RM SS: Fireflies in a Jar (Chapter Three Posted on 24/04) - Page 7

Superb update, Maria 😛

Loved it..
Want to read it more..
Add me to ur pm list..

Awesome & fantastic update :)
Really Rk here is cute, funny,lovely... He is mischief & hopeless romantic...loved his character..
The way he hogged his ice cream sundae LOL he's one mistake prone...
Yuv is a charmer really & his char is cool.. Trish is so in angry mode with rk...
Paddy & shamsher behaved elderly & forgiven Rk...
Madhu...godd...she's is not so innocent like looks...
She popped Rk's bubble... He definitely was stunned with her spooky behavior
Rk is not going to b forgiven so easily,madhu is gonna play with him I guess...
He doesn't remember any childhood !
Where is madhu taking him now,eager to read next...
Thanks for PM

WOW!! wonderful update dear...loved the adorable but mischievious devil side of Madhu...RK is a cute baby in front of her...

Originally posted by: manna43

Congrats for ur new story .Totally different one what a refreshing change.Love the bond between rk n Yuv.Bubbly Madhu though blind she is.

Waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: k.atrina75

Hey nice story.. Even I was like don't make a fool out of yourself RK.. And more than that I was worried for yuv and Dipali.. Please don't separate them.. Poor souls.. It's definitely going to be a beautiful story.. And RK will get an epic love story here.. :D

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

Hey I know you don't know me bcz I am commenting first time on your story 😆😆😆 Its OK ... Actually I read this story twice to believe that you wrote something light hearted and funny 😳😳

Hey there! Hahah... Trust me even I cannot believe still that I can write something so light! Maybe I am sick or something! 😆

Well yes I had read your previous work "Entwined" BUT I read it half as I couldn't gather enough courage to read its other half ... No no no , it has nothing to do with your writing style Infact I loved the way you write your stories . Its just so good and you are truly an awesome writer . Well your "Entwined" story had so many violent and sad parts that I dropped the idea of reading it completely bcz My life is anyways f**ked up 😆😆 and plus sad and violent updates will just make me more sad and upset . And I have this bad habit like a normal homo sapiens , that when I read such violent or upset or sad things or stories , then such things just keep on revolving inside my mind for several days making me feel all the more upset . That is why I dint read your "Entwined FF" after a particular chapter .

Oh I didn't know that. I apologize for traumatizing you. 😆 ... I understand Entwined is not for everyone. That's why I have been putting so many notes from the beginning because when I say its going to get dark I mean it. 😆 And I cannot say that it is going to get lighter anytime soon since there is still the brothers'past that I need to reveal which maybe the darkest part of the story. By the way, which chapter are you referring to? Just wondering.

Would have loved to read your feedback on it but I understand. Really... it's alright. 😳

Well in this story you already wrote with Blue colour that it will " be an attempt to make your readers smile" so I am reading this SS and I actually loved the first part . Pretty please keep it a happy or a slight sad one but don't make it violent or upset kind of story bcz I will not only cry but it will just make me like a Devdas for several days 😆😆

Oh don't worry at all. This will be a light story throughout. At least I intend it that way. Let's see what I end up writing. 😆

OK coming to the chapter , well it was just fantabulous 👏👏👏 Loved Yuv and RKs relationship and the way they both behave with each other 😆😆

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked their bond.

🤣🤣🤣 True , I agree with RK that when your relatives or family members are on FB , WA , Instagram , Twitter etc then its always a mess and plus you need to be extra careful to not post such pics or posts that can scandalize them 🤣🤣🤣

That's something that I think many people can relate to... social media comes with its fair share of disadvantages... 😆

ROFL 🤣🤣 I was just imagining that what it would actually look like when RK bear hugged his Kaka 😆😆 Ahhh I just loved your witty lines of "saving the lights in the kitchen , when RK was constantly ringing the doorbell making Kaka angry about the ill mannered person on the door " 🤣

Haha! Thanks! Glad you liked it!

OMG this is EPIC 🤣 I can't believe this that Madz actually planned to play a prank with her own sis by swapping the CDs 😆😆😆 Gosh this girl is crazy ... And RK listened to their plan 😆

Madhu is crazy in this story. Crazy evil and genius... 😆 RK found it interesting. 😆

Gosh that whole scene you wrote so beautifully by describing the laughter and how weird , ugliest , funniest it was ... Never ever I have read any story so far where the writer is actually describing a laughter and that too so minutely , But Girl ! You just made me fall from my bed when I read that description by RK on Madz's laughter 🤣🤣🤣 Hats off to you Babes 👏👏👏

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. Madhu's laughter tells a lot about her personality and RK's reaction to it tells about his.

OHK so RK actually proposed Madz and Yuv told about Madz being blind 😲😲😲 I hope still RK will love her after knowing this truth from Yuv instead of taking time to think about Madz 😭😭😭Loved how you have shown Madz and still she is a true champion 👍🏼

RK is a very flawed and ordinary person. He maybe over the top at some instances... but still it would not have been realistic for him to not react to the revelation. He is not bad person.. he is just human. Yeah... Madhu is definitely a champion.

I wish to see MORE AND MORE of pranks and such hilarious yet witty dialogues from you in ALL your future chappys . I thoroughly enjoyed reading this SS and Girl you really rock as a superb writer - and I am saying this for Entwined as well as for this story (But still I apologise to you that I will not be reading Entwined FF of your's . My apologies for that . Plz don't feel bad about it 😭😭😭)

Thank you so much. Means a lot. Yeah don't worry this will have many such scenes... as you might have guessed after reading chapter two. And it's alright really... don't apologize for not reading entwined. I totally understand. I am just glad you are reading this story.

It was a Cute , Funny and an Awesome update . Good work , keep it up ... Update ASAP and I mean it 😉😉

Unresed m comment now gonna re-read Entwined and make notes to finally unres that one 😆

Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane

Unresed m comment now gonna re-read Entwined and make notes to finally unres that one 😆