FF: Ilzaam | Thread 3 link | Thread 2 Ch 24-39 - Page 11

Too gud.I'm really happy about your update.

Loved at the core

Looking forward😊

written beautifully.

All the emotions pain,love,anger, desire,passion came out beautifully.

Finally the realization.

Rishabh is determined to fight against all the odds.

Destiny has played dirty earlier so better they win this one.

Needless to say will be waiting for the next part.

Hugs back.

A smile beats tears that you tell me each of my chapters always leaves you with, doesn't it?😊

i never thought i would find lovemaking such beautiful and serene and pure...

👍🏼

First of all I was not expecting a hot update from u, but as you said that was much needed in this situation. Let me tell you the update was quite steamy and you wrote it beautifully with out even a pinch of vulgarity. The update starts from the pool side where Madhu sits and Rishab went back to his room. Madhu took initiative this time and Rk gave in. I felt sorry for both of them. Rishab for the first time felt like he is wanted.. I can clearly understand his situation. He holds himself responsible for Madhu's miseries. But I am not agreeing with him, his lawyer was right. He cant save everbody ,he is not god. Finally he came to a conclusion that he loves Madhu. He is no more confused, he dont want to let her go, he dont want her to be touched by other man.. I hope its not too late.

My Madhu, sweet little madhu. I dont know whats going on in her little brain. Her bold avtar with RK scared me. She seemed determined, she dont want to be anyone's burden or obligation. I felt like she made peace with the fact of her life and which leads to her bold actions. Now I think Rk will ask Madhu to stay back. But I have a feeling that Madhu will refuse to stay with him. She will go back to tony and then to the next client.

I am really sorry teekay, you gave a positive update but still I am hoping for the worst. Pls dont hate me for saying this, but I think Madhu have to go back . Her staying with him may put him in danger so she have to go bac to that hell only to be saved by him later.

Next part jaldi dena cant wait to read. Curiosity killing me..