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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Mona_90

Congrats for new story..
Intresting start..
Name shows its mystery story..
Madhu mukund sa shadi kar rahi hai apne parents ka promise ka liya but pyar rk sa karta hai..
Trishna ek model hai jo apna aap ko hi pyar karti hai rude..
Rk jo trishna sa pyar karta hai but galti sa madhu ko propose kar dia..
Rk shock hai usa room sa padmini ko nikalta dekha ka lol..
Waiting for next part...


thanks for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Tia congrats on the new story.

Loved every bit of the story from the beginning to the end. Beautifully written.
Poor Madhu being ignored on her wedding day. Mukund a jerk and so is R.K, can't she the love for him in Madhu's eyes, always behind Trishna and tried so many times to propose her.
R.K thinking he proposed to Padmini while it was Madhu there, Madhu thinking he loves her. I hope Madhu does not run away from the wedding/
Curious to know what happens next.
Please continue soon, waiting for the CS.
Thanks for the PM dear.


thank you
yeah rk will be a bit of a jerk in this story 😆
madhu might run from her wedding 😳
will continue it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: madhurish

Reserved!!!

Will comment tmrw...

unres!!

OMG! my 'Mystery' Queen is back!!! 🥳
Welcome back dear... 😃

OMG!!!😲 Rk thought he proposed Pady!!! that's hilarious! 🤣
Aww... I'm sure Madhu will get hurt when she comes to know that Rk wanted to propose Trish & not her...
why do i feel that Madhu will stop her marriage with Mukkund & tell everyone that she loves Rk & he too loves her... 😉 Then Rk can tell he didn't propose her but Padmini aunty...🤣 then Malik uncle can get mad at him for proposing his wife... 🤣 that would be so much fun nah... thewhole throng of guests mking an "Eewww" fac tRk for his choice... 🤣
okay, jokes apart.. interesting start... wonder how Rk & madhu will get together when Rk is attracted to Trish... & madhu engaged to Mukku...😳
is this a mystery or love or mysterious love story??? 😆

thanks dear for coming back here with ur lovely story... 😛
i loved all ur stories... and i m sure i will love this one too... 🤗



thank you so much dear 😃
yeah madhu will be hurt sadly
mallik uncle would definitely get mad 😆
i have two ideas for this story one is a mystery but now i'm confused whether to make it a normal love story 😕
thank you 🤗
Edited by ..Tia.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

Mallik house was decorated beautifully one night for the music party before Mallik and Padmini's beloved daughter, Madhubala's wedding. The hall was full of guests, who were happily chatting while soft music played in the background. The waiters were walking around with soft drinks, serving the guests. Madhu was dressed in a shimmery pink salwar suit and wore spectacles. Her long hair were tied in a plait that fell to her side. But the centre of attention was Madhu's bold and beautiful sister, Trishna who was dazzling in her expensive designer dress. Madhu watched her sister, who was busy in conversation with a somewhat sad expression. Not because she was going to leave her in a few days but because even today she got everyone's attention. After all she was a model, she thought bitterly. Trishna came over to her with her head high, smiling at everyone on the way. She sat down next to Madhu and began examining her once again while giving disappointed looks.

"Seriously Madhu what have you done to yourself?" She asked upset. "I appointed the best makeup artist in the city for you and still you look like you have come from a village. Why did you choose this dress and this hairstyle? It's making you look like an aunty. And these hideous glasses? I wanted you to look good at least today. It is your day today."

"Oh really is it my day today?" Madhu mocked.

"Yeah of course," Trisha said.

"Well if it is my day then I should dress the way I want and I am happy like this," Madhu said meanly with a fake smile.

"As you wish," Trishna said looking bored and she got busy with her mobile.

