RiMa OS- The Message Delivered! Last Part- Page 9 - Page 3

It's was totally weird. U scared me. Hw dud u gt dis thought in d first place?

I didn't understand the last part of the story..is madhu dead..who has sent the msg...

My first reaction: What the f*** 🤣
Is Madhu dead? Is the flat haunted? So many questions...
That was creepy, but I still loved it like mad
Awesome kavya di...do write more like this 👏
Or even continue this one...because I want to know how it ends 😉

At first I thought that you were hinting at a similar scene from the movie "Ishq" with Aamir Khan, juhi Chawla, Kajol, and Ajay Devgan

There was one scene where Juhi is alone in a house and Aamir comes and scared her...similar to your story...and it all turned out to be a prank 😆

confusing os..
bt still nic update
pls continue this...dont end here

OOohhh ... spooky! Did Madhu die or did she kill the intruder? Can we get a Part 2 please?

Hey please update next part
It so confusing I can't understand it.

1st congrates dear. Story was awesome 👏 more scary one.

End is Confussinggg...Who killed madhu????? What's in the Audio message????
The way she reacted to voice of in email...it's like she know that person...that why she afraid?????
It's Confussing 4 me...

Sorry sis but let me rant first and then make a comment on ur OS

Okay so I had a read trough the comments and I totally agree with Ni..whatthe hell r some of u readers even thinking? !?! Agreed it is a bit confusing but no need to tell her that ut is nit good!! Especially if u r not a writer urself!! Coming up with ideas itself is hard and every writer gets this one awesome idea which is unusual which they think would be amazing but sometimes it just doesn't turn out like that...I have a story like that...and I think everyone should! If sis is trying to get out of her comfort zone then as a reader it is ur duty to tell us hw to improve it and incourage us nd not tell us that it is not good because that is what will put us off from writing which we do for u lot to be entertained. .its not like we all haven't got anything better to do..we r busy people but still we write for u lot!! Start appreciating!! Sometimes we r not able to meet those writting standards we have set for ourselves but seriously that gives u NO absolute right something like that. Criticism is welcome but only if done in a professional and good manner!!

Alright sis coming to ur awesome piece of work 😆 To be honest I actually like it ..it is unusual and love u for trying this..kinda reminds me of my superhero story 🤣
At first I was like ahh another love story...well lets see the plot for this one...then I hot to the mp3 and mp4 part and I was like who cares?! Its just a formart...thn when the audio came in I first thought rk had sent her a voice recording of them both at the party 😉 and then when the screams were heard I thought its like a murder or some ghostly thing which only madhu would be able to listen to...and tgen came the weird and classic man with the voice of a psychopath...my instant thought...THE RING! at that moment I knew murder is here!!! However when u mentioned RK I thought it might be a prank agin which then just got weird...so no comments on that...
So my thought is that that psycho rk is a shapeshiffter type who goes killing people with the face of their loved ones??
U knw I would love to lnw what u were actually thinking of that creature to be whilst writing this...

Alright I get it up to the eyeball part which is gross!! But the email thingy has me confused totally! I don't think this os needs a part 2 but I tjink u need to add a bit more detail so that we get it or understand ur thought progress...