RM SS: Fireflies in a Jar (Chapter Three Posted on 24/04) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane

3rd time reading it now 😆 '

I know... you are one of the most patient readers I have got... 😆

I think i've already said quite a lot on it but meh lets do it again 😆

First of all the tone of ur writing for this piece compared to Entwined is so different...it just proves how great of a writer u actually are!! And of course no good love story...actually lets correct that...no epic love story without some obstacle or problem right?

Thank you so much!! Means a lot. And yes... some problems are kind of necessary to make things interesting... 😆

But seriously girl that last blow though amazing👏...i don't think i have so far read a blind love story so that should be interesting and am confident that you will pull this off with ease!!! Probably left hands play for u right here 😆

I have never read one either. 😆 ... haven't read many love stories actually... 😆... let's see how this one goes... 😆 ... and your confidence in me actually gives me confidence... honestly... a little apprehensive about this one... so thanks!! 😳

Hahha and another brother doe, and these two share a very cute bond, much to the contract of the other two brothers (yes i will compare, deal with it 😆) And i really like this Yuv! He seems like a fun guy who wants to keep his hopes and dreams in life to an average achievable level in which he knows he will be happy in, rather than aiming high and then missing it. So from this i am taking in that he is a humble down to earth guy, with an amazing fun persona, he's a charmer and loves his brother.

Hahaha... I would say don't compare but it's okay... you can... 😆 ... they have a very different relationship as compared to that of Kapoor brothers... but then these brothers do not have any dark pasts and severed relationship... 😆 '

Yeah... Yuv is exactly that kind of a guy... he is actually the kind of man that I guess would make your life easy and pleasant if he is your life partner...

RK on the other hand, is a dreamer!! He wants more than average, he seeks more from life than the average middle class life. He wants something exciting...something unusual from life which wouldn't make him wake up one day and think that he just had the same life as many others...he would be lost in the crowd of millions. And then he seems totally like a crazy romantic manic, in search for his one true epic love 😆 And he was super cheesy that too 😆 He just seems like a lovable person who might be a bit of a troublemaker or a flirt but he means no harm at all. U have made a great grasp on these light fun and loving characters, i knw u need a bit darkness...but try not to overpower the main Rom-Com feel of this.

If Yuv can make life for his life partner easy and pleasant then RK is the kind of guy that will make it quite fun ... epic.. and actually he might screw it up a little though. His heart is in the right place... most of the times... unless it tries to take over his mind then he just often screws things up... 😆

I don't intend to make this story dark at any point... but let's see... I have got you to keep me in check.. 😃

There wasn't that much of Madhu, but we got to knw that she herself is a trouble maker 😆 She likes to play pranks, and isn't a person who lets her disability affect her personality. She has kept being who she is, and maybe that is why RK was instantly attracted to her. Waiting for this story to unfold now..looks very promising and i am sure ur readers will love it!!

Madhu ... she is interesting (I hope 😆) ... thats all I am going to say... 😉😆

Looking forward for next chapter now 😆 😳

Originally posted by: arshisfan

Congratulations dear on this new SS. I'm sure I'll like I trust you. I'll read it aramse and come back for an elaborate comment :*

Originally posted by: .Poorva.

Res Unres.. Realy.. Realy.. Interesting story.. You wrote beautifuly... Loved the bond between Rk and yuv bond.. They are amazing!!! Madhu never let her disability to affect her life... Waiting for some romantic moments between them.. Will wait for your next update...

Originally posted by: muzikk93

Such a fun chapter. Loved how madhu doesn't let her disability affect her bubbly personality. Hmm what's rks reaction going to be? Super keen to know. Is your story title a metaphor for something? It's interesting😃

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Awesome start..!! Demerits of having parents in fb😆rk is so cool..Only hv dream to hv epic luv story & hving sumthng interesting in boring life😃brother duo is fav.. Madhu is blind.. Thatz quite a struck at the end..Letz see.. Wht'll be rk's reaction

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Unres

Lovely start... !
Rk is a complete dreamer here & his brother is practical & with avg dreams & they both share a cool bond unlike ur entwined story... Also This is light hearted & romcom types unlike that...
Madhu is blind ,shocker at the end & parents in fb is really irritating LOL
now wt Rk does... Waiting to know... :)
Cont...soon