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Beautiful... I never cried for any of your chapters but while reading this I felt like crying not because it is emotional but it is simply beautiful... for me first time they made love which is so pure and filled with love only love...

Madhu wanted to be herself one last time and show her love to Rishabh before she became mitasha... that was so heartbreaking...

Loved Rishabh's inner thoughts about madhu and finally realization...at the end of the update I was smiling reading his confession and determination to protect her... determined to fight with the destiny... loved the update to the core...

About your writing... its fab, marvelous, superb... actually falling short of words to praise you...😊

Eagerly waiting for the next part... thnx for the pm...

Wow...awesome update :) the internal battle within him as to what the heart wants to what the mind thinks was amazing before Madhu came into the room. The love making was written with so much passion... simply loved it. Then his realization that she was his soul mate was so well written that I am smiling like an idiot reading the last part. 'His soul knew", "I love you Madhu, Not just one time. Every time. Forever" and 'If destiny wanted to separate them now, she would have to play dirty' - my favorite lines. After long time, it feels that everything is hopefully going to be right :) :)

Originally posted by: teekay

Hugs back.

A smile beats tears that you tell me each of my chapters always leaves you with, doesn't it?😊