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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi, im back with another imagination or story. this one is about the raja and madhu in season 2. im just starting my story from raju's accident and raju recovering to raja 😆. after that cvs spoiled our show. this is my own imagination from there ... do read and enjoy. leave your comment if you get time. or else no worries 😛

ps.... this is for few new friends who like my story. actually i dont write long one. it will be one or max 2 posts. that's it. i dont explain scenes, character, wont give importance to other characters. my main focus is one and only rk madhu. i stick to the original character rishbala we know. you should see dvd while reading my post 😉. though i'm not very good in hindi, love to write in hindi bec how much ever we try we cant express the same feelings in another language. main thing i dont give any name to my imagination as i'm not writing stories like others. i name it as my imagination or episode. but few are getting confused. so now titled it as story 😕😆. it looks weird for me 😆.
love to see forum members instant expression to my stories though i get very less response. and feel odd to send pm and ask the people to read my post. so very less pm on request😛.
ok... enough of intro...
bear with my hindi 😛
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after that accident AK did, in rk mansion all celebrating Karwa chaoth (KC) function. mudhu waiting for raju and raju entering the place in tapori style, introducing him as raja and BBB ak... removing all foreign bodies (ak, babe, doli and her hubby, leela and part time mrs.ak 😆😉) from rk mansion ... all same as in the show.
then madhu goes to chawl after having fight with raja. after that raja calls press and inform him as ak's heir and takes over all the property... this also same ...

now...

in chawl, madhu says to sunny that she wont go back to raja/raju as he has changed a lot and a murderer too. and sunny too supports her.

after few days ...

bittuji comes back to mumbai. madhu is shocked to see him and doesnt know how to face him as she hid about the marriage. then decided to tell everything

madhu...''mamachacha, mujse bahut badi galathi hogayi. aapse bole bina mene shaa... ...''
bittuji cuts her in between ... ''me sab jaantha hoon. raja kaha hai? tum yaha akele kiya karrahi ho??''
madhu... '' raja??!! 😲... aapko kaise patha raja ke bareme??!!''
b...''madhu... mene raja ko beja, tume, us AK se bachanekeliye''
madhu...''kiya??!! 😲😲😲 aapko pehle se hi patah hai me AK se shaadi karne wali hoon??!!''
b...''tab tum aur leela phone pe baat ki na, uske baat muje achcha nahi laga. aisa laga kuch galath hone waala hai. phir...''

flash back...

at madhura... in a confused state, bittuji is sitting in a temple where radhaji aur madhu used to go.
panditji asks him after seeing him sitting there for long time in deep thinking
bittuji tells what he feels. after knowing that bittu is radhaji's relative panditji decides to help him.
pandit takes him to next town where a devotee of lord krishna who used to visit the temple in madhura lives. he is very rich man and good person too. that rich man also decides to help biituji bec of panditji.
through his son, he gets all the details regarding madhu, her work with ak and her shaadi too.
bittuji is shocked to hear the news. doesnt know what to do. he started telling everything about rk, madhu, and this ak, his entry into BW, rishbala's death. he pleads that rich man to save madhu as bittuji cant do anything against AK and in this stage.

rich man also wants to help him but doesnt know how. he asks his son to help bittuji in this matter. but his son is not interested in this anymore.
bittuji after hearing this from that rich man... says...''me aapka beta se baat kartha hoon. abhi mereliye aap dhono ke alava koyi nahi hai madhath karnewale. aur time bhi zyadha nahi hai ak aur madhu ki shaadi keliye''
rich man...''teek hai. mera bata delhi gaya hai. jab wapas aatha hai tab aapko kabar dhetha hoon''
till that time bittuji didnt see his son. all the convohappened between only bittuji and rich man.
after his son's arrival, bittuji goes back to rich man's house.