Madhu then turned to find Mukund staring at her once again. The nerdy smile he gave her made her want to punch him in the face. She was forced to agree to this marriage just because Trishna had refused due to her career ambitions. Then her parents had emotionally blackmailed her to marry him to fulfil the promise they had made with Mukund's parents before she was even born. She agreed for her parents and because she had a good image to maintain in front of them but she hated Mukund. He was rich yes but he was such an idiot. He was not the man of her dreams. Her dream man was someone else. As she gave Mukund another fake smile and turned away from him, her dream man appeared in front of her face and her smile became genuine. RK was standing opposite her and looked a bit awkward. Not like his usual happy and confident style.

"Hi RK," Trishna smiled and turned back to her phone.

"Hi Trish," RK said and stared at her up and down thinking how beautiful she looked. "You look so beautiful today."

"Just today?" She asked without looking at him.

"No I mean you always look beautiful but today you look even more beautiful."

"Stop buttering me RK," Trishna gave a laugh still looking at her mobile.

RK continued to stare at her dreamily. Madhu's smile had long vanished and she was furious. She liked him but he was also a jerk. He was also always behind Trishna, who never gave him a second look. All that mattered to Trishna was her career.

He never looks at me twice and here he is staring at Trishna like he has no other job, Madhu thought irritably.

"How are you Madhu?" He said suddenly turning to her with a smile.

"I was fine until you arrived," Madhu said hotly and he smiled without paying attention to her words as his mind was somewhere else.

"You look nice," RK said sweetly shocking her.

Madhu ignored him but inside she wondered why he was behaving nicely with her. He did not like her at all and usually made fun of her. So to get even with him she used to show that she disliked him.

"OK then just excuse me," RK said looking shy and he walked away from them.

That was odd, Madhu thought. How could RK be so quiet and shy? He was behaving differently today like something was going on in his mind. At the point, Mukund joined and she was temporarily disctracted from RK.

The reason behind RK's awkwardness today was that he had decided today was the day. He was going to tell her his feelings today. If he did not do this today, he would never be able to. RK had tried to propose Trishna on a number of occasions but he failed. She was the first girl in his life that he got attracted to. He liked her since they were at school but never had the guts to tell her. But now he had to because it was a matter of her safety now. That pervert was getting close to Trishna day by day on the pretext of giving her a role in his movie. But he could not speak to her in front of everyone. He would have to call her somewhere alone. RK was about to message her but stopped. If she knew it was him, she would probably come up to him and ask why he wants to talk to her alone. As she even did that once when he tried to talk to her. She began doubting his intention on calling her alone. What should he do then? He then got an idea and smiled.

RK stopped a little boy who was running past him and gave him a piece of paper and pointed towards Trishna to give it to her. He had intentionally not written his name on the paper. Curiousity would bring her to him.

"RK," Mallik called, coming over to him. "How are you? And where is Mohan and Radhaji?"

"I'm fine uncle. Mom dad are just there," RK said with a smile as he directed Mallik towards his parents, who were busy talking to some other guests.

On the other hand, the little boy came running to Madhu, who was sitting next to Trishna and threw the paper in her lap before running after his friend.

I want to talk to you about something important alone. Meet me upstairs in five minutes.

Madhu wondered who wanted to meet her. Just then she realised it might me Mukund. She would never go and meet him. But then she looked back the paper again. The neat handwriting did not belong to Mukund. It looked more like RK's handwriting. She felt butterflies in her stomach. RK wanted to talk to her and that to alone. What could it be? She looked all around but could not see RK. He must be waiting for her upstairs.

The music had started once again while the lights dimmed. The dancers got together in the centre of the hall and began dancing once again.

Madhu had reached the dimly lit top floor and found the door of the guest room open. She entered the completely dark room and found a dark figure standing near the window. She was about to turn the light on but he held her hand, stopping her.

"Leave the lights off," RK spoke in a shaky voice and pinned her to the wall. "Because after what I say to you, I don't have the courage to see your reaction."

Madhu's eyes widened and her heart began beating fast. It was the first time she was this close to him.

