FF: Ilzaam | Thread 3 link | Thread 2 Ch 24-39 - Page 8

I read it a few hours ago and I still have no words. The scene by the poolside was so poignant and beautiful but also so heartbreaking. 😭 I am keeping the hope alive that somehow I'll get my happy ending and my babies will get their dream world back. Please excuse my maudlin', I have never been able to see or read about my babies suffering. Makes me turn into a protective mama jungli billi. 😳

I read this 12 hours ago and even now I truly don't know what to feel. I have to disconnect myself from the story to prevent the grief from overtaking me. That pool side scene, oh just thinking about it breaks my heart into a million little pieces. It started so happy and good about them and their relationship and slowly piece by piece it degraded and in the end went to hell.

Very painful to read cause they both are suffering in silence . Bapa Pls save them some how . Very well written I can feel for Rishbala and their pain . Thaks you for the very emotional chapter. Pls continue soon

sad for rishbala

Very emotional update. You've expressed their point of views brilliantly. 👏 albeit the good moments were shortlived, it at least showed how deeply they're in love with each other and yet they don't realize that😳

awesome update...

Looks like teekay is busy again. I am waiting to read an update for 3 days. Teekay kaha ho tum??

Originally posted by: madhurish

Oh mommy!! again teekay made me cry... a hysterical cry...
its so painful...really...unbearable...why oh why i couldnt just take this as a story...a fiction...??
girl.. hats off to u... u r exceptionally good in writing emotional stuffs...the feel...the pain...the fear...everything feels so alive...so true...its really aching my heart...update by update the amount of pain & sadness is increasing...
okay...i got a ray of hope...yes...i think rk will send madhu to look after her mami till d court case ends lol...if not he need to find a way to protect madhu...just wonder how he will save her?? please...please he cant let her go...hope he does something...
loved the pool scene...poor girl instead of being mad at him...she dressed up in black saree to please him lol...that small bit was light...soothing to read but it didn't last long...again d pain lurched in full speed...gosh! rk was talking abt his step mom's betrayal but what had happened d to madhu was disgusting...how could a father force himself on his own daughter?? thats terrible...wish i could castrate all those sick men... & torture them till death...
it shocks me to see madhu still strong & holding to her composure...
wonderful writing dear...loved it...please update soon...i really cant take my mind out of this story...
thanks for the pm dear...