he is shocked to see his son
he is none other than his CHIEF ... RK ... 😕
bittuji ...''chief !!! ''
rich man...'' ye hai mera beta. '' introduces them to each other.
bittuji is still in shock and cant believe his eyes. them he asks his son to help him to save madhu.
son ( raja ) ...'' dhekiye. is matter se muje koyi lena dhena nahi hai. phir bhi mere papa ke kehna par aapki madhu ki bareme pooch thach kiya. isse zyadha kuch nahi kar saktha hoon and not interested also.
aap ki madhu bachchi nahi hai. woh khuth ye decition leli hai aur shaadi keliye bhi ready hai. ab me kiya kar saktha hoon. sorry''
b...'' nahi... aapko dhekne se pehle muje koyi ummith nahi. par ab muje pura yakeen hai isrf aaphi hame madat kar sakthe hai, madhu ko bacha sakthe hai. aur koyi kuch nahi kar sakthe hai ''
bittuji cant convince him and leaves
that day rich man's son (raja) ... receives an email from his friend saying that 'ak is searching for a mentally challenged person to marry madhu for revenge'.
raja...' poor girl.' feels bad for her. then ' stupid, who asked her to do all these hide and seek game and now gets trapped in her own game'
his friend had sent her photo too long back during the inquiry about madhu and ak... he never opened that before. now he wants to see that photo. he opens the photo

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next day...
raja calls bittuji and says ''i'm ready. ''
bittuji and rich man ...'' 😃''
rich man...''suddenly kiya huvaa. kaise man gaye ho??!!''
raja tells ak's plan to biituji and asks ...''ab muje kiya karna hai''
bittuji ... ''aapko jo achcha laktha hai keejiye. aap par muje pura parosa hai 😃''
raja...''ok. abi keliye mere paas koyi idea nahi hai. but you dont worry. you stay here itself till i say and behave as if you dont know anything. i will keep informing you what ever i do. aap 'ha' bole bina me kuch nahi karoonga''
bittuji feels so happy ... and raja starts his mission 😉

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present day...

bittuji to madhu ...''jo bhi yaha huva muje sab patha hai aur mera permission ke saath hi huvaa. raja kiya kiya woh bhi muje patha hai''...

madhu stunned to hear this and didnt expect all these from mamachacha.

that time raja comes to chawl ... bittuji greats him
raja... ''kaise hai aap??!! dhadhi ma teek hai na??!!''... ''me madhu se milne aaya hoon. dhodi dher unse me mil saktha hoon ??!!''
bittuji...''kaise baat karthe ho''... leaves that place leaving raja and madhu alone.

madhu feels embarrassed to face raja directly ...
raja...''so, bittuji ne sab bathadhiye honge. toh ab muje kuch aur bolne ki zaroorath nahi hoga.
well, ye lo''... he gives some documents
madhu takes that and looks into that ... '' 😕 😕''
raja...'' ye... AK, sorry RK's property hai. jo tume legally milna chagiye.''
madhu...'' 😲 😕 😕''
raja...'' tum koun ho tumhi nahi jaanthi ho. baat me tumari dhadhi se poocho. ye sab tumara hai. tum us rk mansion ka aur property ka eklotha varis ho. jo bhi log waha rehthe the sab ko mene hatadhiya. sab ab legaly clear hai. ab tume koyi kuch nahi kar sakthe hai.
AK... ab police custody me hai. un par case file kiya gaya hai, me aur bittu ji milkar...''
madhu...''ak, zindha hai ???!!! 😲😲😲 ''
raja...''ha... woh sab hamara plan hai. woh accident , ak ka death... sab hamara drama ke ek issa (part) hai. AK, ek seedha sadha adhmi nahi hai. unse hum direct war nahi kar sakthe hai. jo bhi karna hai unniki tharike se hi karna hai aur unka saath dhekar karna hai. kabi kabi une jeetne dhekar phir karna hai... isiliye toh woh raju character, tapori character, murder drama, etc, etc.
ab AK, sab kuch man kuka hai, rk ka murder se lekar raju ka accident tak. sab evidence collect kardhiya mene. so ak, bahar aana toh is janam me nahi hoga. ya toh zindhagi bar jail me rahega nahi toh fasi milega.
so ab tum safe ho. tume tumara sab kuch milgaya hai. dhadhi ma bhi teek hai. jo mene bittuji se wadha kiya woh mene kardhiya. so my duty is over. mere character yahi katham hotha hai. bye. take care.''
raja turns to leave. but stops and gives another document to madhu
raja...''forgot to give this''
madhu...''😕 😕''
raja... ''ye... divorce paper''
madhu... '' 😕''
raja...'' tumara shaadi raju ke saath jabardhasthi se huvaa. woh bhi mentally challenged person se. sabke upar ye sab ek drama hai. ... so legally not valid. phir bhi tume aisa laga ki tume thalak ki zaroorath hai, tum isse use kar sakthi ho.
good luck''
he leaves the place.

