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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks Dear for liking the story . 😳

TC😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am glad Dear that you liked the TS. 😳

Keep reading and God bless you 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unresed my post on pg.1
Pls check it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

Res...

Unres...

Sorry for the delay in unresing... I was busy yday...

Okay... Coming to the update...

Beautiful os...👏

It was simple yet different way of story telling... Loved it...😳

Awe... Rk was telling his love story to his seven months baby girl... That was adorably cute...

Superstar Rk turned a stalker but god was so merciful on him... He got the chance to meet his cute beauty on the same day, take her to her home in his car, got to eat with her family & even stay a night with her...ahaan!😉

I thought he will take his move in finland itself as he was so smitten on her but some how he controlled himself...😆

Poor bittuji was curious to know who was that cute beauty but ended up buying chocolate smoothie for superstar 😆

Nice romantic love proposal on madhu's birthday... But i was wondering where he took her? What he showed beautiful to her? 😆

So tmrw madhu will be saying her side of love story to her baby girl huh??😆

Eagerly waiting to know that...😛

Thanks for writing this cute story...😃


Awww Sudha 😳😳

I am so glad that you like the way I presented this story . But still I have a long way to learn on how to write romantic story 😆😆

I am taking tutions from you on writing Rabdi like sweet stories 😳😳

Well yeah you know RK is RK so he can do anything 🤣🤣 so yeah he was so desperate to tell his love story to his daughter .

Unlucky daughter that he dint tell her how she came in this world with lots of *ahem ahem* ☺️☺️

I am touched with your comments . 👏👏

God bless you Dear and TC 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot dear . 😛

I am glad that you liked the story . TC 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BurnThemAll


Awww Sudha 😳😳

I am so glad that you like the way I presented this story . But still I have a long way to learn on how to write romantic story 😆😆

I am taking tutions from you on writing Rabdi like sweet stories 😳😳

Well yeah you know RK is RK so he can do anything 🤣🤣 so yeah he was so desperate to tell his love story to his daughter .

Unlucky daughter that he dint tell her how she came in this world with lots of *ahem ahem* ☺️☺️

I am touched with your comments . 👏👏

God bless you Dear and TC 😳😳


Haha... Rabdi like sweet stories... 😆 yeah... My pet name is jalebi so u can expect only over sugary stories...😆

Haha... Even now he can give a bed time story to madhu... Why story to madhu? He can straight away get into action & give a little baby bro or sis to the little one...😆


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Originally posted by: madhurish

Haha... Rabdi like sweet stories... 😆 yeah... My pet name is jalebi so u can expect only over sugary stories...😆

Haha... Even now he can give a bed time story to madhu... Why story to madhu? He can straight away get into action & give a little baby bro or sis to the little one...😆



Yeah miss jalebi 😆😆

No this TS is for family audience and no explicit or mature content on this .. 🤣🤣 So no biological explanation on reproduction chapter will happen here 🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb start...
Loved rk POV eagerly waiting for madhu's POV
Keep writing :)
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Originally posted by: veni7842

Superb start...
Loved rk POV eagerly waiting for madhu's POV
Keep writing :)


I am glad Dear that you liked the start 😳😳 TC and god bless you 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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LAST PART



(Lines written in Purple are said by Madhu to herself)

*MADHU'S POV*


So princess your daddy told you about how he met me . But that's only his side of story . You need to hear out your mumma's side of this romantic story also .

Well your mommy had gone to Finland with your Trishna maasi (aunty) for a 7 day vacation. So one night I guess the 4 or the 5th night . Wait let me recall it correctly , ammm the 4th night I was at restaurant with Trishu and she was blabbering continuously but it wasn't making much sense to me because I was staring at that cute foreigner sitting opposite to me at the next table and I just kept on staring and staring at him making him feel uncomfortable when he had looked at me .

I knew that he was feeling uncomfortable by my constant ogling session but , as if I care , until suddenly a hot chick came and sat beside him happily . And before I could get a chance to react they both kissed each other and that's when my eyes fell at that lady's ring and realization dawned at me that they are a couple . You know that made me a bit sad but then such things happen . So I guess it was the 5th night then . Yeah so on the 5th night we both wanted to go to pub for drinking and dancing .