"I love you," he said quickly without thinking. "I love you a lot. Ever since I knew the meaning of love, I have loved you and only you. I don't know how it happened, but it just happened. I know you don't love me but I also know you don't hate me either. I know you have some feelings for me too but you just don't know. Just give me one chance, I will make you very happy because my happiness lies in yours."

Madhu's was so shocked that she was unable to speak. She just stared at the face she was unable to see because of the dark.

"I know someone else is in your life but you are not happy with him I can see it in your eyes. Just leave him and accept me," RK said.

Stunned at what he had said, he moved back leaving her. She did not speak. Was she so angry that she would not even to talk to him now?

"Say something please," RK said but got no response. Suddenly he felt his proposal was too lame and felt embarrassed. He then rushed out of the room closing the door behind.

Madhu walked over to the window and stood expressionless. Next moment, she smiled with disbelief. Just then the bathroom door opened and Madhu jumped. Padmini, who had been cleaning her saree after dropping a drink spotted Madhu and turned the light on. Madhu turned to her quickly. She had not heard everything had she?

"Madhu what are you doing here?" She asked surprised.

"Nothing mom," Madhu said quickly. "Nothing."

Padmini walked over to her and smiled.

"You are happy with this wedding aren't you?" She asked touching Madhu's face.

"Yes of course," Madhu smiled.

"Today I feel you are actually happy," Padmini said happily. "Come on let's go downstairs."

"Mom I'll come you go," Madhu said. "I need to fix my makeup a bit."

"OK," Padmini said and headed towards the door.

Madhu wanted to spend some time alone and think about what RK said to her. She could not believe her ears. RK loved her? But then why did he always run after Trishna? Maybe to make me jealous, Madhu thought. She could see why he have behaving a bit odd today. He was going to propose her today. Today? It was then when she remembered that is was her party today and she was getting married to Mukund. Madhu instantly became upset. Was it too late now?

RK was standing outside the guest room still shocked at what he had done. How would he face Trishna now? He heard the door open behind him. He turned to look behind him and his mouth fell open as he watched Padmini walk out of the room. He felt he was going to get a heart attack. Had he just proposed Padmini?
Edited by ..Tia.. - 9 years ago
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Part 2

RK stared at Padmini with shock as he recalled everything he said to her including the bit about someone else in her life. He was so dead. She was going to kill him. He opened his mouth to clear the confusion and apologize but he lost his voice when Padmini smiled at him. What the, he thought. Why was she smiling at him? No she was not thinking of accepting was she?

"RK," she began but RK quickly turned away and walked off, confusing her.

Back in the hall the dancers had stopped dancing. Mukund was searching for Madhu wondering where she had gone. RK went past him without thinking where he was going and bumped into someone.

"Oh sorry," RK said quickly before he looked up to see his friend Sikky.

"RK what's the matter? You look tensed," Sikky asked scanning his face.

"I have made a big mistake Sikky. Come with me I need to talk to you," he told him and took him to a side away from the noise. After RK explained everything to him, Sikky let out a laugh.

"What have you done RK?" He laughed.

"Don't laugh at me and tell me what to do," RK said rather hotly.

"Well just go and tell aunty that you didn't know it was her and apologize."

"I was going to but aunty smiled at me Sikky!"

"What?" Sikky asked with surprised.

"Yes!"

"Maybe RK she thought it was a joke," Sikky said thinking fast but RK was not convinced and looked sad.

Today he was going to propose Trishna but instead proposed his would be mother in law. Everything got messed up.

"Well look on the bright side RK," Sikky said in an attempt to cheer him up. "You're lucky it wasn't Trishna or she would have killed you for proposing her like this. Even ordinary girls want a fairy tale like proposal and here we are talking about Trishna. You know her standard."

"Really Sikky I really am lucky," RK said sarcastically.

Radha was busy in conversation with another woman when Padmini joined them.