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continuation... see below

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Posted: 10 years ago
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bittuji waiting outside asks raja
b...''ab ye kiya hai??!! ab tak tumne jo bhi kiya mujse inform karke kiya. isse kiyu nahi bathaya??!! ye teek nahi hai''
raja... '' sab teek hai. aajke baad, madhu ki zindhagi me jo bhi hona hai woh madhu khuth decide karni hai. sab kuch unki hatho me hai. chaltha hoon''

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madhu... could not believe what she heard. 'ithna surprises ek hi din me??!! ye sab ke peeche mamachacha. aur raju... woh bachcha nahi tha. ek normal insaan. unone ye sab kiya !!!!!'

next days...

she looks at the divorce paper... she recollects their wedding done by ak on revenge. then she remembers all the incidents with raju... first time she spent with raju,... the asthma attack drama. so woh drama mereliye. muje wapas unke paas bulanekeliye...amusement park, chocolate, all those kel, hazi, masak, hugs ... shaadi jo madhune pure dil se raju se kiya ...'

madhu doesnt know how to react and take what ever happened. she is actually in shock. without her knowledge so many things happened in her life. 'zindhagi ne muje kaha se kaha leke aagayi??!! madhura se mumbai. ak se mulakath, piyaar ka nadak, shaadi ka drama aur raju... raju se piyaar... ye, ye sab natak hai??!! pura drama??!! isme kiya sach hai ya sach hi nahi hai??!!' ... tears started coming from her eyes suddenly she felt all alone, no one is for her... ' dhaadhiii' ...muje dhadhi se milna hai'

she goes to madhura with bittuji. she asks forgiveness from radhaji who is still bedridden. ''ye sab aap se joot bolkar mumbai jaanese waja se huvaa. muje maaf keejiye dhadhima. agar , raja aur mamachacha nahi hai toh muje kiya hotha soch bhi nahi sakthi 😭'' ...

radhaji ...''ye raja koun hai??''
bittuji explains everything to her. and she thanks raja and his family for helping them.

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next day, bittuji gives info to radhaji that 'raja's marriage is fixed. this weekend is engagement and next week marriage.' madhu too hears that news and leaves the place.

after hearing that news, madhu is lost. she feels something is breaking inside. she could see only that innocent, cute, shararath raju with whom she fell in love.

how long she has been sitting like this she herself doesnt know. when she comes to sense, she gets ups and comes to bittuji
''raja ka ghar kidhar hai??'' in bold and stubborn voice

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in raja's house...
madhu enters in. no one is there. she goes inside, looking everywhere for raja and finds out raja sitting in his room and doing some work on the laptop.

madhu clears her throat ...
raja... looks up and stunned to see madhu standing there.
raja...''ma... madhu !!!! ''
madhu comes inside and holds his shirt collar and asks ... ''shaadi karne jaa rahe ho??!! woh bhi agle hafthe hi 😡''
raja...'' madhu, chodo muje. ye kiya kar rahi ho??!!''
madhu...''me nahi chodoongi. muje jawab dho. sab milke drama kiya,... ak mujse shaadi karne ke drama... mamachacha aur tum, muje ak se bachane keliye drama... sab karke muje akele chod dhiya. ye sab me, meri galthi kiya hai??!! me sirf ek joot kaha, woh bhi dhadhi ma ko bachane keliye, unki ilaj keliye noukari karne mumbai gayi thi. '' she leaves his collar and continues ...

''maanthi hoon me ak se attracted thi. woh meri bachpana tha. par mene unse shaadi karne keliye nahi tharas rahi thi. ak, leela mami sab milke muje force kiye the.''

