactions... Priceless... She was so worried that her son could be a gay...Lol!

And Rk was worried that Padmini wants to talk abt THEIR marriage... Shit! Poor boy got scared that she really took his proposal serious which wasnt actually meant for her... 🤣

So many fun moments like Mukkund annoying Madhu... Sikku teasing Rk...Padmini chasing Rk... Rk running from her as if his pants were set on fire... Haha...

Well, first two updates... I really enjoyed...very hilarious...

May be next update will be little emotional... Dont know how u have planned to burst the bubble... That Rk is not a gay!!! 🤣

Oh boy! I was abt to suggest u to make this story a full fledged love story skipping the mystery bit... But then after reading ur newly updated prologue... I dont think i will like this story any other way... Please go with ur mystery plot bcos u r too good in writing such stories... Besides these two need some time alone & share some special moments to grow a bond... Which will never happen if Rk stays close with Trish and Madhu being engaged to mukku... So i guess the white Villa will be a fine place...😆

Thanks for giving these two super updates dear... hoping to get yet another speedy update...😳

Originally posted by: leena45678

very exicted to read this story.
I want rishbala to fall in love..
Nice intro.
looking forward to this story.
apt title.
con soon

Originally posted by: LaZyLaDy

Awesome story
Madhu ko lagta hai RK ne use proposed kia hai
RK sochta hai padmini aunty ko kia hai aur unho ne accept bhi kar liya 🤣
And ofcourse radha sochti hai RK gay hai 🤣 OMG confusion hi confusion hai

Originally posted by: vishuv

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Lol another hilarious part!! Am so loving your story... fantastic it was!! Haha Radha's friend confused her that RK could be gay due to his lack of interest in girls. Her reactions while hearing Padmini was priceless 👏

RK thought that his MIL has actually accepted his proposal 🤣 He wants away from her!! In future maybe he will never propose anyone in the dark!! His proposal is one of a kind! Which I will cherish forever 😛

Thank God Madhu is gonna talk to him only after engagement. Haha Muku annoying her!! He finds her pretty!

Lol I hate this Trishna... firstly for being the centre of attention of RK...then her sister's engagement!! Thank goodness she doesn't consider Rk but seeing Oberoi. That's a welcome relief!!

Thanks for PM!! Loved it 😃

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Wow... Amazingly...amazing way u r writing the story !!
I loved Rk who's love sick with Trish & how he had become a confused soul LOL padmini :D hilarious :)
Madhu is not being a fashionista I liked that char of hers but bold abt her beliefs.
Nerdy mukund... U know muku only can b perfect for that role :D
Radhaji in shock state ROFL
I hope somehow Rk madhu marriage happen in all this confusions...
U r writing fabulously & loveddd it :)
Plz do continue soon & tq for PM dear..

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

oh god , again confusion.
proposed confusion not cleared one more confusion added.
awesome update dear.
i an soo excited for this story..
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Awesome update, loved it.

Hey bhagwan kya ho raha hai, proposal has turned into a chain, R.K thinking he proposed Padmini and she accepted it, Madhu happy that the love of her life proposed her,

Waiting to know what happens in the next update.

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: dharsii

supeeer update.
l like u story very well.Because it is full and full based on comedy track.Maybe afterwards it will chance.
But now throughly enjoyed.
I like RK embrassesment about his proposal .
Padmini and Radhu think ,he is a guy.poor Rk.
How will madhu and rk together?
I am waiting for ur update..
Today u have given 2 part.that's nice.

Originally posted by: harini_

Awesome update,
loved it
Rk thinking he proposed padmini and she accepted it poor rk he is scared by seeing her,
Radhaji is getting feared that his son was interested in boys,
Mukund annonying madhu poor madhu she is so happy thinking that rk proposed her,
excited for next part continue soon,
thanks for the update