Well yes I had read your previous work "Entwined" BUT I read it half as I couldn't gather enough courage to read its other half ... No no no , it has nothing to do with your writing style Infact I loved the way you write your stories . Its just so good and you are truly an awesome writer . Well your "Entwined" story had so many violent and sad parts that I dropped the idea of reading it completely bcz My life is anyways f**ked up 😆😆 and plus sad and violent updates will just make me more sad and upset . And I have this bad habit like a normal homo sapiens , that when I read such violent or upset or sad things or stories , then such things just keep on revolving inside my mind for several days making me feel all the more upset . That is why I dint read your "Entwined FF" after a particular chapter .
Well in this story you already wrote with Blue colour that it will " be an attempt to make your readers smile" so I am reading this SS and I actually loved the first part . Pretty please keep it a happy or a slight sad one but don't make it violent or upset kind of story bcz I will not only cry but it will just make me like a Devdas for several days 😆😆
OK coming to the chapter , well it was just fantabulous 👏👏👏 Loved Yuv and RKs relationship and the way they both behave with each other 😆😆
🤣🤣🤣 True , I agree with RK that when your relatives or family members are on FB , WA , Instagram , Twitter etc then its always a mess and plus you need to be extra careful to not post such pics or posts that can scandalize them 🤣🤣🤣
ROFL 🤣🤣 I was just imagining that what it would actually look like when RK bear hugged his Kaka 😆😆 Ahhh I just loved your witty lines of "saving the lights in the kitchen , when RK was constantly ringing the doorbell making Kaka angry about the ill mannered person on the door " 🤣
OMG this is EPIC 🤣 I can't believe this that Madz actually planned to play a prank with her own sis by swapping the CDs 😆😆😆 Gosh this girl is crazy ... And RK listened to their plan 😆
Gosh that whole scene you wrote so beautifully by describing the laughter and how weird , ugliest , funniest it was ... Never ever I have read any story so far where the writer is actually describing a laughter and that too so minutely , But Girl ! You just made me fall from my bed when I read that description by RK on Madz's laughter 🤣🤣🤣 Hats off to you Babes 👏👏👏
OHK so RK actually proposed Madz and Yuv told about Madz being blind 😲😲😲 I hope still RK will love her after knowing this truth from Yuv instead of taking time to think about Madz 😭😭😭Loved how you have shown Madz and still she is a true champion 👍🏼
I wish to see MORE AND MORE of pranks and such hilarious yet witty dialogues from you in ALL your future chappys . I thoroughly enjoyed reading this SS and Girl you really rock as a superb writer - and I am saying this for Entwined as well as for this story (But still I apologise to you that I will not be reading Entwined FF of your's . My apologies for that . Plz don't feel bad about it 😭😭😭)
It was a Cute , Funny and an Awesome update . Good work , keep it up ... Update ASAP and I mean it 😉😉
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Advocate Anjali Awasthi
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