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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
I have so unresed my post on page 2. I recommend for you all to read it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Kavya what made you pen down a horror..
your writing is fabulous no doubts but the story was messy...
why did the ghost take RK'S form why was Madhu killed?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Di, m confused
I din't get anything.

Can you plz give us a sequel which will clear everything?
Whether the house is haunted or Madhu is dead or RK is a vampire🤣 Whatever it is.
Plz give us a sequel.
Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg finally my instinct told me right that it was going to be a very different one. While starting to read, i thought RK wasgoing to ditch her or he is with her for some Revenge, but then i convinced myself, that kavya had already taken that in the surprise os package, but everything sounded differently, lock got open when she said his name, from there i suspected there's something fishy.

U know what, sterday night i was alone when i read that story, if u would have given a very ninute clue saying its goibg yo be this genre, i would havekept it for today, after reading the endm i was kind of sweating, i just wiped it, disconnected net and went to sleep, but i was not able to. Then i watched a commercial movie to forget this and sleep. Sis 😡

My hubby would be laugjing hearing this, anways thats the reason for late comment. Seriously sis, certain tjings strike me now, thst the house might be haunted, thats why notjing happened the pre ious day to madhu and RK might be what, ghost uhhh, ehile reading, i was expecting his fang to come out and guessed him to be a vampire. Ok now off to read beats, because of this story, i missed to read it sterday.

Anways we definitely need a sequel to get clear with this story, as we want to know the original version apart from our assumptions.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Ni33


Okay, I have read the OS Di. All I can say is... What a masterpiece. 👏👏Truly a masterpiece.

A true horrorstory.😆You know what I think, I have told you. 😆Hilarious. 😆I think Stephen King is so going to snatch this idea from you Di. So protect it somehow before hedoes so.😆People if you don't know who Stephen King is use Google Baba. He won't fail you there. He was good to me today.🤣He helped me with my paper.🤣

But I literally rofled for this. 😆At first I thought okay, a romance story. Later it was okay, we got a hacker here.🤣Someone like Ullu Sullu Sullu or Rohan who secretly loved and admired Madhu and wanted to frighten and separated her from RK. Well mission accomplished and a lot more happened.🤣

I have read the comments for the OS, and actually I don't get what is so confusing.😆It all made sense to me. But then again, one insane person understands another.🤣But honestly all I thought was either it was Ullu Sullu Sullu or Rohan that murdered Madhu. Yes people Madhu is dead. A fresh blood drenched eyeball with a nerve cord still attached to it rolled on the floor reaching RK's feet. The ghost couldn't chew the eyeball up so he spat it out rolling itto RK.🤣Thinking they would play with her eyeballs instead of marbles. 🤣Ormaking sure that RK could see the eyes from his beloved one last time before finding her dismantled bodyparts all over the flat.🤣Yes, I know how it could be confusing, Di never wrote it was Madhu's eyeball or if it was a real one for that fact. But given the impression RK had one could guess it was her eyeball. How many people has eyes like Madhu?😆

Hey maybe, they were going to use her eyeballs as softballs and her arms or legs as a bat for playing cricket.🤣


Okay, lets count all the facts given to us. And decide whether Madhu is alive or not. I assume she got killed, and was hoping RK being killed as well.🤣


RK teased Madhu at work, she wanted him to compensate her somehow, He sent a mail consisting a video of the previous night's birthday celebration of a minor important person right now.😆She opened it and saw a mp3 file, instead of a mp4. Madhu couldn't resist the temptation and listened to the mp3.And eventually she met a person that obviously wasn't RK. Cause Madhu would recognise RK voice in an instance and it wasn't his voice, it was someone else. Ergo my previous and soon repeated point, it was someone else.


In all of this I remembered a moment fromthe Ring. If you thought Annabelle was scary, you haven't seen anything yet. 😆Annabelle can't be compared with this movie. 😆But I later scratched that thought, thinking it was a hacker (Sultan or Rohan) trying to scare Madhu. Mission accomplished. When things got out of hand, then my thoughts returned to the Ring, a ghost. But since the person could grip Madhu, and have seeing so many poltergeist movies, I can easily tell you. Yes it is possible for them to do so and talk. But since Madhu tried to decipher his wicked face, meaning it wasn't a ghost but something like Phantom of the Opera thing.And yes this one was living in the basement in Madhu's building much like the Phantom of the Opera in Paris. 😆Alsoa living human being can't see a poltergeist. Only a poltergeist or dead person sees a poltergeist. Once upon a time I liked reading Phantom of the Opera, but now looking at the book I found it boring. Just because I amsick of reading.🤣When it comes to horror movies, the Ring, both the Gremlins (cute little monsters😛), all the Scream movies, Ghostbusters, Halloween, different versions of Carrie, Leprechaun, theChucky movies(not the latest one) and believe methe list goes on. I am so not going to bring up those awful horror movies that HW actually thought they could scare people. Even Casper was more frightening than them.😆Well you Catch my drift. That guy who impersonated RK, was very much alive and killed Madhu.



