Obsession Epilogue pg23(2nd version)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is the 2nd version of Obsession.The 1st 12 parts are as same as the 1st version of Obession.The 2nd version starts from Part 13.
To read the 1st 12 parts plz check this link of Obsession 1.
Thanks a lot for the banner Sydell.

Obsession Part 13(2nd version)
Muskaan and Sultan get ready to go out.Sultan is shocked to see Muskaan in the beach dress.
SULTAN:Madhu!What kind of dress is this?
Mus:What's the problem?We are going to the beach.
Sul:Beach?But before marriage you said you are scared to go there.
She thinks:Oh Madhu...why did you tell him that?But I can't sacrifice beach to hide my real identity.
Mus:Now I am not scared Sultan.Muskaan took me to beach once and after that visit my fear has gone.
Sul:Ok...if you have no fear then that's nice.
They both go to the beach.
Muskaan enjoys herself in the beach.


That surprises Sultan.
Mus:Sultan...why are you simply sitting on the sand?Come...join me...these waves are cool.
SULTAN:No...don't like wetting myself in the waves.I like being wet only in the swimming pool.
Mus:Oh Sultan!Why are you like this?Sometimes you are impossible.
She continues being in the waves.

He thinks:Why do I feel that Madhu is different from how she was during the initial days of marriage?Strange.

After some time Muskaan and Sultan play shuttle cock there.
Sultan does some mistake.Muskaan loses patience.
She shouts:Sultan..what are you doing?Play properly.
Sultan thinks:I am seeing a new Madhu now.Madhu never used to get irritated like this before.


Muskaan runs after the ball and falls down.She creams:Sultaaan...

S:Madhu!

He runs to her and carries her in his arms.He sees Muskaan touching her abdomen in tears.

S:What happened Muskaan?
She weeps:Sultan...I wanted to surprise you.That's why I hid from you.I'm pregnant.
S:What?
Mus:But this fall...I'm scared.
She starts bleeding.They get scared.
S:Madhu...don't get upset.Nothing will happen to our baby.

Muskaan gets admitted in the hospital.Dr informs them a bad news:Sorry,we couldn't save the baby.
They were shocked.
Muskaan is depressed.Sultan holds her one hand and Madhu holds her other hand.
Muskaan cries:Sultan...we lost our baby.It's because of my carelessness.
He caresses her:No darling.Don't blame yourself.It's our fate.We will get another baby.

Geet weeps:Yes Muskaan...don't lose hope.
Muskaan wipes her tears:Yes...when you both are with me I won't get weak.
Sultan-Madhu smile.
Mus:And I have to get ready for Muskaan's and Rishab's wedding.
Madhu:In this condition how can I get married?
Mus:Muskaan...if you become weak how will I be strong?I have no problem now.
Madhu tries to smile through her tears.

Madhu's mehendi function is going on. Some ladies look at her mehendi design.
She thinks:Now what are they going to comment?

One lady:Your mehendi is so dark and clear.
Another lady:Rishab's name is really visible.
Another lady:Muskaan..that shows how much Rishab loves you.
Madhu blushes.
Madhu gets Rishab's phone call.
RISHAB:Hi Madhu..How is the function going?
MADHU:Nice. Seeing my mehendi others say that you love me a lot.
He smiles:What do you feel?
MADHU:I also feel like that.That's how i fell for you.I never thought that i would be able to love you.But your love changed me.
He becomes happy and smiles.
RISHAB:What have you worn?
MADHU:A green and blue saree.
Rishab imagines Madhu in that.
RISHAB:Wow!You look gorgeous.
MADHU:How do you know that?You did'nt see me.
RISHAB:You said i can't see you?I just visualised you now.You look lovely.
She blushes.
Suddenly somebody strangles her with a shawl.
MADHU:Ahhh!
Because of loud music and dance,nobody hears Madhu's voice.
Rishab is shocked:Madhu!Why are you not saying anything Madhu?
He puts the phone and goes to Sultan.
RISHAB:Sultan..i want to see Madhu.
SULTAN:Madhu?
RISHAB:I mean Muskaan..
SULTAN:Can't you wait for one more day?You both are getting married tomorrow.
RISHAB:I want to see her now.
SULTAN:But today?
RISHAB:Whatever it is,i want to go there now.I feel Muskaan is in danger.
Sultan is shocked:What are you saying Rishab?You are just having unnecessary nightmares.
RISHAB:May be.But i want to see her now.Otherwise i won't get peace of mind.

SULTAN:Ok,we will go there now.

After some time,Muskaan comes inside the room.She sees Madhu lying unconscious.
She screams:Muskaan!

Rishab and Sultan are travelling to Madhu's house.Suddenly Rishab's phone rings.
He attends the call.
It was Muskaan.She was crying.
Mus:Rishab...Madhu...we don't know who...but someone tried to kill her.She is in hospital now.Very critical.Come to City hospital immediately.
Rishab is shocked and he screams:Nooo!
Sultan is shocked.He stops driving.
SULTAN:Rishab..what happened?
RISHAB:Bro..i told you..Muskaan's life is in danger.Somebody tried to kill her.
Sultan is shocked:What?Why should someone kill her?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice twist in the story. Who is trying to kill madhu? Maybe rishabh's ex gf.😉
Waiting for the nxt parr...
Great story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsme update
Loved it

Sultan finding muskaan behaviour strange

Omg they lost their baby

Rishbala romance
Both r so cute

Omg who tried to kill madhu

Cnt wait for next
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Update

Sultann already notices that Muskaan's behavior is different
while RK and Madhu are happy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...
Who tried yo kill madhu or want to kill muskaan BT thinks madhu as muskaan...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice twist loving this season
superb update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
Muskaan had an abortion
She is so careless
but sultan he is so caring for her
I think here Sultan doesn't know he is
Married to Muskaan
but Rishab knows
Who wants to kill Madhu
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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now who is trying to kill madhu !! Sultan feeling weird abt muskaan !! Ohh poor sultan lost his baby !! Lets see who is the culprit !! Nice update ! thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb twist
waiting to read who tried to kill madhu or may be someone behind muskan??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks for the pm
this will have twists and turns i think

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