Originally posted by: arshisfan
Another beautiful chapter, a lot going on, things are moving, lot of actions and reactions!
Thank you so much, JJ!
The first scene was beautifully written, how you described Rishaan's emotions, what he felt, it shows how much sensitive this man is inside, the cold facade he shows the world is just a way to hide his vulnerability, I think he had some bitter experiences in the past, waiting to know more about that. I liked to see this side of him
Thanks. I am happy you liked that scene. Yes, what you think is right but more on that later... 😉
Rudra seems quite strong in dealing with this whole matter, I mean anybody would freak out seeing what they just witnessed in the depths of that macabre lake, but I like that about Rudra, he built a strong personality, I also think it has something to do with his profession too, he must have the habit to deal with such things but still not an easy thing to witness yourself!!
Yes, yes and yes! It has a lot to do with his profession and his personality.
I liked how much he cares for his brother, but it still seems he can't destroy the wall between them, Rishaan still insists on keeping the distance and not showing his pain. Moreover he is dealing with his pain and fear after all what he witnessed and he insists on trying to distract Shaurya so that Rudra gets time to get police working on the case! Poor Rishaan how much pain and how many fears he should still be dealing with, I really feel for him especially that after all this trauma, he might also have to deal with a heartbreak when he discovers that Maya and Rudra are made for each other!
There is definitely a wall between the brothers, they cannot break. Rishaan does keep a distance and doesn't ever show how he feels or thinks. And he has a lot of demons inside him and in his past.But let's see how the latest development affects all that.
The scene with judge Prakash is another good scene, what a man is Judge Prakash!!, very impresssive. Another strong character who dealt bravely with the murder of his young son and found solace somehow in Rudra, I like that both fill each other's void without forgetting the valuable professional advices from judge Prakash to our already smart Rudra!
I am glad you liked Prakash Singh. He is an interesting character to write about. Intimidating and amiable at the same time. I am happy you liked Prakash and Rudra's bond.
Maya finally tries to start a normal life, enjoy, and make new friends, but she found herself stuck in the middle between Meera and Viraj, she didn't try to interfere at all but she understood the feelings that Viraj has for Meera. But poor thing little did she know that she will also be part of the argument (referring to the kitchen scene between Viraj and Meera), her peace couldn't last for more than a day seems, I really want to know her reaction after what she heard. Will she ponder over her relationship with Rishaan?! Where will this lead her to?!, I also noticed the dialogue between her and Viraj where she said that she just can recognize love lately though she has never been in love! Will that make her remove the dust off her feelings, will she accept her old identity?! will her new one develop feelings for Rudra?! had she already?! I mean I still remember that she started to trust him and she remembered his dialogue about her needing to live her life and open up?
With Maya, it's mostly a build up. You have all your questions answered, she will get there... soon too... but it needs time and a lot of thinking and a couple of important events... 😉
Anyways I know you will come up with answers to these questions in your next chapters so I'll be patient 😉
Yes, I will... whatever is happening ... whatever you feel is happening to the characters... it's all a part of their journey... they need to go through some things, become a little different person... to finally get there... I don't know if I am making any sense... in a gist... just wait and read.. 😆
Back to Meera and Viraj's scene, I think it was a good one. Love just happens it can't be controlled, one can even decide to move on, but they are never sure they would succeed. Viraj can't move on and at the same time Meera can't promise him anything, she knows she might be running after an illusion with Rishaan but still she can't help it and she can't afford to hurt her best friend Viraj, she told him she can only be responsible of destroying her own life but not his, I'm glad at least she is aware of what she is doing and she isn't delusional!
Meera and Viraj are kind of dealing with same problem in many ways but not really... yes Meera is not delusional... 😆
Bittuji and Maya's scene was endearing, I hope he can become a real father figure to her, she never had one! she dearly needs love!
Yes, I would like to see that too... 😆
Rishaan's scene in the bathroom, poor thing, he is hurt physically and emotionally!! how much more can he take?! I also think like Hiya, maybe his breakdown isn't far anymore!
I also think like Hiyu... 😆 ... at least in this matter... but let's see what happens... 😛
Shaurya is just his creepiest, shrewd self, unfortunately he was one step ahead of the brothers, and now we have an unconscious Rishaan, what comes next, torture?!! Poor Rishaan!! but I know Rudra will come to the rescue I just hope he comes at the right moment.
Yes... poor poor Rishaan... 😆 let's hope that...
Waise why do I think that Shaurya will talk to Rishaan about Rk and Madhubala thinking he is the Rk Maya was referring to?!!
Good thinking! 😉
Eagerly waiting for your next chapters, you better buck up, two years reading this FF, we need a closure soon!!! 😆
I am sorry... I am trying my best... will update in a bit.
P.S : as usual ignore any typos, so lazy to go through my comment once again 🤣
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