RM SS: Fireflies in a Jar (Chapter Three Posted on 24/04) - Page 6

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

P.S. - you haven't commented on my post on page 4 for the 1st chapter 😭

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

I haven't yet replied to all the comments. Sorry... 😳

But I read it and I loved it ... will reply to it in a bit... bear with me... I am quite lazy and slow... 😆 ... and so is my internet connection since last few days. 😆

Originally posted by: aravindam100

Woohhh New storyyy👏 yipeee. Thank youuu😛. Sooo coming to d story part. Awsme😉😳. I was wandering der must b sme twist. But nthng was coming up till d middl part. Dont knw why but my mind was saying smethng interstng s coming. Thudaaahh der it s BLIND Madhubalaaa😆😉. Sooo wat wil RK dooo. Waiting to knwww moree.

Originally posted by: Supervampire

its fab story...love it

poor madhu is blind...now waiting for rk action

Originally posted by: Tinku16

👏⭐️Amazing ss...loved it v v much and the last one was just a ATOM BOMB...when yuv told rk about the proposal why did he not tell this to him...waiting v v eagerly for the next and ofcourse for ENTWINED ASWELL...pl...

Originally posted by: silverfire

Wow...a new story.😛

Great start. Very different from entwined .

Thank you so much. Yes, it is extremely different from entwined. I hope I can do justice to this story and genre.

Another two brothers story.😛 I'm sorry to compare both but can't help it. These two r happy go lucky guys. No dark past. Yuv wants a simple life n wants to fall in love after the engagement. RK is living in a dream world waiting for his epic love story to start. Hope it didn't come crushing down after the last line.

Haha. Yeah... it's alright if you want compare. They are definitely different from the Kapoor brothers. They do not have dark pasts, secrets... and their relationship is definitely not severed like Rudra and Rishaan's.

Yuv is a practical person. RK is ... as you said... a dreamer... he wants more from life than just life... Definitely it was unexpected for him... Madhu's truth I mean. Let's see how he reacts.

I feel madhu's blindness is not gonna affect him much.

He is only a very ordinary person ... so let's see how he reacts.

Madhu is a prankster.😛 Looks like she enjoys her life to the fullest n doesn't let anything affect her. Even her blindness.

Her disability is definitely not her weakness.

It's sure going to be an epic love story 😛 we r also waiting...

Thoroughly enjoyed the start.

Thanks for starting this story n also for the PM.

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! outstanding start...just loved the bonding between RK and Yuv...I don't know , but RK reminded me of Dean Winchester of supernaturals...Madhu's blindeness was a shock to me...I think her disability made RK's parents to step back from their proposal...Let's see what will be his reaction