short story on season 2 - Page 2

Beautiful ending

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

I first time read ur imagination nd its preety good yar y dont u start writing story

thank you for your comment 😃
im not very good in writing stories and lazy too. but will try if i get chance

Originally posted by: karamukku

Nice story... Waiting for continuation ...

thank you dear 😃
now i completed ... just check in the first page

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri

Nice story Kajal

Both Bituji and Raja planned this to save Madhu

Continue waiting for Madhu to react

thank you yaar

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri

Beautiful ending

I loved Raja's name to be Rishab

Madhu become so bold in the 2 part

She is warning Raja

And their first meeting

Everything scene is so beautifully written

thanks 😃
me too wanted raja's name to be rishab in the show. but we didnt get
im happy you enjoyed it

Wow kajal it was awesome much better than shown in the show

Originally posted by: bevi-najim

Wow wow awesome start

Waiting for next update

I want that stupid cvs to see ur stories

So that they can learn to write stories😆

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Originally posted by: rima4ever

congo for new story

thanks dia

Originally posted by: rima4ever

nice start

thanks 😃

Originally posted by: rima4ever

continue soon

done dear. check if you get time

Originally posted by: anitarani

FANTASTIC...Why couldn't stupid CVs think of this...this would have made Bittuji's character more credible...and a beautiful

start for Rajbala...not to forget Madhu getting full justice for the

wrongs done to her parents and all the trouble she and dadi

went through...Keep writing...

thank you sooo much dear 😃
im very glad that you liked it
yes, cvs lost their mind

Originally posted by: PRATHA1

WOW!! New story!!
Kajal this Rajbala's story is amazing! Kash CV's bhi wo crap track use nahi karte to, we could get another unique couple Rajbala! But they spoiled everything! Rishbala ki to unhe end mai yaad aaye! waha bhi RK ke character ko spoil karne ka mauka nahi choda!
Waiting for the another part!

Originally posted by: PRATHA1

Nice update!
Omg! Madhu's possessiveness...she is true daughter of RK! Finally she realized her true love! So raja loved her first sight, that's why he agree to marry with her! Flashback story is nicely written!
At end...Rishab sang Madhubala

thank you sooo much dear 😃
cvs didnt do well and spoiled everyhitng
yup, madhu is very possessive 😉 and raja/rishab is too fast
thanks dear once again 😃😳