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jalebi

@madhurish

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

PPPK...Super!!👏👏

Wondering whats PPPK??

Simple... Its... PANI PURI PREM KAHANI!!🤣

Miss. Burn Them All... U really love pani puris i guess... Well, i love too... World's best chaat will be pani puris for me... I can eat them for a whole day & ask for next day too...😆

Okay... Over to the update...

Loved Mad's madness for her superstar...😉

When i read fisrt part i was like... How dumb she is?? Not even realising she was standing beside the superstar but so engrossed in holding her skunky sister...😆

But nah re nah... She was well aware of his presence... She was in her own lala land dreaming on her rk...😆

Okay? What with the simple touch?? Their hands brushed accidently & she was dreaming as if he had kissed her??😲

She would have gone to coma in shock if he had kissed her in elevator...😆

Yaar... Madhu is such a LIAR...😡 She told a white lie to her baby girl...😡 Yes, rk didnt tell those lines to her... I remember well... He told "i m ur soda & u r my lime" but this girl gulped down the lime soda & told pani puri... 😲

But yeah... lie or not i loved the love proposal...😛 Romantic night...😉 At beach side... Sand castle built for her... Sky writer... Wishing HBD... RK going on his knees... Pani puri stuffed with engagement ring... Oh my good god...☺️ His silky soft sweet words...☺️ Hayee! Mein Mar jawan...☺️

When madhu said even girls can have fun i thought wow...she is gonna boldly give him a KISS accepting his love... But she didnt...*pout* dont tell this family story... Kissing is not a sin, its a bliss ...😉

Miss. Burn Them All... U should really learn to write how to give a burning kiss...😆

Loved both Rk & Madhu's POV...😛

Nice bed time story for rishbala's baby girl & also for me... Yes, i m a baby too... Now i m lying on bed too...😆

Thanks for writing such a cute story...😃

Keep writing more...😳

FIRST TO COMMENT...🥳

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

superb update dear loved madhu's pov

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Awesome TS, loved Madhu's POV, loved this super caring and loving R.K, Madhu is lucky to get a husband like him.

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Rochelle

@-Roch-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Aww mommy's point of view is lovely. So she kinda had a crush on that foreigner :P But her hopes were crushed ! Lol But she wasn't unlucky she got a perfect life partner like RK <3 Loved how he proposed her ;) Pani puri ring Lmao! I thought Madhu would have ate it all :P lol if it happened RK should have gone to an ENT surgeon first xD Finally they tied the knot & became proud parents of a baby girl! ;) Such a cute bed time story though I was waiting for a steamy one :P but it's okay Ishu lol :P Hope the comment is long enough though it doesn't look like a thesis :P I'm via mobile & it sucks when at sites like IF :P lol waiting for another story from you soon <3

Edited by -Roch- - 10 years ago

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silverfire

@silverfire

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Aww... Such a cute story. I love this pani puri crazy family. He proposed to with the ring inside the puri.😲 This guy is crazy just like his biwi.

Love madhu's ' Best lover husband n papa' award. Very cute.😳

Thank u for this lovely story.

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: madhurish
PPPK...Super!!👏👏
Wondering whats PPPK??
Simple... Its... PANI PURI PREM KAHANI!!🤣

Miss. Burn Them All... U really love pani puris i guess... Well, i love too... World's best chaat will be pani puris for me... I can eat them for a whole day & ask for next day too...😆

Okay... Over to the update...

Loved Mad's madness for her superstar...😉

When i read fisrt part i was like... How dumb she is?? Not even realising she was standing beside the superstar but so engrossed in holding her skunky sister...😆

But nah re nah... She was well aware of his presence... She was in her own lala land dreaming on her rk...😆

Okay? What with the simple touch?? Their hands brushed accidently & she was dreaming as if he had kissed her??😲
She would have gone to coma in shock if he had kissed her in elevator...😆

Yaar... Madhu is such a LIAR...😡 She told a white lie to her baby girl...😡 Yes, rk didnt tell those lines to her... I remember well... He told "i m ur soda & u r my lime" but this girl gulped down the lime soda & told pani puri... 😲

But yeah... lie or not i loved the love proposal...😛 Romantic night...😉 At beach side... Sand castle built for her... Sky writer... Wishing HBD... RK going on his knees... Pani puri stuffed with engagement ring... Oh my good god...☺️ His silky soft sweet words...☺️ Hayee! Mein Mar jawan...☺️

