Rishbala ff Mending hearts chapter 16 on page 51

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Aaniya

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Firstly.. Congratzzz on your first story.. :)) Catchy & interesting prologue.. Its clear they are pole apart & broken too but as title suggest they will soon be healing element to each... :))

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Aaniya

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Awesome chappy & cs.. Rk hs adoptd daughtr & that sullu ullu & balraj forcd madhu to get married.. :(( hmm..madhu given resignatn & rk said jst ok :-0 ...does he lyk hr already or going 2 fall fr hr..? Am already so curious.. Cont. Soon :))

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Sana

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: as-Sweet
Firstly.. Congratzzz on your first story.. :)) Catchy & interesting prologue.. Its clear they are pole apart & broken too but as title suggest they will soon be healing element to each... :))

Thanks

Yes, they will help each other to heal from their past

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Sana

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Originally posted by: as-Sweet
Awesome chappy & cs.. Rk hs adoptd daughtr & that sullu ullu & balraj forcd madhu to get married.. :(( hmm..madhu given resignatn & rk said jst ok :-0 ...does he lyk hr already or going 2 fall fr hr..? Am already so curious.. Cont. Soon :))

That will be revealed in their futher chapter so let it be suspence

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Sana

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Chapter-2

On the day of wedding...

Madhu is sitting in her room after getting ready... Holding her mom's pic in her hand and saying why did you leave me and go maa... Am I a bad daughter??? Today is my marriage... I am marrying to the person whom I don't love , who doesn't respects me , who only want my body for his desires... Am I soo bad that papa is getting me married so that I shouldn't be burden on him anymore...

Madhu started crying when someone opened the door...

Scene shift , in Rk's car...

Bittuji , how much more time will it get to reach asked Rk

We have reach here chief replied bittuji...

Rk nodded and got down from the car taking bouquet in his hands...

Bittuji we just wish the couple happy married life and leave as soon as possible bcoz priya is alone at home said Rk and entered madhu's house with bittuji tailing behind...

Scene shift to madhu's room...

You... What are you doing here?? Asked madhu getting up from her place...

Oh ho my dear wife why are you getting scared am your husband said sultan evilly eyeing her...

Madhu turned her face feeling disgust from him and said there is still time in our wedding till then you can't meet the bride said madhu moving backwards...

So what there is time in our wedding which is just a formality for the world... You know I don't believe in such things.. I just want said sultan grabbing her and pulled her towards himself.

Madhu struggled from his hold and said please leave me... Don't do this to please leave me...

Scene shift to the venue ( madhu's house)...

Rk was walking inside talking with bittuji when suddenly someone bumped to him and poured juice on Rk's coat... Rk got angry and said what the hell? Can't you see and walk?? You spoiled my coat with your bloody juice...

I am sorry... I didn't see you coming said that someone...

Rk took the deep breath asked for washroom so that he can wash the stains...

Waiter gave him the directions of the room... Rk gave bouquet to bittuji and went in search of the washroom...

Scene shift to madhu's room...

Please leave... Pleaded madhu but sultan was in no mood to listen her pleas ... He try to force himself on her but madhu pushes him off herself and tries to run but sultan catch her again... While in order to catch her sutan tears her sleeves of her blouse ...

Madhu still tried to protect herself from him and screamed for help and then the door bust open...

That's all for today dears... Howz it do tell in comments and please do like it... Thank you

Those who want PMS please mention in your comments

Love sana

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Anntempleton

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Interesting update.

Hopefully madhu runs away n doesn't marry that ullu. God I hate him. But y so short update. You are going great. Keep up the good work.

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Aaniya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Suprb updt Sana..!!oh,Rk came 2 wish madhu..bt dat sullu..So cheap..forcing hr bt wait Rk on d way..Door open & surprise..i mean Rk😊Probably rk will stop d marriage or he himslf will marry madhu😆Thnks fr pm..lyk isnt wrkng bt i'll comnt on evry updt

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Aaniya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

I will keep a check on this story... Bt plzz pm me too...😃

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mydrashti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Nice start dear 👍🏼 continue soon

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manna43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Congrats for ur first story. Concept seems different n interesting. Rk is madhu's employer n came to wish her.But this cheap sullu on the wedding day tried to force her.But I guess rk is there to save her.Like ur writing style .continue soon n thanks for pm sana.

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