RM FF ||Love - A Right Mistake|| Parts 18 Page 55 (15/10) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
wow superb start
rk proposed madhu instead of trishna
waiting to read more is this story a suspense thriller ? Just curious bec of the tittle
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Congrats for new story..
Intresting start..
Name shows its mystery story..
Madhu mukund sa shadi kar rahi hai apne parents ka promise ka liya but pyar rk sa karta hai..
Trishna ek model hai jo apna aap ko hi pyar karti hai rude..
Rk jo trishna sa pyar karta hai but galti sa madhu ko propose kar dia..
Rk shock hai usa room sa padmini ko nikalta dekha ka lol..
Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tia congrats on the new story.
Loved every bit of the story from the beginning to the end. Beautifully written.
Poor Madhu being ignored on her wedding day. Mukund a jerk and so is R.K, can't she the love for him in Madhu's eyes, always behind Trishna and tried so many times to propose her.
R.K thinking he proposed to Padmini while it was Madhu there, Madhu thinking he loves her. I hope Madhu does not run away from the wedding/
Curious to know what happens next.
Please continue soon, waiting for the CS.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for your new story!
Waiting for the CS...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 4ever4love

definitely this story sounds different!!!

I was expecting a mystery with the title but now it seems more like a love story.

Poor Madhu! Bad enough to be ignored esp on your wedding day but all this drama! Why did her parents guilt her into this marriage!!!! She is obviously miserable.

And RK. So all he sees is Trish's outside beauty and completely ignores the person she really is.

Then ending was funny with RK thinking he proposed Padmini. I hope he realizes it was Madhu.

But now I am afraid for Madhu - what steps will she take thinking that RK loves her???


I'm not sure whether I should write this as a mystery as I have two plots for this story. Yes RK only sees Trishna's outside beauty and her confidence. Wait and see what happens
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: vishuv

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Quite an interesting start buddy!! 👏

Madhu would be beautiful with or without specs. But here Trishna is more beautiful than her sister. She wants to be a model...Not bad! But she looks to be an arrogant one. Since she refused the proposal Madhu is a substitute? Why should see bear for her sister? Their parents shouldn't have forced her.

Madhu...fallen for RK but can't refuse the proposal since her lover is after her sister. She is burdened with the marriage. At last RK's mistaken confession makes her happy...I hope she doesn't do anything hastily. RK is neither aware of her love nor ready to make any commitments.

Coming to RK...Madhu's dream man but his dream girl is Trishna! Lol I am finding him quite funny here...he is so afraid to confess his so called love to the confident Trishna! The last part esp where he thought that Padmini heard it!...it was 😆😆 After confessing he slipped away embarassed! So he fell for the outer beauty

Thanks for PM. Do continue soon 😃


Madhu is definitely more beautiful in this story but some people find modern girls more attractive than simple ones and that is the case with RK at the moment.
If her parents couldn't force Trishna then they couldn't force Madhu either but she agreed because of her own reasons. You will understand her character more in the upcoming updates.
Thanks will continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unresed my comment on pg. 1
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

🤣 🤣 hahaha.. rofl... the last part was superb..
reading the title, i thought..😆..
rk is different, down to the earth type...
madhu in bhenji style, but still has lot of attitude.
Rk's proposal was awesome..
But consequence🤣 omg..
Next time Rl WONT DO ANYTHING woth lights off🤣
Awesome.. Loved it !!!.


Yes this rk will be different and so will madhu. 😆
You understood Madhu right she is behenji but she has attitude 😆
RK should definitely take care 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: dharsii

Really super update.
Madhu is going to marry mukund.But that is the compulsion.
Rk love trishna.Poor Rk.
Proposal is nice.What madhu is going to do?
Last part is funny.Rk thinks ,he proposed to padmini like that.
Plz update fast.


thank you
will update fast
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: candle_light

wow superb start
rk proposed madhu instead of trishna
waiting to read more is this story a suspense thriller ? Just curious bec of the tittle


thank you
it was supposed to be a thriller but i'm not sure now

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