First that cute foreigner incident happened and then when I was feeling bad that the foreigner was already a booked man . So I and Didu went to dance floor . Actually I had to drag Didu to dance floor or else sitting their and seeing that man talking to his GF or fiance whatever she was , was making me feel so bad . So We danced and danced till we were literately exhausted of our energy and then we were feeling thirsty so we went to drinks counter . I was never much into drinking so I only had 2 shot but your Massi took 8 shots back to back and then , only I know how I had lifted your Maasi till our hotel room . Because even I was feeling dizzy and I was seeing everything 2-2 . Luckily I took only 2 shots that's why I was seeing things two two . I wonder how Trishu must be seeing things after having 8 shots .

OMG did she see things 8-8 times ?? I was amazed seeing Didu's capacity of drinking . She can give a tough competition to a drunkard as a matter of fact .

Anyways somehow I reached our hotel and trust me honey these lifts takes eternity to come to the lobby floor. Ufff why the hell did Didu has to drink so much when she can't handle herself ??

Madhu - Trishu stand properly na or else we both will fall then we will get hurt then it will pain then we will have to do first aid then

Trishna - Oh ho Madhubla how much do you talk . Stop your then then rant and take me fast to the room or else I will pass out here only .

Madhu - Yeah yeah , but first let the lift come .

I was going to press the lift button when I saw RK the superstar in front of me .

Madhu - (OMG . Someone pinch me please . This can't be happening with me . RK the superstar is in front of me . Till now I have seen him in reel life but today WOW) .

Uff man he is so handsome and was looking at us with a smile . Haaye I just wanted to touch his dimpled cheeks . How could a man be so damn handsome . He boarded the lift with me and Didu . I was going at 4th floor and he pressed the button for the top floor . Ohh my ... Bad luck . He is staying at the top floor . While I was trying to make Didu stand accidentally our hands brushed . I dint look at his face but my heart was doing all sorts of dance that exists in this world and a deep blush formed on my face . Luckily my back was facing his face , else he would have caught me blushing .

Well I was feeling so embarrassed that what he must be thinking about me ?? That such a drunkard I am . Shit Madhu . You shouldn't have drink 2 .I din't wanted my crush to think that I am drunkard .

Oh By the way Wait did I tell you princess that your daddy was my first and the last crush . Though both me and Didu are mad about him but I win the prize in madness and craziness for MY superstar RK . I have watched his every movie first day first show and later on , that very same day I would bring his movie CDs and watch it over and over again .

Anyways since that was my 5th day so I was going to enjoy only 2 more days of Finland and I don't know but after that touching of our hands incident I just couldn't take RK out of my mind . More than the trip I was just lost in my own wold of me and MY RK .

After returning back to India now everything was going normal . But still even after so many days I used to get a deep blush whenever I would think about our hand touching moment . I don't know but that touch was so mystical and astonishing that it just keeps on replaying in my mind 24*7 .

Next day I was getting ready to go to college when I felt that someone is watching me but I couldn't find anyone ?? Its so strange because my guts never go wrong . The same thing happened in evening also when I was coming back to home . Anyways I saw a Pani Puri shop . Yummmy ...
OK stop looking at me like that princess . Really if you don't love Pani Puri then trust me you are a very boring person and it amuses me that how some people can't like Pani Puri . It's spicy water and tamarind chutney is so delicious that yummm .. I was having my Pani Puri when again I felt that someone was watching me but again as usual I couldn't find anyone . I was enjoying my life (Pani Puri) when out of sudden it started raining .

Gosh I tell you , you can never trust Mumbai's rain and to my bad luck I dint have an umbrella . Suddenly I saw someone coming towards me in car . When the person came with his car near me I thought he is some kidnapper , after all such things happen nowadays with girls . I was going to shout but then I saw its superstar RK . OMG another shock . He pulled down his window glass .

RK - Hello Miss ! I din't knew that you loved rains so much that are you planning to stand here in rain for the whole night ? Please come inside so that even I can go home after dropping you at your house .

I was so shocked at first that superstar was offering lift to a girl like me . Was I dreaming or that Pani Puri guy has drugged me by mixing something in that Puri water . Anyways to confirm my doubt

Madhu - Amm sorry . Thanx but I will manage it .

RK - Miss ! Don't worry I am not gonna rape you or kidnap you . It's just that you are sneezing so that's why out of sheer humanity I asked you . Come inside the car .

So yes he was speaking to me , that means he was for real . I wanted to shout out loud out of happiness that Superstar RK was in front of me . I came inside the car .

