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Rochelle

@-Roch-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: BurnThemAll
Puh-leese? 🥺 🤣 I don't think your reputation will be ruined when you write something haawt ☺️ In fact Rishbalians will louuu you more & more! 😉🤣

I will SEE if I can write something like that 🤣😉😉

P.S. - Aiyee this is my story thread 🤣 stop making it a CC . We can talk about it at Scrap 😆

Okay sorry for spamming! 🤣 let's move on to scraps or pms 😆

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

It was an awesome start

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ashitha235

@ashitha235

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

wow!!! superb!!!! loved the poetry very much... his confession was amazing... very beautifully written... it was simple yet very effective with lot of love... It was funny especially when RK is so madly in love with madhu and the things he did to know her... liked his self talk... it was so funny... loved the conversation between RK and Bittuji...

Wonderful part... waiting for madhu's pov... continue soon😊

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Congrata on your new TS, loved it, beautifully written

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Back with other story... !! The lift scene was nice, rk watching each & every moves of madhu from head to toe.. God looks so mahairban on rk, on 1st official meeting everything set... Like that line ur my soda,am ur lime... Lovely proposal !!