"It's so nice that Madhu is getting married," Radha smiled at Padmini. "I wish my Rishu would agree to get married now too."

"Haven't you seen a girl for Rishu yet?" Padmini asked with interest.

"No Padmini he has refused to see any girl. He says he does not want to marry yet," Radha said a bit depressed.

"What if he likes a girl?" the other woman standing next them asked.

"No Mrs Kapoor, he says he is not interested in girls, Radha told her. "It's my biggest dream to watch my only son's wedding but he's just not ready."

"Don't be sad Radhaji. How will he not get ready? I will talk to him," Padmini said. "Where is he? Let me go and take his class."

Padmini left them while Mrs Kapoor turned to Radha with a very sober expression on her face.

"This is very bad Radhaji," she said.

"What? Why?" Radha asked disturbed by her tone.

"You said Rishabh has no interest in girls," Mrs Kapoor said lowering her tone.

"Yeah he doesn't. He has always been like this but I am very happy that my son has a good character. All his friends are boys except he does have some contact with Trishna and Madhu," Radha told her proudly.

"My son was like this too," Mrs Kapoor said miserably.

"Like what?" Radha asked confused.

"My son used to run away from the name of marriage and girls. At first I thought he is just a bit immature and will get better when he grows up a bit but I was wrong," Mrs Kapoor sighed.

"What are you trying to say Mrs Kapoor. I don't understand."

"My son ..."

"What?"

"My son was ..."

"What was your son?" Radha asked getting impatient.

"My son was interested in boys," Mrs Kapoor became emotional and walked away with her hand on her mouth

Radha was confused at first but suddenly she understood what Mrs Kapoor meant and was shocked. She remembered all the times when RK would get annoyed when she mentioned his marriage and showed him photographs of girls. No, she thought. No! Her Rishu could not be gay.

"I can't wait till our wedding," Mukund smiled at Madhu, who looked uninterested.

He is so boring, she thought. It was the hundredth time he had repeated the same line. She was trying to find a way to get out of this mess but his monologue was not letting her concentrate.

"Did I tell you how pretty you look?" He asked.

"Yes you did," she yawned but he continued to praise her. Madhu scanned the hall for a glimpse of RK but there was no sight of him.

"RK," Padmini called as she spotted him behind a pillar and he was about to escape. "RK stop!"

"What's wrong with you? Why are you standing here alone?" Padmini asked amused.

"N-nothing," he stammered.

"I want to talk to you about something," Padmini said with a smile.

"What?" He asked quietly.

"About marriage," she said brightly.

"What?" RK stared at her with disbelief. How could aunty even think of this?

"Yeah," Padmini said.

"No!" RK shouted and walked away from her quickly.

Padmini was left shocked. He appeared to be afraid of the word marriage. Why?

RK stopped in the middle of the hall with a sad expression on his face as watched Trishna happily taking selfies with her friends. If he had not got upset seeing her with Oberoi today, he would have not made this hasty decision of proposing her at Madhu's party. Madhu on the other hand was gazing at him with desire. Why was he not looking at her, she thought to herself Maybe because he was embarrassed by his act. She made a mental note to talk to him after the party and tell him that she accepted his proposal. Madhu smiled to herself but then got worried in an instant. They had very little time so they would have to take some step fast.

"I tried to speak to RK about marriage but I couldn't Radhaji," Padmini told Radha who was looking glum. "He doesn't seem to want to hear a word about marriage."

Radha hand reached her heart as she looked at Padmini with shock.

"He looked so scared for some reason. I wonder what is wrong with him," Padmini told her and placed a hand on her shoulder seeing her so upset. "But you don't worry everything will be OK. He is still a kid."