Madhu - Thanks a lot .

RK - Miss ! may I know your name and even your address so that I can drop you at your place .

Madhu - My name is Madhubala Malik .

The journey till my house was of 15 minutes but these rains makes the visibility of road very less so it was taking a lot of time . I don't know but seeing RK live in front of me made me so excited that as usual I kept on blabbering without giving him a chance to speak . But I must say that he was listening to me very keenly and was also smiling when necessary .

RK - Madhu we have reached your house .

Oh shit ! Why did my house come so early ? I wanted to spend more time with My RK but I guess god wasn't on my side today . I came out of the car when it started to rain more heavily and winds were also blowing .

Madhu - Thanks RK . Please come inside . It's raining heavily so let the rain subside then you can go . Please don't say no . Let me do this much for you.

RK - OK .

Wow now I feel that god was on my side only . RK came to my house and my family was so happy to meet him especially Trishu . She just jumped on RK when she saw him . Anyways since the weather was becoming more and more worse RK had to stay at our house tonight . And more than anyone else who could have been the happiest person . RK stayed in my room till late night and we were talking like a long lost friend . I was feeling so happy in fact I was enjoying his company so much . And after that day we exchanged our number and would talk daily at night like a couple . But the feeling was a magical feeling . And in this way 2 months of our chatting and strong bonding has passed away .

Next day was going to be my 24th birthday and as usual I was happy because birthday means getting lots and lots of gifts , then those N number of phone calls wishing you and the best part about birthday is the cake and the pampering with extra-extra attention you get . That day itself RK had come to my house after dinner and ordered me to get ready . Before I could ask him where are we going

RK - Madhu you have only 5 minutes to get ready or else I will take you like this only . So your time starts now .

I went to my room for changing . I was feeling so pissed off at RK . Firstly , he Orders me , I mean seriously he orders Madhubala Malik to get ready and that too in 5 minutes and on top of it he isn't telling me that where were we going . Anyway somehow I managed my self to get ready in 5 minutes and then later on we went away . Now since an hour RK was just driving his car . I was getting so irritated with his silence . He was neither telling me that where we were going and neither he was talking . Oh yeah and the best part was that , he blindfolded me so that I can't see anything . I don't know what was going on in RK's mind .

Madhu - RK are you going to tell me that where are we going ? Since 45 minutes you are driving without even telling me that where we are going . If by this speed you are going then I think we will cross Indian border within another 15 minutes . Is it that you are planning to go out of India tonight with me and that too by this road trip ?

RK stopped the car and took me out .

Madhu - RK its so dark . Where have you brought me ? Can I open this piece of cloth which you have tied around my eyes ?

RK - Have patience Madhu . We have just reached our destination .

Finally what felt like an eternity we came at a halt and then he opened my blindfold and OH MY GOD ! I can't believe this that all this was happening for real .

We were at a beach and there was a huge sand castle made and it was illuminating with colorful lights . I was just looking at in awe when RK said to me to look at sky and I found a skywriter who has written HAPPY BIRTHDAY MADHU in the sky . And then RK came closer to me and whispered in my ear "HAPPY BIRTHDAY MADHU" ! . I was so happy . Never in my life someone has made me feel so special . I was just looking at RK with happy tears in my eyes .

RK - Madhu ! Today is your birthday so stop crying . And this sand castle is especially made for you . You can later on thank my set people for making this . And you can later on walk inside the castle but before that I need to say something .

Madhu - Set people and you need to say something ?

RK - Yeah . I said them to design a castle set made of sand so that I can surprise my love life .

Madhu (with confusion) - Love life ??

And with this RK bent down on his knees and took out a Pani Puri . Initially I was shocked that why did he took out Puri but then I must give a standing ovation to your daddy dearest in romantic surprises . It wasn't a normal Pani Puri that we eat . The Puri was cut along the center to make room for a ring box . And inside it was a beautiful diamond ring . Yeah instead of diamond box it was a Puri box with ring inside it .

RK - Madhu ! I know how much crazy you are for Pani Puri and so I thought to surprise you with this Puri ring . Madhu I am that Pani who is bitter and spicy but Pani always needs Puri because without Puri is incomplete . And in this Pani's life you are that Puri Madhu ! You are that soft , crispy puri who can complete me . Madhu I want to spend the rest of my life with you . I love you that much Madhu that I will be your stalker , your chauffeur , your doctor , your Johny walker , and your lover forever . Will you be mine as Mrs Madhubala Rishabh Kundra forever ?

