RM SS: Fireflies in a Jar (Chapter Three Posted on 24/04)

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: madhurish
Such a WOW start...
Loved it...
Thank you so much!
Madhu is blind? Interesting! With that single bit u hooked me up to this story... U have written it brilliantly... This is gonna be the first story of yours i am gonna read... I have heard a lot about ur wonderful writings from my frnds... Many are die hard fan of ur "Entwined" story... Which i didnt read yet... But surely will do someday...sorry for that ... Bcos now i got the glimpse of ur fab writing... This one update shows how creative, romantic & crazy u r with ur writings...
I love this Rk to the core... He is hatke... Haha... What an epic proposal that was? He took the cake...
Really? Who are these people? 😆 ... And hahah... no... I am actually quite the opposite of romantic... ask my readers! This is actually an experiment of sorts,,, 😆 ... I am really not sure if I can pull it off... writing a light romantic story I mean... 😆 ... Entwined is very different from this... read at your own risk... 😆 but do tell me if you do... 😉😆
About RK's proposal... I am glad you think that was epic... 😆
And yeah that was far exciting than the chicken song prank... Lol.
How many sisters does dipali has?? So rk's parents had planned to get him married to another sister of dipali but not madhu? Well, nothing can be changed now as our hero is head over heels in love with his blind beauty...
You will get answers to all your questions in the next chapter itself,,, RK is definitely attracted to her... but let's see what happens after this revelation...
If love can be blind then lover can be blind too i guess...😆 Well jokes apart... Madhu is no less than any other women... She seems really funny strong willed young & energetic girl... She will be a perfect match to Rk... As they both are so epic in nature... A perfect troublemakers... Haha...
Really its one interesting concept to read... Looking forward to see how you are gonna shape up their relationship...
True. I am glad you liked the concept... actually you will get hint of how is story going to go forward after the second chapter... it might slightly be different from what one would expect... or at least that's what I would like to think... 😆
Oh forgot to mention... Rk & Yuv's bond is so amazing...
Glad you liked their bond. 😳
Thanks for giving us this lovely story to read...
Continue soon dear...

Love,
Sudha

Thank you so much, Sudha for your feedback. Really appreciate it. 😳

Updating in a bit.

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: vishuv
Hi ! Just now read the chapter 1, it was amazing dear. Like rk I didn't realise madhu is blind, I was clearly enchanted by her beauty. She is a prankster. Why didn't yuv inform rk about madhu being blind before itself ? Eagerly waiting to see rk's reaction.
PS. Whichever genre you right you manage to hook up your readers to your words

Thank you so much!

Haha! Yeah... Madhu is a prankster... you can say that... 😛😆

Well.. RK never gave Yuv any chance to have a proper conversation with him! 😆 How was Yuv to know that RK would pull such a stunt! 😆

@Bold- Aww... that's so sweet of you! That meant a lot to me... Thanks!

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: harini_
Amazing update,
rk is so cool,liked this yuv,
loved rk-yuv bonding,
madhu likes to play pranks but didn't expected she is blind,
loved the way how she is not letting her disability affect her personality,
waiting for rk's reaction

Thank you so much!

Yeah ... Let's see how RK reacts to this revelation!

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Maria congrats on the new story.
Loved the concept waiting to see what R.K will do now that he knows Madhu is blind. Madhu is such a bubbly girl never allows her disability to come in between.
Love the bond R.K and Yuv share. Did Yuv tell lies to R.K that his parents what him to marry Deepali's sister.
Continue soon, shall be waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank you so much!

I am happy you liked it so far.

No, Yuv did not lie about anything. He just never got around to tell him about Madhu's disability.

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

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Bun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

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First of all let me compliment Steph on that amazing banner!! Look absolutely stunning Steph!! Fantastic job done! 👍🏼

Now moving over to the chapter, Hahha Maria i don't even know what t say what i haven't said before 😆 Madhu is freaking awesome!!😆 The fact that she uses her disability to her advantage to manipulate not only her sisters but also a stranger she just happened to meet 😆 She knows exactly how to play her cards to guilt trip; leave her opponent stuttering; make them think twice over everything they say so they don't offend her 😆 Pure Evil. However in reality she seems to have made great peace with it and doesn't feel bad due to it 😆 Tbh i just have Chapter 3 Madhu in my mind atm so i don't want to mix that part up with this one yet, which just seems such a hard task 😆 Okay now thinking i just realised that i jumped straight at Madhu which only happened during the last part of the chapter and there actually was Yuv and all the other characters too 😆