But Radha feared the worst and walked away leaving Padmini concerned about her. RK had been watching them at a distance and could tell Padmini aunty had told his mother everything. He held his head in his hands. He would have to tell his mother everything about Trishna now otherwise she would think something very wrong. He knew his mother wanted a homely girl as a daughter in law so he always hid his feelings from her. RK knew she would never agree for Trishna but he would have to try now.
Edited by ..Tia.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res!!
First! feeling so happy to grab first spot yet again... 🥳

Wow! two chapters in a row! Cool!

Will read the updates & comment later tonight dear!

Okay! First part was all about Rk's epic proposal...🤣
Well, I read really quick knowing it was just the same part u have written as prologue with few added lines... Like madhu saying "she was fine before you arrived" Lol! She must be really pissed at Rk for literally drooling over trishna...Lol! 🤣
Just now checked the prologue... & the character sketch of Rk & Madhu...
Okay, with the prologue i can guess a bit... Like Madhu messing with her marriage resulting in earning insults to her parents & they get mad at her & throw her out or she herself get out for some space... On the other side... Trishna will reject Rk which will hurt his ego & he will angrily walk out... And both Rk & Madhu will end up in white villa.. Where they will discover lots along with their love... Lol! I seriously want Trisha to reject Rk right on his face only if he had rejected Madhu in front of everyone & hurt her... Lol!
Lol! Radha's reactions... Priceless... She was so worried that her son could be a gay...Lol!
And Rk was worried that Padmini wants to talk abt THEIR marriage... Shit! Poor boy got scared that she really took his proposal serious which wasnt actually meant for her... 🤣
So many fun moments like Mukkund annoying Madhu... Sikku teasing Rk...Padmini chasing Rk... Rk running from her as if his pants were set on fire... Haha...
Well, first two updates... I really enjoyed...very hilarious...
May be next update will be little emotional... Dont know how u have planned to burst the bubble... That Rk is not a gay!!! 🤣
Oh boy! I was abt to suggest u to make this story a full fledged love story skipping the mystery bit... But then after reading ur newly updated prologue... I dont think i will like this story any other way... Please go with ur mystery plot bcos u r too good in writing such stories... Besides these two need some time alone & share some special moments to grow a bond... Which will never happen if Rk stays close with Trish and Madhu being engaged to mukku... So i guess the white Villa will be a fine place...😆
Thanks for giving these two super updates dear... hoping to get yet another speedy update...😳
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
very exicted to read this story.
I want rishbala to fall in love..
Nice intro.
looking forward to this story.
apt title.
con soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Awesome story
Madhu ko lagta hai RK ne use proposed kia hai
RK sochta hai padmini aunty ko kia hai aur unho ne accept bhi kar liya 🤣
And ofcourse radha sochti hai RK gay hai 🤣 OMG confusion hi confusion hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lol another hilarious part!! Am so loving your story... fantastic it was!! Haha Radha's friend confused her that RK could be gay due to his lack of interest in girls. Her reactions while hearing Padmini was priceless 👏

RK thought that his MIL has actually accepted his proposal 🤣 He wants away from her!! In future maybe he will never propose anyone in the dark!! His proposal is one of a kind! Which I will cherish forever 😛

Thank God Madhu is gonna talk to him only after engagement. Haha Muku annoying her!! He finds her pretty!

Lol I hate this Trishna... firstly for being the centre of attention of RK...then her sister's engagement!! Thank goodness she doesn't consider Rk but seeing Oberoi. That's a welcome relief!!

Thanks for PM!! Loved it 😃
Edited by vishuv - 9 years ago
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Wow... Amazingly...amazing way u r writing the story !!
I loved Rk who's love sick with Trish & how he had become a confused soul LOL padmini :D hilarious :)
Madhu is not being a fashionista I liked that char of hers but bold abt her beliefs.
Nerdy mukund... U know muku only can b perfect for that role :D
Radhaji in shock state ROFL
I hope somehow Rk madhu marriage happen in all this confusions...
U r writing fabulously & loveddd it :)
Plz do continue soon & tq for PM dear..

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