RM SS: Fireflies in a Jar (Chapter Three Posted on 24/04) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Superb part.
I'm loving this Madhu.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update, thoroughly loved reading it.
Madhu is bold and confident, loved her, she is exactly opposite to what he father thinks her to be. They were close to each other when they were kids but R.K does not remember it. Light hearted dark humour story, waiting to read more of it and how Rishbala are going to fall for each other.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Maria thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The banner is very beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
oh my my
never ever in my thoughts I would have imagine this situation...
and godd..madhu ..she is such a innocent devil...
lol...pooor rk..๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I should have known from the way madhu and team planed the prank, she is the devil in the disguise of an angel...poor rk...I liked the scene where yuvi complained of getting hit by everyone ha ha...I think madhu used to have feeling for rishu...and now sad because he did not remember her
Good work dear,...waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sm1 gussd and it was ryt, depali has 2 sis. Okieee
i seriously doubt dat mohan solvd d prblm. Itzz madhuu i thnk. She must said dat he was alwayz lil dat a prankstr, bcz frm her convo wid Rk it s clear dat she remember all d childhood incidents, bt Rk doesnt. Hmmm๐Ÿ˜† intersting. Waiting fr mreee๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Looking forward to the dark humor๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unresed my comment on page.6 ... Pls check it dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Incredible update again from you ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


So RK's brain actually got jammed for a moment on hearing about Madz's blindness from Yuv - quite a usual human reaction . Ohk so Malik's and Kundra's know each other since the time their kids used to play with each other ๐Ÿ˜ฒ


๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Gosh RK and Yuv's parents are too much ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† And the way RK hid behind Yuv RK and Yuv pushing RK so that they were side by side when Mohan called RK's name was hilarious ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ LOL Radz and Mohan actually smacked their son's like little 4 year old kids and that line by RK that "you can wait and hit us all you want at home" was so cute and adorable ๐Ÿ˜ณ


I must say his Kaka also knows him so well that he dint need to ask RK the reason for his defeated look ๐Ÿ˜› OHK so the puzzle is solved as to what keeps RK calm and happy - and the answer is Ice Cream Sundae ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ OK jokes apart but it was so caring of Kaka that he brought sundae for RK ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


RK and Yuv are really cool ... That scene was quite comic when Yuv found RK already sitting in his car ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


I loved how RK apologised to Malik's and they even forgave him ... Wait !!!! Am I missing something ??? Even at the beginning of the chapter Yuv tells RK about the Malik's daughter and their childhood and even here Paddy and Shammo talks about RK and Madz being notorious and naughty in childhood BUT why doesn't RK remembers any such thing ??? Even if not minutely or accurately THEN a vague memory is always there related to childhood . So how come RK doesn't remember any such thing about Madz and even the other 2 sis ??? Did I miss something while reading or you actually wrote that ?? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Can you clear my confusion ???


DAFAQ ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Here poor hero is all nervous and guilty for his Indecent proposal act and all Madz said was that the proposal was lame ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ RK must have got a shock hearing that ๐Ÿ˜† So Madz could actually make out from his proposal that what kind of movies he watches and if she acts spooky sometimes or not ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž I guess this 6th or 7th whatever sense you wanna call it is present in all the blind people . They have this extra smart sense unlike us which makes them behave like James Bond , Sherlock Holmes etc etc in all kinds of situations ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Not only RK but even we came to know that why Trishu rolled her eyes on her father's statement of Madz being an innocent angel ๐Ÿ˜†


OK now you seriously need to clear this that has RK has forgotten some important part of his life in past maybe in an accident or something ?? Bcz when Madz says that "you don't remember" and RK says "remember what ??" so it means RK doesn't remember some major incident of his past . So Madz getting blind and RK loosing some part of his memory are both inter connected through a past incident or an accident happened in the past ??? Isn't it ??

You have marvellously written it and I am enjoying this story . Yet again this chapter was a mixture of emotions and comedy ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Loved the update thoroughly ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ You are a remarkable and a noteworthy writer and I am enjoying this story . ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


P.S. - you haven't commented on my post on page 4 for the 1st chapter ๐Ÿ˜ญ



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Great start.

like RK and Yuv bonding.
RK like to make things epic and now he will.
like Madhu, she is a prankster.
waiting eagerly for the next part.
Does Deepali have one more sister?


Thank you so much.
I am glad you are liking the story so far.
And yes, you guessed correct. Dipali is the oldest of three Malik sisters. Madhu is the middle one and Trishna the youngest.

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