At first I was shocked would be an understatement . I was so confound with your dad's precipitous proposal . But I was so damn happy that I can't tell you . Your dad's proposal was the best and magnificent one . But why should boys have all the fun Hun ? I also poured my heart out to to your daddy.

The minute he said I Love You I bent down at his level .

Madhu - Ohh Rishu ! This has to be the best birthday of my life . Rishu though I din't get the time to write any poetry but I will say what I have to say. Never ever anyone has made me feel so special . I always had a crush on you but never had I thought that the person about who I dream all the time would propose me like this . Yes RK it wasn't only you who felt a mystical feeling when our hands touched in the Finland lift , but the feeling was reciprocal . You're the kind of guy every girl would dream of having . I enjoy your company more than anyone else's in the whole world . In these 2 months you have become an integral part of my life . I don't know if this is what is called as love but I always think about you , dream about you , smile thinking about you . It's just you , everywhere I see and feel . I love being pampered and you know just how to pamper me all the time . I love yo so much that yes forever I am going to be Mrs Madhubala Rishabh Kundra . RK I haven't only given my heart to you but also myself , my life to you . My happiness lies in your happiness .

And RK , this Puri will always complete and accompany her Pani even after death . Yes RK I would love to be your's and complete our cute family with small-small , cute-cute Puris who will be loaded with lots of extra sweetness of tamarind sauce . 😳

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And princess whatever your dad said to me while proposing me has remained true . When I open my eyes in the morning the first thing I see is your dad's handsome face with a cup of tea which we Share . I will tell you one incidence that happened with me when I came to your Daddy's house after marriage .

One day your daddy's shoot got over in noon and so he called me for lunch . I went to the place where he has called me for lunch . After finishing our lunch when we were coming out of the restaurant I was surprised . Your dad has arranged a flash mob of a group containing 7-10 people dancing and performing on a romantic song . It was so crazy yet awesome . That flash mob was just for me .

You may think that he is love sick puppy but NO . Love has many forms and every person has different way of expressing love and when someone lays down his everything for you that is what love is all about . Where every second of your life your partner makes you feel special . And pampers you . He might be the arrogant superstar for world see but no one has seen this other side of RK .

RK - So Biwi did our cute little Puri I mean our princes enjoyed this bedtime love story ??

Madhu - Yes . Rishu . Just look at her she is smiling in her sleep .

RK - You din't watch the award show which was going on ?? I received another award tonight .

Madhu (teasingly) - No . I was so happily telling our love story to our princess that I forgot to watch the award show . And what's new to watch in the award shows when every time from last 6 years you are taking the best actor's award . RK for a change why don't another actor gets the best actor award in the coming year ??

RK (feeling offended) - Biwi all these awards which I get is just for you and here you are saying to me that you have got bored of seeing your Pati getting these awards every time .

Madhu - Comm'on RK stop whining like your daughter . These awards never meant to me anything . Anyways you get freshen up I am coming with coffee for you .

And with this Madhu leaves the room and RK feeling sad about his Madhu's words was going to washroom when suddenly his eyes fell at a box kept near their bedside table . He opens the box out of curiosity when he gets happy tears in his eyes . Suddenly Madhu comes from back and takes that box from him and takes out the thing which was inside that box .

Madhu - So ladies and gentleman put your hands together for Mr Rishabh Kundra for winning the trophy of "WORLD'S BEST LOVER , HUSBAND & FATHER" . (yes that box had a gold plated trophy in the name of Rishabh Kundra) .

How could you think that RK ? That your Biwi isn't going to watch her husband receiving the award or she forgot to see the award function where her love is receiving an award ??

Mr perfectionist Kundra although your filmy awards doesn't matter to me much but your wife loves to see her husband's handsome face whenever she gets a chance 😉 but this "World's best lover husband and father" award is something which will always remain closer to my heart in spite of your acting awards because this is the award which matters to me the most . Yes RK this awards is something which you will always win even in our old age .

RK (smiling happily) - Thanks Madhu for giving me this ward and thanks for giving me a perfect family .

Madhu - I should be the one thanking you for loving me and our daughter so much .

RK - Biwi I love you

Madhu - I love you too Pati .




THE END


Edited by BurnThemAll - 10 years ago

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