Rishbala FF: Games of Deception (Chapter 12, Pg. 74) 02-08-2016 (NEW!) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Mikolingam

Very touching to read . I just love your description of Madhu's home good choice of words. Madhu is in so much pain wonder who killed her mother. Great start pls continue waiting for RK to come and love madhu pls continue waiting.

Thanks for a lovely start

Aww! Thank you! Being descriptive is hard so I am especially glad my attempt at it was successful. :) Hopefully next part will be posted tomorrow to introduce Rishabh. :)

Originally posted by: Mayajh

Very nicely written!!
So padmini is murdered?? Who did it? Is it kundra family 😲 waiting for Rishab's intro :)

That's a million dollar question! I shall let you all formulate theories for now. ;) Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri

Madhu has lost her mother she is missing her

May be she shared a very good bond with her mother

Her mother padmini went through an accident

But for Madhu it's a murder

Waiting

Thanks for the pm

Ahh...theory of perception. I like it. Maybe Chapter 5 may shed some light. ;) Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: as-Sweet

snd u buddy requst...if u do pms then pm me also as am a active membr & wuld comnt on every update... :))

Aww! So sweet of you. Accepted buddy request. You will be added to my newly edited, shorter PM List. :)

Originally posted by: as-Sweet

ur story is intriguiting...so am forming theories to get to the point...hehe.. :---))) anyways waiting for next update... :D :D

Haha...that's awesome because it means as a writer I am doing my job by making my readers think. ;)

yup...u r gud writter and making we reader to run our little brain... :) :) :) :) and cant help it my user name itself has the word SwEet... ;-) ;-) hehehe... :-) :-) **^__^**

Originally posted by: as-Sweet

yup...u r gud writter and making we reader to run our little brain... :) :) :) :) and cant help it my user name itself has the word SwEet... ;-) ;-) hehehe... :-) :-) **^__^**

OMG!!! This is d 1st tym I m 1st...Yippeee...There is so much depth in d way u describe things...keep it up...
So even Rishabh has a painful history...intrigued. ...
Update soon...

interesting teaser...there is more of rishab's past..!!! Waiting to know it... ;)