''is sab me meri galathi kiya hai??!! is sab me muje kiya hogaa, me kiya soochoongi, mera dil kithna dhuk hogaa, kisiko bhi parva nahi hai. sab mere zindhagi me aake drama karthe hai, koyi revenge ki drama, koyi bachane ki drama (looks at him). phir wahi chood ke chale jathe hai'' ... tears roles down from her eyes.

raja just looks at her and does nt say a word.

madhu wipes her tears ...''shaadi karne jaarahe ho !!! me, dhekthi hoon kaise karthe ho. 😡 jaanse maardaloongi us ladki ko jisse tum shaadi karneki sapna dhekrahe ho.''

again she holds his collar and says ''tum mere ho, sirf mere ho. mujse padla lenekeliye huva ya bachanekeliye huva, ya phir kisi keliye bhi huva... lekin shaadi hi huvaa na !!?? muje toh kuch nahi patha par tume toh patha hai na, hamara beech kiya horaha hai ??!! woh bhi dho bar... phir ye divorce paper kiyu dhethe ho??!! me tume kisi aur ladki ke saath dhek nahi sakthi''... starts breaking down again and sits down folding her legs and hiding her face on that

after few seconds...
raja...''madhu ... madhu...'' tries to look at her face
she doesnt look up
raja...''rovo mat. kisise bhi shaadi nahi karraha hoon''
madhu looks up and sees him surprised
raja...''ha... sach me''
madhu...''par mamachacha ne kaha...''
raja...''ha, woh mene aisa bolnekeliye kaha.''
madhu...''😲 ''
raja...''agar mene aisa nahi kiya toh tum is thara tumari dil ki baat nahi bolthi... 'tum sirf mere ho, sirf mere ho' '' he imitates her words
madhu ... '' 😳 ''... toh ye bhi tumara drama hai ??!!''
raja... ''ha '' smiles at her
that's it... she hugged him tightly. 😳 . he tooo 😳😳
raja...''tume patha hai. pehli bar tum muje galelaga rahi ho''
madhu hits him playfully ... ''aisa kiyu kiya ??! me toh dar gayi thi. muje laga me tume hamesha keliye ko dhoongi''
raja removes her specks and wipes her tears ... ''kaha na, aisa kiyu kiya''
madhu...''par woh thalak paper ??!!! ''
raja...'' madhu, aaj tak jo bhi huva, muje patha hai. jab hamara shaadi huyi, first time aur uske baat dhusri baar tumare kehne par, tab bhi me khosh me tha. muje patha hai, kiya horaha hai, kiya kar raha hoom, kiya wachan dhe raha hoom, me kisse shaadi kar raha hoom... par ye kuch bhi tume nahi patha. so muje laga, is shaadi ko tum ek jabardhasthi rishtha nahi samajna, tume nagi lagna me tume dhoka dhiya aur iske baat jo bhi hona hai tumehi decide karna. ek aur selfish reason bhi hai, muje ye jaanna zaroori tha ki tum mujse piyaar karthi ho ya nahi. muje patha hai tum raju se piyaar karthe ho. par mene jaanna chatha tha, sach janneke baat vahi piyaar tum mujse karsakthi ho??!... kiyuki, me jo bhi tha, raju, raja ya koyi x, y, z ... ... i love you madhu, dil se. tum muje pura chagiye. iskeliye toh ye sab kiya. tume rulanekeliye nahi''... ''andhar muje bhi thoda dar tha kayi tum us divorce paper ko use karthogi ''
madhu holds his hands ''ithna piyaar karthe ho mujse !! pehle muje laga, tum, mamachacha ke kehne par shaadi ki drama keliye, ab muje chod dhiya''
raja...''me bachcha nahi hoom madhu. kisike kehne par ek ladki ko bachane me madhat karne tak teek hai, lekin shaadi karna ... too much. ''
madhu...''phir tum kaise kiya ??!!''
raja...''kiyu ki, me tumse piyaar kartha tha, kartha hoom aur kartha rahoonga''
madhu ...'' kiya ??!! 😕 ''
raja...'' me tume pehlesehi jantha hoon. hum dhono pehle hi mil chuke hai. madhura me PK mandir me''
madhu...'' kiya 😲😲''
raja...''aise anke badi badi karke muje dheko mat ... kuch ho raha hai 😳😉''
madhu ... ''😳''
raja...''dho saal pehle, ek din me madura aaya tha mere papa ke saath.''