Now a little message for certain people. You know who you are.


A message for all of those who didn't like the story.Let mepresent one easy peasy solution for you. Just simply don't readthe OSor if you have read it,just forget you've even read it. 😆Don't you dare send PMs to my big sister, trying to discourage her and degrade her writing abilites. Let me just make myself clear on ONE point. If you aren't a writer and don't know how a writer takes out and shows her or his creativity, then don't you dare comment negatively on a story. I admit there are something called constructive critism, but what you did isnt't any of it. Sending PMs and post comments like previous stated aren't appreciated and won't be tolerated. I will never accept that. If you like I welcome you to do that on my story all you like and attac me all you like. I havetwo very constructivedefending mecanisms that works like a charm. 😈And that have never failed me once. But don't you dare do something like that on other stories.Here's a friendly advice from me to you.Keep those commentsfor yourself. Comments like that aren't appreciated. I admit I mock characters, stories and at some occasions even the writer and their thought process. But I only do that on a funny way, never ever trying to discourage someone from writing a story or a genre. I even try to give some suggestions. And I always take permission from a writer before doing any of it. I never do it if I haven't got permission from the writer. And they know when Iwrite whateverit isI mean no harm whatsoever. I only do that in order to make the writer and others laugh. I repeat. I will never tolerate someone messing with someone else. Especially one of my sisters. If someone have something against any ofmy sisters you have come across the wrong person to mess with.

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<strong>And this OS is supposed to be a horror OS. So what do you expect? I assume you haven't read any Stephen King books, Bram Stoker's Dracula or seen any horror movies. Cause if you haveread or seen any of them, then you wouldn't have done what you did. Maybe you have, but it still doesn't give you the right for what you did. You can not expect that a writer writes the same genre all the time. How do you expect that a person and their writing abilites evolves, by discouraging them and degrading them. Do you honestly think that somebody did that to Michelangelo while painting the Sistine Chapel ceiling or Leonardo DaVinci while making one of his inventions and paintings. If you haven't heard any of them then I have a couple more examples for you. Do you think that someone told Arjit Singh that he shouldn't sing. Ranbir Kapoor, Deepika Padukone, SRK, Salman Khan, Katarina Kaif or any other actor and actress that they shouldn't act. Yes probably, mostly by jealous people who wanted to be in their position. But that doesn't rectify what you did. You should all be lucky I wasn't here when the fanwars was contucted. Cause I would have made you feel ashamed of yourselves for insulting each other and disregarding other people feelings. The actors are humans too,very much like this writer,and have nothing to do with the characters of the shows. Those are pure fictional much like this story. They follow the script that is given to them, cause it's their job to do so. The one who wrote those scripts and thought of the tracks in MB should have been critized, IN A CIVIL WAY NOT BY CURSING OR USING OTHER FOUL LANGUAGE. Thus the people who has a favorite actor or actresses shouldn't be attaced. Now I can perfectly make sense of all those sportsevents that had ended in an abrupt way, with of course damages.It only takes one second, one action and then everything is changed. So mind your language and remember your manners. Cause once a deed is done, there is no way to rewind the clock and take it back.You will only live with regret and that will eat you from the inside. So here's anotheradvice from me. THINK BEFORE YOU ACT!



Now back to humor. The american singer Kesha has a song called You better move, you better dance, that I feel is appropiate;


<div align="center">It's going down, I'm yelling timber
You better move, you better dance
Let's make a night you won't remember
I'll be the one you won't forget
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By the way, I am the one yelling timber and I am not the onegoing down.😆



Damn Nina! I think this is the longest comment you have written 🤣
I'm dying of laughter 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
I did not get what happens in the end, is Madhu dead?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
awesome story loved it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Thanks for writing and sharing. 😊
Edited by silent.desire - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
its really confusing.. plz make it clear...whether madhu is dead or not! One thing I got that the RK she saw was a ghost. But why did he murder him? And how a normal flat became haunted suddenly?? Or it was the effect of the media file?? The ghost came through it or what?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Di... Welcome back. ..
This os is truly confusing for others but not me...😆
I think Madhu is dead...Poor soul..
My poor soul Rk he started panicking like me and started sweating also like me after seeing the eyeball and fresh blood😆 but I would like to see a real eyeball lol..😆
I would like to know was it a ghost or a vampire which killed Madhu. ..lol..
If it was ghost then I'm really very scared of them and if it is a vampire then I would have been drooling on it even though it is harmful to me🤣🤣🤣
Do clear my confusion di whether it is a ghost or a vampire😆
I loved the mp3 audio clip ...😃
By the I loved this os through out...😊
Tfs for pm. ..
Edited by Shriya.bk - 10 years ago

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