Rishbala FF: Games of Deception (Chapter 12, Pg. 74) 02-08-2016 (NEW!)

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Tainar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Jyoraj
It's interesting.
Madhu seems to be a simple girl trapped into modern girl.
waiting for the story to unfold. How RK is involved in Padmini's death.

I wouldn't put Madhu in either of the categories. Like most girls now, she's modern but still respects traditional values. :)
How Padmini's death is connected to Kundra, I shan't reveal now. :D
Thanks for reading!

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Aaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

i feel Madhu's mom's death is somehow related to rk...and the word deception_____who deceit whom ???? Waiting for the story to unfold... :-))))))))))))

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Desire6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Bang on start...so seems like..Madhu wants to live a simple life ..bt is stucck wit all choas...
nd ohh her mother was murdered...bt who murdered...???????
nd who decieved her...
her...emotions was penned beautifully...
her ,...hurt...longing ..for dat love touch ...warmth of her momwas penned beautifully..Tainu..

eagerly waitin to See..wat role RK gonna play in dis mystery...

awesome start..cont soon..
waitin
waitin

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Iki(my nickname)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Very good!I love your writing style!👏Feel bad for Padmini though.

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Tainar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: shruthi14
hmm very nicely written !! madhu wants ti live simple but she is not !! padmini was murdered who had done that accident ?? This accident related to kundra?? Waiting for rks intro !!superb interesting start !!cont soonn !! Thanks for pm

Thank you! Madhu doesn't necessarily want to live a simple life. But she is tired and frustrated and that will be covered more in Chapter 3-4. As for the accident, it shall all be revealed in good time. :)
Thanks for reading!

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

WOW!! outstanding start dear...loved it

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punam2712

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY TAINAR

DECEPTION - WONDER WHO DECEIVES WHOM

MADHU IS STRUGGLING TO SURVIVE WITHOUT HER MOTHER

BUT FEELS HER WARMTH AROUND HER

SHE TAKES PRECAUTIONS IN DARK ALLEYS BUT FORCES HERSELF TO WEAR HIGH HEELS TO WORK - A COMPLEX PERSON

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manna43

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Interesting start.madhu has some fear n sorrow. Her mother is no more. Who is the murderer

Waiting for rishabh's entry.

Continue soon.

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Tainar

@Tainar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: lathaprasad
nice start 😊
waiting for rishabh's entry

Thank you!! :)

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Mikolingam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Very touching to read . I just love your description of Madhu's home good choice of words. Madhu is in so much pain wonder who killed her mother. Great start pls continue waiting for RK to come and love madhu pls continue waiting.

Thanks for a lovely start

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