flash back...

in PK temple ... it's drizzling slightly... madhu comes there with a tray fully decorated with flowers and one big mala.
madhu...''panditji, dhadhimane ye dhene keliye kaha. lejiye''
pandit after doing pooja gives back the pooja tray and blesses her ...''jaldhi tume achcha ladka mile''...
madhu blushes and truns to move.
that time the peacock feather that she kept on that tray starts flying in the air.
madhu ... ''arre ...'' runs behind that
after running for few distance, she sees that the feather is on someone's pooja tray kept on the bonnet of the car and a person standing beside that car, showing his back to her and talking on the phone.
she walks towards that tray ... ''toh yaha hai aap. mene appko kaha kaha doonda.''
that person turns ...''excuse me !!! ''
his voice doesnt reach her ears and she takes that feather from the tray and starts walking while talking to that
that guy...starts looking at her till she disappears from his sight. he likes that girl. 'koun hai woh??!! naughty, choti si, cute si... woh face aur... woh anke ... '

present ...

raja...''uske baat me tumse nahi mila. uske baat jab tumara photo jo mera friendne beja, tabi mene decide kardhiya, tumareliye sab kuch karneki aur us drama keliye bhi ''
madhu...'' 😲 ... ye bhi muje yaad nahi hai. ''... ''toh ye sab tum sirf aur sirf mereliye kiye the??!! 😃 ''
raja...'' ha ''
madhu... '' 😃 😳 😳''
raja...''is hazi keliye bhi 😳''
madhu...''tum mereliye ithna kuch kiye ho, soche ho, par mene tum par chilaya aur datta bhi. sorry'' says with her cute face
raja pulls her towards him by her waist ... ''sorry bolneki aur bhi tharike hai''
madhu ...''😳 😳 ... koyi ajayenge''
raja,...''arre ... ab tak dhusro ka parva nahi hai. abhi ajanak... aayenge toh bhi kiya. biwi ho tu meri, woh bhi dho shaadi ki. me kuch bhi kar saktha hoon 😳 😉''
madhu ... ''😳 😳''
raja ...''jab me raju jaisa nadak kar raha tha, jab bhi me tume hug kartha tha, muje bahut difficult hotha hai apne appko control karne me. ab mujse nahi hoga. '' ... kisses her
madhu... ''☺️ ☺️ ''
raja... ''madhu ... i love you ''
madhu... '' i love you too 😳''... ''waise, ithna drama huva hai, ithna kuch me nahi janthi... tumara naam sach me kiya hai??!! raj kumar, raju, raja ... kiya hai ??!!''
raja ...'' 😆 ... RISHAB ''


... subam ...
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hey guys, how is it ??!! 😃 liked??!!
leave you comments ... see you then


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Edited by kajal99 - 10 years ago
varshajoshi17 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
I first time read ur imagination nd its preety good yar y dont u start writing story
karamukku thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Nice story... Waiting for continuation ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Nice story Kajal
Both Bituji and Raja planned this to save Madhu
Continue waiting for Madhu to react
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Wow wow awesome start
Waiting for next update
I want that stupid cvs to see ur stories
So that they can learn to write stories 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
FANTASTIC...Why couldn't stupid CVs think of this...this would have made Bittuji's character more credible...and a beautiful
start for Rajbala...not to forget Madhu getting full justice for the
wrongs done to her parents and all the trouble she and dadi
went through...Keep writing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!! New story!!
Kajal this Rajbala's story is amazing! Kash CV's bhi wo crap track use nahi karte to, we could get another unique couple Rajbala! But they spoiled everything! Rishbala ki to unhe end mai yaad aaye! waha bhi RK ke character ko spoil karne ka mauka nahi choda!

Waiting for the another part!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
completed
in 1st page 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
thanks for all your replies guys 😃
read the second part too and leave your comments
will be back in few mins.

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