When madhu said even girls can have fun i thought wow...she is gonna boldly give him a KISS accepting his love... But she didnt...*pout* dont tell this family story... Kissing is not a sin, its a bliss ...😉
Miss. Burn Them All... U should really learn to write how to give a burning kiss...😆

Loved both Rk & Madhu's POV...😛
Nice bed time story for rishbala's baby girl & also for me... Yes, i m a baby too... Now i m lying on bed too...😆

Thanks for writing such a cute story...😃

Keep writing more...😳

FIRST TO COMMENT...🥳

LOL . Yeah Congo for grabbing the first position 👏

Of course that line where madhu says "I feel amused that how people can't love PP " so yes I can just gobble PP as much as I can . Its something without which I can't live . OK no more talks about PP 🤣

Without PP every snack is boring 😉 PP's are my favorite, my lifeline 😆

LOL yeah RK's dialogues were something which even I loved and especially that PP ring part is something which I wanted to add in this . I am glad that you liked it .

🤣🤣 W*F 🤣🤣 OK I told you that I am worst in writing romantic and steamy scenes and yes Hand touching scene was the most anticipated scene bcz "Mere haath mein tere haath ho" 🤣🤣 so this Hand scene made them fall in love 😆😆

Yeah even I loved that skywriting part and sand castle . Wish someone could do that for us in real life 🤣🤣

I told you in one of the comments that you and Roch are giving me tutions on romantic and erotic scenes bcz I can write stuffs mostly for family audience and you know how INNOCENT & CUTE & NAIVE I AM that I can't write such scenes 🤣😉😉

I am quite glad that you enjoyed the update . 😳

God bless you and TC 😳

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi
superb update dear loved madhu's pov

Thank you dear 😳 I am happy that you enjoyed Madhu's POV 😳

God bless you dear 😳

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Awesome TS, loved Madhu's POV, loved this super caring and loving R.K, Madhu is lucky to get a husband like him.

Awww Thanks a tonn Baby 😳 I am quite touched that you enjoyed reading Madhu's POV and you enjoyed reading this Romantic RK . 😊

Yeah Madz is damn lucky lady to get such a sweet husband . 😛

TC dear 😳

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -Roch-
Aww mommy's point of view is lovely. So she kinda had a crush on that foreigner :P But her hopes were crushed ! Lol But she wasn't unlucky she got a perfect life partner like RK <3 Loved how he proposed her ;) Pani puri ring Lmao! I thought Madhu would have ate it all :P lol if it happened RK should have gone to an ENT surgeon first xD Finally they tied the knot & became proud parents of a baby girl! ;) Such a cute bed time story though I was waiting for a steamy one :P but it's okay Ishu lol :P Hope the comment is long enough though it doesn't look like a thesis :P I'm via mobile & it sucks when at sites like IF :P lol waiting for another story from you soon <3

I am glad that you liked Madhu's POV 😳

Yeah she was a lucky lass who after that foreigner incident found RK . Else no one finds a man that soon after such heartbreaks 🤣🤣

Yup PP ring bcz PP's are my favorite so I thought lets have PP ring 😆😆 Oye ENT is for ear,nose and throat so if Madz would have eaten it then she would have to go for some other branch of Docs and not to ENT 🤣🤣

LOL . You know I told you that you are guiding me in writing something erotic bcz still I am that innocent girl so stop polluting my mind 🤣🤣 TBH I am very pathetic in writing such erotic scenes 🤣😆

I am quite happy and glad that you enjoyed the story . TC and God bless you 😳

P.S. - I will try reading some erotic theme books so that in my next story I could use some of its scenes 🤣🤣

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: silverfire
Aww... Such a cute story. I love this pani puri crazy family. He proposed to with the ring inside the puri.😲 This guy is crazy just like his biwi.
Love madhu's ' Best lover husband n papa' award. Very cute.😳

Thank u for this lovely story.

Awww . I am glad that you liked the story so much 😳😳 It encourages me to write more good stories for my readers 😛

Yeah even I love PP so I thought to include some PP romance 🤣🤣

Oh I am happy that you enjoyed that award scene 😳

Thanks a lot Dear for your comments . TC 😳