RM SS: Fireflies in a Jar (Chapter Three Posted on 24/04)

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Bun

@KazBrekker

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Posted: 9 years ago

3rd time reading it now 😆

I think i've already said quite a lot on it but meh lets do it again 😆

First of all the tone of ur writing for this piece compared to Entwined is so different...it just proves how great of a writer u actually are!! And of course no good love story...actually lets correct that...no epic love story without some obstacle or problem right?

But seriously girl that last blow though amazing👏...i don't think i have so far read a blind love story so that should be interesting and am confident that you will pull this off with ease!!! Probably left hands play for u right here 😆

Hahha and another brother doe, and these two share a very cute bond, much to the contract of the other two brothers (yes i will compare, deal with it 😆) And i really like this Yuv! He seems like a fun guy who wants to keep his hopes and dreams in life to an average achievable level in which he knows he will be happy in, rather than aiming high and then missing it. So from this i am taking in that he is a humble down to earth guy, with an amazing fun persona, he's a charmer and loves his brother.

RK on the other hand, is a dreamer!! He wants more than average, he seeks more from life than the average middle class life. He wants something exciting...something unusual from life which wouldn't make him wake up one day and think that he just had the same life as many others...he would be lost in the crowd of millions. And then he seems totally like a crazy romantic manic, in search for his one true epic love 😆 And he was super cheesy that too 😆 He just seems like a lovable person who might be a bit of a troublemaker or a flirt but he means no harm at all. U have made a great grasp on these light fun and loving characters, i knw u need a bit darkness...but try not to overpower the main Rom-Com feel of this.

There wasn't that much of Madhu, but we got to knw that she herself is a trouble maker 😆 She likes to play pranks, and isn't a person who lets her disability affect her personality. She has kept being who she is, and maybe that is why RK was instantly attracted to her. Waiting for this story to unfold now..looks very promising and i am sure ur readers will love it!!

Looking forward for next chapter now 😆 😳

Edited by Mentally-Insane - 9 years ago

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Survival

@Survival

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congratulations dear on this new SS. I'm sure I'll like I trust you. I'll read it aramse and come back for an elaborate comment :*

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Poorva

@.Poorva.

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res Unres.. Realy.. Realy.. Interesting story.. You wrote beautifuly... Loved the bond between Rk and yuv bond.. They are amazing!!! Madhu never let her disability to affect her life... Waiting for some romantic moments between them.. Will wait for your next update...

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Tanya Kaur

@muzikk93

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Posted: 9 years ago

Such a fun chapter. Loved how madhu doesn't let her disability affect her bubbly personality. Hmm what's rks reaction going to be? Super keen to know. Is your story title a metaphor for something? It's interesting😃

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome start..!! Demerits of having parents in fb😆rk is so cool..Only hv dream to hv epic luv story & hving sumthng interesting in boring life😃brother duo is fav.. Madhu is blind.. Thatz quite a struck at the end..Letz see.. Wht'll be rk's reaction

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unres

Lovely start... !
Rk is a complete dreamer here & his brother is practical & with avg dreams & they both share a cool bond unlike ur entwined story... Also This is light hearted & romcom types unlike that...
Madhu is blind ,shocker at the end & parents in fb is really irritating LOL
now wt Rk does... Waiting to know... :)
Cont...soon

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 9 years ago

Such a WOW start...

Loved it...

Madhu is blind? Interesting! With that single bit u hooked me up to this story... U have written it brilliantly... This is gonna be the first story of yours i am gonna read... I have heard a lot about ur wonderful writings from my frnds... Many are die hard fan of ur "Entwined" story... Which i didnt read yet... But surely will do someday...sorry for that ... Bcos now i got the glimpse of ur fab writing... This one update shows how creative, romantic & crazy u r with ur writings...

I love this Rk to the core... He is hatke... Haha... What an epic proposal that was? He took the cake...

And yeah that was far exciting than the chicken song prank... Lol.

How many sisters does dipali has?? So rk's parents had planned to get him married to another sister of dipali but not madhu? Well, nothing can be changed now as our hero is head over heels in love with his blind beauty...

If love can be blind then lover can be blind too i guess...😆 Well jokes apart... Madhu is no less than any other women... She seems really funny strong willed young & energetic girl... She will be a perfect match to Rk... As they both are so epic in nature... A perfect troublemakers... Haha...

Really its one interesting concept to read... Looking forward to see how you are gonna shape up their relationship...

Oh forgot to mention... Rk & Yuv's bond is so amazing...

Thanks for giving us this lovely story to read...

Continue soon dear...

Love,

Sudha

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi ! Just now read the chapter 1, it was amazing dear. Like rk I didn't realise madhu is blind, I was clearly enchanted by her beauty. She is a prankster. Why didn't yuv inform rk about madhu being blind before itself ? Eagerly waiting to see rk's reaction.

PS. Whichever genre you right you manage to hook up your readers to your words

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harini

@harini06

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

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Amazing update,
rk is so cool,liked this yuv,
loved rk-yuv bonding,
madhu likes to play pranks but didn't expected she is blind,
loved the way how she is not letting her disability affect her personality,
waiting for rk's reaction

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