Okay lets go back, Yuv and RK just seem to share a great bond. It's cute sibling love which basically is constant nagging at each other yet want to get each other out of trouble when the other needs it. Ur doing a really good job on these two really, like ur keeping them both sweet and comical, with no hard feelings attached, which leaves them with some kind of innocence even. Don't get me wrong on that one...they both definitely aren't innocent 😆 but the bond they share i mean. Gosh i can't seem to describe what i want to say but meh, lets just hope u can understand it 😆

And parents are just our typical asian parents 😆 Everyone can relate to them i believe 😆 And Shamsher, of course she is the innocent one to him, after all...she isn't the oldest sibling right 😉😆 Younger ones will always be the evil ones 😆 And I like this Kaka too, I am presuming that he has been with them two since they were kids, so it's cute how he knew what RK wanted and how he felt. In a way he's a parent too 😳 And gosh now i want Ice Cream...gonna go and get some now 😆

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Haha now gonna type a bit slower 😆 Okay back to story, who's older? Trishna or Madhu? And am guessing Trishna has been more of a victim by Madhu's pranks/mischief's than Deepali 😆

How come RK doesn't really remember the Malik's? Is it just because they lost contact over the years so they faded from memory or does he just have a bad memory like me 😆 Or is it just because of him trying to find his epic moments he forgets his normal average moments? Because well Madhu seems to remember him well...but then it might be too because she's blind and those childhood memories must be her only visuals now..so she thinks and remembers them more than other people because to them it's normal... But i am sure they create new memories through sensations which would be fun to see u explore. Are u gonna write a POV scene or chapter from Madhu's side? I think that would be a nice challenge for u, because u won't be able to use much description really...it would be more of a word play on emotions and imagination. It would be really interesting. You knw what even if ur not planning this in the story, i challenge u to write a small side piece (which u can send to me *wink*) where u express blindness by making the reader feel it...make them feel those sensations rather than imagery. *smirk* 😈

Hahah and i love how RK is even scared of Madhu..she really knws how be a devil in disguise doesn't she? 😆

Looking forward to Chapter 3 now...and especially that one scene😆😳

Edited by Mentally-Insane - 9 years ago

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

fantastic update dear... loved it...👏

i am not at all surprised with the way madhu behaved... i know she will be one hell of a devil as you have shown a glimpse of her wicked mischievous naughty side n the 1st update itself... she is so adorable... very strong, bold, confident & funny too...😃 Rk was totally stunned seeing madhu like this.. he might have expected her to be upset over what he did... well, she said she was mad at him for what he did...his epic proposal... 😆 (i am still laughing over that) but she didn't show herself weak in front of him or she didn't cry... hehe... now i realize why she cried last night in the party... she cried because his proposal was awful...🤣

Okay, so Rk & Madhu were close when they were kids... Madhu wasn't blind by birth... did this happened in some accident? if so i guess even Rk was in the mess... he might have hit his head hard & lost his memory... he couldn't remember a damn thing about his childhood... or i could say about the time he had spent with the trio sisters mainly with madhu... so filmy right, my imagination?😆

hehe... Rk was so relieved that Trishna didn't like him & he need not worry about the arranged marriage his parents want him to go along... LOL... something good happened in all the mess...😆

i loved the bit where Malik says his daughter is an innocent angel & tirshna rolling her eyes & later Rk realizing that Madhu is beautiful like an angel but not so innocent. 🤣

now where she is leading him to?? are they going on a date along with Yuv & dipali? if so his brother yuv will surely kill Rk... haha. 😆

Radha & Mohan are still treating their boys like babies with their scoldings & smacking... 🤣

oh and that 'Good Boy' was one cute moment... 😛

i got so much of fun & enjoyed reading this update... Thanks to you darling...🤗

will surely gonna love your dark humour! Great going! thanks dear!😳

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Marvellous update dear !!

I love the bold and confident madhu u have created. She is such a prankster exactly opp to what her father said. Am glad madhu's family forgave RK. But was he that notorious in his childhood ? Am indeed curious.

If I am not wrong RK would fall in love with madhu very soon. I truly admire the pace of your story. Light hearted dark humour. I enjoy it thoroughly !!

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harini

@harini06

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

fab update and awesome banner,
thoroughly enjoyed reading it
rk's parents wanted him to get married to trishna,
rk is so guilty for what had happened he apologized to them,
loved this madhu she is naughty, strong and confident ,
rishbala were close before but why rk didn't remembered it ,
thanks for the update

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Superb part.

I'm loving this Madhu.

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