FF: Ilzaam | Thread 3 link | Thread 2 Ch 24-39 - Page 9

Originally posted by: silverfire

Every time I think this can't get more painful but I find the nxt chapter more heart wrenching than the previous one. Just finished my quota of crying after reading the update.

Madhu n RK have accepted their fate n decided to move on. 😭 This is so painful. They don't deserve this pain. Two innocent souls suffering so much becos they trusted the wrong ppl. This world is so evil.

Awesome update. Their conversation near the pool is so beautiful. Both living in their dream for a few minutes. Even I don't want their dreams to shatter.😭

Originally posted by: ashitha235

It was emotional update... both love each other but destiny is playing its game... very beautifully described all the emotions and their feelings about the separation... jus strange thought came into my mind after knowing mamiji's illness...RK could arrange crore as his accounts would be under scrutiny... wat if he arrange that sum in the name of helping his mamiji?so that he save madhu... i dont know whether it is possible to arrange crore in less than 24hrs but i don want madhu to go to tony and my RK helpless... jus small hope... but will wait for ur next update...

Brilliant as usual... thnx for the pm... take ur time but dont delay too much... addicted to this story😊

Keep writing😊

Originally posted by: sss333

Hi
ur awesome write.I read all in one ho.feel heavy hearted.icant even imagine madhu"s misery.it seem rk cant help.im crying badly.poor girl nothing was gud in her life.
only bad and sad things all her life.
Please give her some peace.don't separate rk and madhu.
Expecting happy ending wit heavy heart

Originally posted by: sweetdear

Splendid !! The way you encapsulated that in a pool scene, by that I mean the prologue is brilliant!!! Astoundingly brilliant !! In fact I laughed of course after I was done with my crying thinking that " there is still a teeny tiny thing called HOPE" and I love you for that particular breather Haha !!! Picture Abhi baaki hai Mere dost...hai na TK 😉 !!

I know I haven't commented for the previous updates that's because I refused to believe that an industrialist especially in India does not have an overseas account or some funds or someone to whom he can just lend/transfer funds !! He doesn't have a backup financial account for that matter...hmmph I do consider that a lil shocking !! But now I do see a ray of hope - his maasi n her operation etc etc...now at least he can transfer funds n provide the genuine reason for it n God use that money to save Madhu !! Well this is me raking my brain lol !! Hope you have a better idea hehe !!

I loved everything in the update from MR RKji to rishabh ji, from reality to few moments of dream-living wow n RKs sorry phew!! Finally lol n Madhu n her secret dreams and btw I did really think that they will get intimate for one last time as it is madhu looked ravishing in that black saree and gifted bangles...then I remembered picture ke saath " raat Abhi hain baaki" ..so kya pata tomorrow's sunrise might bring enough Sunshine to last a lifetime !! Hope I am RIGHT haha !!

Ps : I have a wish TK ! The way how the article mentioned Madhu as some London based model, I want RK to prove just the same somehow 😉..may be with Trishs help or something !! Guess that will be one hell of a slap on that sl*tty dips face !!!

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Excellent update teekay 👏

Rk and Madhu's feelings described beautifully. This update made me cry. I am reallly sad at RK's helplessness. He is an unlucky fellow. Doesn't he deserve some happiness and a peaceful life. I really want dipali to end up betrayed by all of her fu** buddies. And Madhu..my poor Madhu. She is getting ready to go back to Tony. She did not pack any of those anarkalis given by Rishab. I cried for her. I just hope some day she escape from Tony and his dirty world. I wish to see her fulfilling her dreams. I want her to take that black sari with her. That Rk bought for her, its his first gift for her. Cant wait for the next update teekay. Pls update soon

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

i just loved the way u wrote the pool scene n dialogues...! 👏

heartwrenching update!!😭 so desperately waiting for the next one now!

i cant tell u how gud the pool scene is! i was moved! the shift of emotions from awkward to pleasant to joking to friendly to appreciating to guilt to fear to sadness to finally emptiness!! 👏 just BRILLIANT!!! 👏

luv u 🤗

Originally posted by: Tainar

I read it a few hours ago and I still have no words. The scene by the poolside was so poignant and beautiful but also so heartbreaking. 😭 I am keeping the hope alive that somehow I'll get my happy ending and my babies will get their dream world back. Please excuse my maudlin', I have never been able to see or read about my babies suffering. Makes me turn into a protective mama jungli billi. 😳

Love your writing boo! Please update soon. ❤️

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Looks like teekay is busy again. I am waiting to read an update for 3 days. Teekay kaha ho tum??

Originally posted by: teekay

Busy.

Mindf**ked.

Also confused.

I always had a plan A for the story, but then I thought of a plan B a few days ago and then I thought of a plan C...all different directions where the story could go starting Ch 26. So I am brooding over whether I want to stick to the original, which I still love, though some of you won't, or change to a different tack, which would need me to think up the future.