Obsession Epilogue pg23(2nd version) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So sad Muskaan lost her baby...and here the muderer who is trying to kill may be thinking Madhu as muskaan...everything suspense...will be waiting for next !! thanks for PM dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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a 2nd version...interesting start...who is trying to kill her?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
awesome start of d 2nd season.

it was yet another cracking update.

lovely piece of writing.

but who tried to kill madhu.

I think someone try to kill musk an but by mistake madhu become his victim.

do update soon dear.


n congrats for d season 2 dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice twist now its a suspense who wants to kill madhu
eagerly waiting for the next
thanx for pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Thanks a lot for the banner Sydell.

Obsession Part 14(2nd version)

Rishab-Sultan reach the hospital.

Rish:Where is she?

Muskaan cries:Muskaan...she is in coma now.

Rishab screams:Nooo...

Sultan tries to console him:Rishu...Muskaan will be alright soon.


Police Officer Virendar and others come to the hospital.
V:Dr..we want to question the patient.Want to know who tried to kill her.
Dr:Sorry,Muskaan is in coma.
V:Oh!
Suddenly he looks at Muskaan.
V:Do you suspect anyone?
Mus:No.There were many people at home.All were busy dancing and singing.So no idea.It's my fault.
She bursts into tears.
Mus:As a sister i should have been with Muskaan at the party.But i was welcoming the guests and enjoying myself at the party.But who did this to her?She was going to get married.Who could be so cruel to a going to be bride?That's what i can't understand.
She cries.
Mus:Sir...please find out the culprit soon.
Muskaan looks at Rishab:Rishab...nothing will happen to her.She will come back to life.But before that the culprit has to be punished.
RISHAB:Yes.Virendarji..you can expect any help from me.I want justice to win.
V:Sure.But this case is complicated as there is no clue about the victim's enemies.
RISHAB:You are right Sir.She was so sweet that she did'nt have any enemy.That's why we are shocked.
Shamsher weeps:My daughters were very sweet to others.Why did that person try to kill my daughter?I'm cursing that person.

Rishab is thinking about Madhu and weeping.
He thinks about his moments with Madhu.

'Tu bin bataye mujhe le chal kaheen
jahan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin

meethi lagi, chakh ke dekhi abhi
mishri ki dali, zindagi ho chali
jahan hain teri baahein mera sahil wahin
tu bin bataye mujhe le chal kaheen
jahan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin

mann ki gali tu phuharoon si aa
bheeg jaye mere khwabon ka kafila
jise tu gungunaye meri dhun hai wahin
tu bin bataye mujhe le chal kaheen
jahan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin..'{Rang de basanti}.

Muskaan goes near him.
Mus:Rishab!Don't worry.Nothing will happen to Madhu.
He is shocked.He raises his eyebrows and looks at her.
He thinks:Muskaan knows that i know her real identity?Still she is not guilty?Shameless girl.
Rishab stares at her with anger.
RISHAB:You forced Madhu to stay away from Sultan and you married Sultan.He loves you thinking that you are his Madhu.You cheated me and Sultan.Still you are not guilty?


Mus:I know that you are angry with me.But Rishab..i did'nt do it purposefully.It's my love for Sultan which made me do that.You think i cheated you.Actually i did'nt cheat you.If i had married you it would have been cheating as i have no love for you.

RISHAB:I'm not angry with you for that.Infact i'm thankful to you for that.Otherwise i would not have got an Angelic girl like Madhu.But i'm angry with you for cheating Sultan.Poor Sultan thinks that you are his beloved Madhu.What will happen if he understands that you are only a vamp who separated him from his beloved?
Muskaan gets tense.

Rishab goes away.
Muskaan tells herself:Rishab is really angry.He is really arrogant.He may burst out at any moment.If he tells the truth to Sultan...?Nooo.That should not happen.

"Madhu".Muskaan turns back with a shock hearing Sultan's voice.
Mus:Sultan!
She is nervous.
He goes near her.
Sultan:I know that you are depressed about Muskaan's condition.Don't worry.God will hear your prayer.She will recover.
Muskaan is relieved.

Rishab is thinking about Madhu's situation.
RISHAB:Who can do this to Madhu?Nobody was her enemy.
Suddenly something clicks on his mind.
RISHAB:Muskaan was really jealous of Madhu.But she got Sultan.Then why should she be jealous of Madhu?But she must have had some insecure feeling..whether Sultan will go back to Madhu knowing the truth.Did she try to kill Madhu?But how can i think like that?They were really close to each other.Could she do that?No..i'm thinking unnecessarily.
But if my doubt is true?Muskaan did a big crime.If she can do that she can do this also.I have to talk to her.
He rushes to Muskaan's room.He enters the room as the door is open.Suddenly he thinks:Oh!Sultan will be here.
He looks around.
He does'nt see either Muskaan or Sultan.
He thinks:Nobody is here?Where are they?
He hears water falling in the bathroom.
He thinks:Sultan is bathing i guess.
Suddenly his eyes strike blood on the floor.
He is shocked:Blood?
He follows the blood.He sees Muskaan's dead body.
He screams:Nooo!
Sultan comes out of the bathroom.He is shocked to see Muskaan's body there.
Sultan runs to her and hugs her crying:Madhu!Oh my Madhu!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Ohhh god muskaan is dead
Who is behind all this
Really curious to know
But loved this thrilling update
Poor sullu will b alone now
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Omg! Muskaan is dead!
Who is behind all this?
Great twist to the story.
Plz. Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
what muskan dead
whats going here?
super suspense
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Amazing update
i think sultan is behind all this
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Omg another twist
Muskan is dead
Great update

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